高考英语写作模拟专题训练50题含参考答案11240.pdf

试卷第 1 页，共 124 页 高考英语写作模拟专题训练 50 题含参考答案 学校:_姓名：_班级：_考号：_ 一、读后续写 1阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Carlos woke up late that Saturday.It was his birthday.As he opened his eyes,he could hear the sounds from the street coming through his open window.He could hear people talking loudly.He heard kids playing and yelling(大喊).There was music coming from someone standing on the corner.He heard the cars,buses and motorbikes running past his apartment.These were all the normal sounds he heard every day,but something was wrong.When he listened for the sounds that normally came from his apartment,everything was silent.He did not hear his mother cooking in the kitchen.She always made a big breakfast on Saturdays.He did not hear his sister Maria jumping up and down or fighting with their brother Jose.What was wrong?The house was completely silent.The only noise was coming from outside his window.Carlos looked at the clock across the room.It said ten oclock.Something was very wrong!Carlos quickly got up and got dressed.He looked out of the window and saw everyone walking and talking.That was all normal.What was not normal was how quiet it was inside of his apartment.Carlos went slowly to the door and listened,but did not hear anything.He opened the door to his room a little and looked around.He looked down the hallway(门厅)toward the living room.He did not see anything.He was nervous and scared,wondering,“What is going on?”Slowly he walked out of his room and into the hallway.His stomach was making noise since he was so hungry.He started toward the kitchen.His feet moved slowly as he walked,not knowing what to expect.“Mom?Jose?Maria?Where are you?”he called out,but no one answered.“Where is everyone?”he thought to himself.Just then,Carlos thought he heard a noise coming from the kitchen.It sounded like someone was there.He moved slowly toward the kitchen doorway,and thought to himself,“Whats going on?Why is everything so quiet?Who is in the kitchen?”注意：（1）所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；（2）至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；（3）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；试卷第 2 页，共 124 页（4）续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：He got to the kitchen door and looked inside._ Paragraph 2：Sitting in the middle of the kitchen table was a small box._【答案】Paragraph 1：He got to the kitchen door and looked inside.To his surprise,he saw his family were there.He was more surprised when he heard,“Happy birthday to you.Happy birthday to you！”His parents,his brother,his sister,and his grandparents were in the kitchen singing“Happy Birthday”to him.Carlos just stood in the doorway of the kitchen not knowing what to say or do.He was totally surprised.Paragraph 2：Sitting in the middle of the kitchen table was a small box.Carlos walked over to the table and slowly opened it.Inside he found some keys.His mother told him to look out of the window.Carlos did and saw a yellow motorbike below the stairs.Carlos was unable to speak.He ran down the stairs as fast as he could.The motorbike was not new,but it was his！Carlos rode his bike up and down the street.The sound of the motor on his bike was sweet music to his ears.He had all day to hear it.【解析】【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了 Carlos 星期六那天起床很晚，那天是他的生日，但是周围一切都是静悄悄的，家人也不见踪迹，这一切都令 Carlos 觉得事情非常不对劲和紧张害怕。来到厨房 Carlos 惊呆了，一家人都在向他庆祝生日，桌子中间有一个小盒子装着他的礼物一辆黄色的摩托车的钥匙。【详解】1.段落续写：试卷第 3 页，共 124 页.由第一段首句内容“他走到厨房门口往里看。”可知，第一段可描写来到厨房 Carlos惊呆了，一家人都在向他庆祝生日。.由第二段首句内容“在厨房的桌子中间有一个小盒子。”可知，第二段可描写 Carlos拆开桌子中间的小盒子，拿到了他的礼物一辆黄色的摩托车的钥匙。2.续写线索：来到厨房Carlos 惊呆家人庆祝拆开礼物拿到钥匙Carlos 欢喜 3.词汇激活 行为类.走到桌子旁边：walked over to the table/went to the table/walked up to the table.不能做某事：be unable to do sth./can not do sth./fail to do sth.情绪类.惊讶：surprised/shocked/amazed.动听的：sweet/fair-sounding/nice/wonderful/pleasant/beautiful【点睛】高分句型 1.He was more surprised when he heard,“Happy birthday to you.Happy birthday to you!”（运用了由 when 引导的时间状语从句）高分句型 1.Carlos just stood in the doorway of the kitchen not knowing what to say or do.He was totally surprised.（运用了现在分词作状语，和“what+to do”结构作宾语）2 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。I was a writer,but yesterday the boss told me he decided to fire me.That was wrong,because I created many great articles for our company.I didnt want to let the news upset my children,so I invited my wife to a restaurant we often went to.I walked into the restaurant,surprised by how empty it was.Not too long after,I saw Carrie walk in.“Where are the kids?”I asked.At Mothers.Carrie said.So what did you want to tell me?she asked curiously.Well when I tell you,you cant break down.I said.She nodded hesitantly.“Well,.my boss said.he would fire me if I couldnt come up with a good story.”What!Youve been working there for 5 years since your best friend Jack left there.Although later Jack tried to invite you to work with him,you refused.You could basically run the place!”She shouted.I know,I know.”How can he just fire you like Jack?”She looked at me with worry in her eyes.What about the kids?How will we pay for the house?How will we.I cut her words off and promised.Ill find a new job.Any job will do as long as it pays.试卷第 4 页，共 124 页 Suddenly a man across the diner said,My friend is looking for a new writer.someone that can really tell and show the story.”Where can I find him?”I asked.Hes got a shop down the street with a big yellow sign on the top.he says.Thank you so much!Carrie said thankfully as we left the restaurant.“There!”Carrie pointed to a big yellow sign reading,The Daily Dispatch.Ive heard about this place!”I said turning to Carrie.t4This is the worst newspaper company here!”I complained.“Well I guess I should go in for an interview.A bad job is better than none.I sighed.George,I dont want you to do something you hate.“Well at least I can make some money if I have a job.said.注意：1.续写词数应为 150 左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。As I stepped in the door,the strong smell of ink hit me right in the face._ As I sat down in a shabby（破旧的）chair,I heard a breaking sound._【答案】One possible version:Paragraph 1:As I stepped in the door,the strong smell of ink hit me right in the face.“Hello!What can I do for you?”a man inside asked.“Hello.Im looking for a job.”I said as we shook hands.“Wait a minute.I will get the boss.”He said quickly.As I looked around,I could tell this place needed some serious arranging.The desks were covered with dust with some old computers on it.The printer looked like it was about to give out,some old newspaper piled in 试卷第 5 页，共 124 页 the corners.Paragraph 2:As I sat down in a shabby(破旧的)chair,I heard a breaking sound.Before I knew it,I was on the floor.I quickly stood up as the boss entered the room.I looked up and we were both surprised.“Jack!”“George!”Next,Jack told me he had started the company himself but he didnt manage it well without outstanding writers and now he extremely needed a man like me.That evening,Jack,Carrie,my children and I had a great meal in that restaurant.Fortunately,I got a job.【解析】【分析】本文以中心事件为线索展开，讲述了作者失业后又重新找到作家职业的经历。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“我一跨进房门，一股浓烈的墨水味迎面扑来。”可知，第一段可描写作者到面试地点的所见。由第二段首句内容“当我坐在破旧的椅子上,我听到一个破碎的声音。”可知，第二段可描写作者偶遇熟识竟然是急需有才华作家的老板。2.续写线索：到面试地点杂乱的办公地出乎意料对方急需才华作家找到工作全家饭店庆祝 3.词汇激活 行为类 得知：learn/tell 看起来像：seem/look like 管理：operate/manage 情绪类 惊讶：surprised/amazed【点睛】高分句型 1As I looked around,I could tell this place needed some serious arranging.(运用了 as 引导的时间状语从句)高分句型 2Next,Jack told me he had started the company himself but he didnt manage it well without outstanding writers and now he extremely needed a man like me.(运用了省略了 that 引导的宾语从句)试卷第 6 页，共 124 页 3阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。We have that one person in our life who constantly tries to make us a better person.That person sacrifices his time and energy for the pursuit to put us in the right path and not let us wander away into dangerous waters.I have had the experience of having such a person who managed to change my life for better.I picked up the habit of smoking right after my high school.From wanting to have first-time experience with holding a cigarette,I started developing a minor addiction towards it.In company with friends who smoked,I started smoking regularly and became heavily addicted to smoking.I used to secretly smoke in the house so that my parents wouldnt find out.There were days when I used to smoke a full packet of cigarettes,which changed my life.I was proud of my brother,but he was also a chain-smoker and had started suffering lung problems because of the heavy smoking.He quit smoking because of the regular chest pains and other complications which started developing.Since he faced a lot of health problems,he started understanding the bad impacts of smoking.He knew I had become badly addicted to smoking.Since he was very close to me and loved me,he started asking me to quit smoking.I never listened to him.He used to hide my packet of cigarettes or throw them in the bin.Despite his regular pains and problems,he made it his aim to make me quit smoking.However,on one particular day he complained of severe chest pains so we rushed him to the nearby hospital.His condition worsened in the hospital and the next day,he was declared dead.We were in great shock and the whole thing seemed unbelievable.I missed my brother a lot and was frequently reminded of his repeated warning to me to quit smoking.注意:1.续写词数应为 150 左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。I saw how he lost his life because of smoking._ My brothers words rang in my ears every day._试卷第 7 页，共 124 页 _【答案】Paragraph1:I saw how he lost his life because of smoking.He had done too much harm to his body before the the doctors could do anything.I was determined to quit smoking.I remembered my brothers repeated warning whenever I wanted to smoke.I turned away from the company with friends who used to smoke every day and influenced me to smoke as well.I admitted the truth in front of my parents and promised to never smoke again.Though my parents were filled with pain after hearing the news,they were happy that I was honest with them.Paragraph 2:My brothers words rang in my ears every day.His love reminded me every day.Just within two months,I had almost quit smoking cigarettes.My parents helped me gain confidence too.The loss of my brother changed my life completely.I took on a new look and quit the bad habit.Though my brother is no more with me,I still remember him today and feel proud of what he did for me.【解析】【分析】本文以戒烟为线索展开，讲述了作者高中毕业后染上了吸烟的习惯而作者的哥哥也是一位烟瘾很重的人，哥哥由于吸烟过多导致他的肺部开始出现问题，他经常胸疼并开始出现并发症。作者的哥哥知道作者也染上烟瘾后开始劝作者戒烟，作者刚开始没有听从哥哥的劝告。有一天作者的哥哥胸疼的厉害被送往医院，由于病情恶化在医院死亡。哥哥的去世使作者决心戒烟，作者主动向父母承认吸烟并保证再也不抽烟了。作者最后取得戒烟的成功并为他哥哥为他所做的事感到自豪。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“我看到他是如何因为吸烟而失去生命的。”可知，第一段可描写作者决心戒烟的经过。由第二段首句内容“我哥哥的话每天都在我耳边回响。”可知，第二段可描写作者成功戒掉了烟。2.续写线索：决心戒烟向父母承认并保证父母感到高兴获得信心改掉坏习惯感到自豪 3.词汇激活 试卷第 8 页，共 124 页 行为类.对有害：do harm to/be harmful to/be bad for.决心做某事：be determined to do/decide to do.放弃做：quit doing sth./give up doing sth.充满：be filled with/be full of 连词类 表示让步：though/although/as/while【点睛】高分句型 1.I turned away from the company with friends who used to smoke every day and influenced me to smoke as well.(由关系代词 who 引导的定语从句)高分句型 2.Though my parents were filled with pain after hearing the news,they were happy that I was honest with them.(由连词Though引导的让步状语从句和that引导的宾语从句)高分句型 3.Though my brother is no more with me,I still remember him today and feel proud of what he did for me.(由连词 Though 引导的让步状语从句和 what 引导的宾语从句)4 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Inokid Ladies College has brought success to many girls over the years.Last year,there were two exceptional students.They.were called Pinksha and Redsha.Pinksha was popular and admired by everyone.Her beauty was classic.She bought herself clothes and accessories(配饰)from the best shopping malls.However,her interest had always been in what is skin-deep.Books and college did not exist in her mind.Redsha,on the contrary,was a brainy girl from a small village.She was always lost in her own thoughts about worldly matters but still cared about her studies,having excellent marks.She had a kind heart,but she had only a few friends.She was always teased about her average looks and round figure but she never bothered.Mr.Yellowdish,their class teacher,gave an unexpected test during their class session.Redsha calmed reached for her pencil and answered all the questions with confidence.On that day,Pinksha rushed to the class.She had woken up late again due to attending a party in the previous night.She sat through the test without answering any questions on the examination sheets.Ten days later,Mr.Yellowdish walked into the class with a stern(严肃的)expression.试卷第 9 页，共 124 页 Redsha was nervously thinking of her mark.She prayed hard for a high mark despite her hard work.Pinksha was late again!This time Mr.Yellowdish did not go easy on her.He not only criticized Pinksha in front of the whole class,but also announced her failed for the test.Two days later,Mr.Yellowdish posted the students marks on the colleges bulletin board(布告栏).Redsha was shocked to see her mark.It was a fail.She was confused and sad.She could not wait until lunchtime to meet Mr.Yellowdish.As she was walking sadly back to the class,Pinksha said,“Now you know how it fails to fail.”注意：1.续写词数应为 150 左右：2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。At lunch,Redsha calmed herself and met Mr.Yellowdish._ Mr.Yellowdish was angry at what he saw on the monitoring video._【答案】At lunch,Redsha calmed herself and met Mr.Yellowdish.She explained her situation and requested to recheck her paper.Mr.Yellowdish was sympathetic and found it strange since he knew that Redsha was a brainy girl.He agreed to her request.Mr.Yellowdish decided to look into the matter deeply.He scanned through the test papers,recounted Redshas mark and even cleaned up his messy desk so that he could think clearly.While he was cleaning,he had a great idea.He hurried to the security office to see the monitoring video.Mr.Yelowdish was angry at what he saw on the monitoring video.It was Pinksha who stepped quietly into his office the day before.On the video,he saw how she erased Redshas answers on the examination sheet.Mr.Yellowdish was angry!Then everyone in the class knew Pinkshas bad behavior and was disgusted at the way she spoiled Redshas reputation.Pinksha felt very ashamed of herself and learned that a kind heart is more important than a 试卷第 10 页，共 124 页 striking appearance.【解析】【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了 Inokid 女子学院的两名女生Pinksha 和 Redsha。Pinksha 非常漂亮，平时只关注衣服和配饰，不关心学业；Redsha，相貌普通，但是心地善良，学习努力。一次 Yellowdish 老师课上进行了一次测试，Redsha 认真完成答题，而 Pinksha 起晚迟到，没有答题。后来，Pinksha 再次迟到，老师直接宣布她成绩不合格。但是 Redsha 在公布成绩的公告牌上看到自己的成绩也是不合格，她很困惑和难过。【详解】1.段落续写：.由第一段首句内容“午餐时，Redsha 冷静下来，见到了 Yellowdish 先生。”可知，第一段可描写 Redsha 要求 Yellowdish 先生再检查一下她的试卷，Yellowdish 先生调查此事。.由第二段首句内容“Yelowdish 先生对监控视频上的内容感到愤怒。”可知，第二段可描写 Yelowdish 先生通过监控视频搞清楚事情的原由。2.续写线索：Redsha 要求重查她的论文Yelowdish 深入调查查看监控发现Pinksha 擦掉答案大家都很愤怒Pinksha 羞愧 3.词汇激活 行为类.要求：request/demand/require/ask.调查：look into/inquire into/investigate/examine.擦掉：erase/rub away/wipe 情绪类.愤怒：be angry/annoyed/mad .羞愧：feel very ashamed/feel a sense of shame 【点睛】高分句型 1.Mr.Yellowdish was sympathetic and found it strange since he knew that Redsha was a brainy girl.(since 引导原因状语从句；that 引导宾语从句作 knew 的宾语