高中英语作文写作模拟训练题20题(含例文解析)10257.pdf
试卷第 1 页，共 24 页 高中英语作文模拟训练题 20 题(含例文解析)学校:_姓名：_班级：_考号：_ 一、读后续写 1阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。It was dark,cold and raining on December 24.James left his office and walked slowly across the street to the parking place.He was very tired.He took out his car key and put down his umbrella.He put the key into the lock and turned it.Nothing happened.The door would not open.Then James realised that it was the wrong car.His car was red,but this one was dark blue.“Oh dear!I must have parked in a different place this morning,”thought he.Putting up his umbrella,he set off to look for his car.The rain poured down and the evening got colder and colder.Having walked round all the side streets,James didnt find his car.He was exhausted and angry.“Someone must have stolen my car,”he thought.“Now I shall have to go to the police station and report it.”The policeman there was very helpful.He wrote down a description of James car and then took his address and telephone number.As James was leaving,the policeman wished him a merry Christmas.“Christmas!”thought James.“Oh no!Ive forgotten all about Christmas.I havent bought my wife a present and now all the shops are shut.What shall I do?”When waiting for the bus,he got wetter and more miserable(难受的).He had no umbrella and the rain flowed down into his collar.He felt like bursting into tears.When James got home,he found his wife standing on a chair and looking for something in a very high cupboard.“What are you doing,Jessica?”he asked.“The big gold star for the Christmas tree,”Jessica replied.“Just a moment.Ill go into the garage(车库)and fetch the stepladder(梯子)for you,”said James.When James saw.the well-decorated Christmas tree and lots of presents under it,he felt even more unhappy.“What a lovely tree!”he thought as he went downstairs,“I havent even got one present for Jessica.Ive lost my car and Im completely wet.I must have lost my umbrella,too.”注意：1.续写词数应为 150 左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。As James opened the garage door,he spotted something,frozen in amazement.试卷第 2 页，共 24 页 _ Pleased to know his car was there,James entered the room with the present._【答案】As James opened the garage door,he spotted something,frozen in amazement.Inside the garage was his red car.He suddenly remembered that it wouldnt start this morning so he just took a taxi to work.James was overjoyed.He was just about to rush upstairs and tell Jessica the good news when he heard,“Meow!Meow!”He looked inside the car and there sat a small kitten with pointed ears and green eyes.James eyes were glued to the kitten for a few minutes and a brilliant idea struck him.“This is for Jessica.”He picked the kitten up.Pleased to know his car was there,James entered the room with the present.“This is your present,”said to Jessica happily.“Oh,thank you,darling.Ive always wanted a kitten,”her face lit up.Just then the telephone rang.It was the policeman.James was told that his car hadnt been found but his umbrella was got in the police station.Putting the phone down,James gazed at Jessica,joy welling up inside him.Bathed in the warm Christmas atmosphere,James walked over to Jessica and hugged her tightly.【解析】【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了主人公 James 在圣诞节的时候认为自己的车丢了，心情变得沮丧，没有给家人买圣诞礼物，天下着雨，雨伞也丢了，心情非常糟糕，浑身湿透的回到家里，后来发现车在车库里，警察也找到了丢失的伞，心情变好的故事。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“詹姆斯打开车库门，发现了什么东西，惊讶地僵住了。”可知，第一段可描写 James 发现自己的车在家里，也找到了给妻子的礼物，以及他的心情变化。由第二段首句内容“詹姆斯很高兴知道他的车就在那里，他带着礼物进了房间。”可知，第二段可描写 James 愉快地和妻子在一起，警察找到了雨伞，James 非常高兴，沐试卷第 3 页，共 24 页 浴在圣诞节温暖的气氛中。2.续写线索：找到了车发现了小猫给妻子送礼物警察找到了雨伞高兴起来 3.词汇激活 行为类 冲上楼：rush upstairs/dash upstairs/go upstairs hurriedly.突然想起：strike/occur to/hit 情绪类.高兴：overjoyed/very delighted/extremely happy【点睛】高分句型 1.He suddenly remembered that it wouldnt start this morning so he just took a taxi to work.（运用了 that 引导宾语从句，so 连接并列句式）高分句型 2.Putting the phone down,James gazed at Jessica,joy welling up inside him.（运用了现在分词作状语，独立主格结构）高分句型 3.Bathed in the warm Christmas atmosphere,James walked over to Jessica and hugged her tightly.（运用了过去分词作状语）2阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。The old man turned away sadly as his eyes were filled with tears.“Poor Mr.Dev,”thought Indra sympathetically.Another day went past and there was still no sign of his family.Indra wondered how children could be so careless as to lose a parent like this.Indra recalled the day the old man was admitted to her ward.He was thin and weak.He could not produce his identity card but he claimed he remembered the number.The hospital tried to contact hig family using the phone number he offered but it was in vain.Mr.Dev was treated for a lung infection and was now recovering.Soon,it would be time for him to be discharged(出院).Where would he go then?He did not look strong enough to live independentiy.Indra thtew down the file she was holding as anger rose within her.“Whats the matter?”asked Poh,Indras colleague.“Im just upset about old Mr.Dev,”Indra replied.Poh nodded with understanding.As a more experienced nurse,she had seen many similar cases and learned to control her feelings.“Dont worry too much.The hospital has contacted the civil-administration department(民政部门)and offered the information about the missing man,Mr.Dev will be placed in an 试卷第 4 页，共 24 页 old folkshome if no one comes to pick him up.”Poh said,patting Indras arm comfortingly.Indra sighed.“I know.Its just that he eagerly expects his family to visit him.He cleans and tidies himself every morning and sits up to wait expectantly.You can see the eagerness in his eyes whenever the door opens.At the end offte day he goes to sleep with tears in his eyes.It makes me cry inside.”Poh shook her head sadly.“He needs a miracle(奇迹).”A few days later,the doctor confirmed that Mr.Dev was fit enough to be discharged.Indra was informed that an administrator had been waiting downstairs,ready to take Mr.Dev to an old folkshome.With a heavy heart,Indra helped Mr.Dev to get ready.注意:1.续写词数应为 150 左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。He was still a bit weak,so Indra rolled a wheelchair to bring him downstairs._“Papa!”,a shaking voice cried out from a middle-aged woman when the lift doors opened._【答案】He was still a bit weak,so Indra rolled a wheelchair to bring him downstairs.As always,the ward was neat and tidy,and the old fellows eyes of expectations were fixed on the door.“Time to go,Mr.Dev.”Indra said,helped him sit down and pushed the wheelchair into the lift carefully.Her eyes were misty when she saw how sad the old man looked.She bent over and wiped his tears gently with a handkerchief.“Everything would be fine,”she reassured him.Then the flashing light indicated they were arriving at the ground level.“Papa!”,a shaking voice cried out from a middle aged woman when the lift doors opened.She rushed forward and hugged the old man in the wheelchair.Both of them began to weep.Indra smiled through her tears.She later learnt that the daughter had just contacted the civil-administration department,where she got news about her missing father.Mr.Devs eager expeclation had been answered.It was the miracle she had prayed for.Indra left the scene of the reunion and went to look for the administrator.She was eager to share with him the bad 试卷第 5 页，共 24 页 news that his trip to collect Mr.Dev was a wasted one.【解析】【分析】本文以时间为线索展开，讲述了德夫老人住院一直都没有亲人找过来，在康复后要被送去养老院的最后时刻，女儿终于赶了过来，亲人团聚的故事【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“他还是有点虚弱，所以因陀罗推着轮椅带他下楼.”可知，第一段可描写因陀罗送老德夫先生下楼时的场景。由第二段首句内容“爸爸！”电梯门打开时，一位中年妇女用颤抖的声音喊道。”可知，第二段可描德夫老人的女儿在最后阶段赶来，得以和亲人团聚。2.续写线索：送老人下楼最后的期待女儿赶到亲人团聚急切分享 3.词汇激活 行为类 帮助：help/assist 推轮椅：push the wheelchair/roll the wheelchair 到达：arrive/get to/reach 情绪类 悲伤：sad/sorrowful 急切：be eager to do/be keen to do【点睛】高分句型 1.Her eyes were misty when she saw how sad the old man looked.（运用了when 引导的时间状语从句以及 how 引导的宾语从句）高分句型 2.She later learnt that the daughter had just contacted the civil-administration department,where she got news about her missing father.（运用了 that 引导的宾语从句以及 where 引导的非限制性定语从句）3阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。It was early spring and Nana was in the backyard with her grandchildren.Amy,Michael,and Justin were playing when Nana said,“Im going to start planting my garden.Who wants to help me?”“What are going to plant,Nana?”asked Amy.“I like big,yellow sunflowers.”试卷第 6 页，共 24 页“Im going to plant vegetables.That way we can have them to eat when they are ready,”said Nana.“How long does that take?”asked Michael.He liked vegetables sometimes,especially carrots.“It will take a few months before anything is ready to eat,”answered Nana.The children were surprised.“Months?Why would you do all that work and then have to wait so long?”asked Amy.“You should just go to the store and buy them.”“Patience,my sweeties!Dont you know food always tastes best when you grow it yourself?”replied Nana.“And if all of you come to help,it wont be too much work.”“Ill help you,Nana,”offered Justin.He put down the soccer ball and went to look at the gardening tools Nana had laid out.“What do we do first?”Michael and Amy came over to look,too.Nana taught Justin how to use a trowel(小铲子)to dig small rows of holes for the seeds.Next,Nana showed Amy how to pour the seeds into each hole.And it was Michaels job to cover up the holes with soil.Finally,Amy wrote the vegetable names on sticks that Justin pushed into the ground.“This way we can remember which vegetable seeds we have planted,”said Nana.When they had planted everything,the children took turns filling up the watering can so that Nana could make the soil nice and wet for the seeds to start to grow.“Now we just water them a little every day,and with some time and sunshine,well have some delicious things to eat in the summer,”said Nana.注意:1.续写词数应为 150 左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Whenever the grandchildren came to visit,they would dash into the garden._ Finally,Nana said it was time for the first harvest._ 试卷第 7 页，共 24 页【答案】Possible version1:Whenever the grandchildren came to visit,they would dash into the garden.Not surprisingly,they were going to see how the garden was growing.After watering the vegetables,they would remove the weeds that popped up around the plants and apply organic fertilizer under Nanas instruction if necessary.As time went by,the plants were growing taller and stronger.When they noticed the vegetables flowering and producing fruits,their eyes were sparkling like diamonds.Never had they looked forward to summer like this before.But they clearly knew that its worthwhile to wait for the inviting results.Finally,Nana said it was time for the first harvest.Hearing that,the children all jumped into the air and cheers filled the whole garden.Nana gave them each baskets and,together they gathered some of the cucumbers,carrots and tomatoes,which were turned into delicacies.“Who wants to help eat this fresh salad?”Nana asked.“Me!”everyone responded loudly.Tasting the salad,they thought nothing could be more delicious,because it was they who grew these vegetables.They all learned that many hands make light work and patience really pays off.Possible version 2:Whenever the grandchildren came to visit,they would dash into the garden.Eager to help grow the vegetables well,they first took turns to water the plants.Then Nana showed them which plants needed trimming or which needed tying up to grow tall and straight.Day after day,spring turned into summer and finally,the plants started revealing their colorful secrets.The children were thrilled to see the tomatoes turning red,the cucumbers hiding under the green leaves and the peppers growing bigger.Not until then did they realize that Nana was right-all they needed was patience.Finally,Nana said it was time for the first harvest.With baskets ready,Nana and the children started out on their business.Nana took them around the garden and picked some tomatoes,cucumbers,peppers and cabbages.Then for the following hour,they were busying making vegetable salad.The children helped wash the dirt off the food while Nana chopped up the vegetables.When Nana asked who wanted to try the fresh salad,everyone expressed their willingness excitedly.“OK.Amy,get the plates.Justin,get the water and cups,and Michael,get the forks.Lets celebrate the harvest!”【解析】【分析】试卷第 8 页，共 24 页 本文以奶奶和孙子们在后院一起种植蔬菜为线索展开，讲述了那年早春，娜娜和她的孙子们在后院，艾米、迈克尔和贾斯汀正在玩耍，奶奶提出要种植蔬菜，一开始孙子们建议奶奶去商店买，因为自己种植蔬菜要做那么多工作，然后还要等这么长时间，奶奶让孙子们耐心点，因为自己种的食物总是味道最好的，奶奶认为如果大家都来帮忙，工作也不会太多。孙子们听了都乐意来帮忙，奶奶给孙子们分了工，奶奶耐心教导，当他们把所有的东西都种好后，孩子们轮流往水罐里灌满水，这样奶奶就能把土壤弄湿，让种子开始生长。奶奶说只要每天给它们浇水，再加上一些时间和阳光，夏天就可以吃到美味的东西了。【详解】段落续写（以 version1 为例）：由第一段首句内容“每当孙子们来拜访时，他们都会冲进花园。”可知，第一段可描写孩子们怎样照顾这些植物们，以及看着蔬菜开花并结出果实时的兴奋心情。由第二段首句内容“最后，娜娜说是第一次收获的时候了。”可知，第二段可描写孩子们听到消息的喜悦之情，他们一起收集蔬菜，并把这些变成了美味佳肴，们认为没有什么比这更美味了，付出总有回报。续写线索：冲进花园看如何生长照顾花园开花结果高兴 词汇激活 行为类 冲进：dash into /storm in 除草：remove weeds/clean out weeds 注意：notice/note/find 情绪类：骄傲地：loudly/with pride 兴奋：jump into the air/be up in the air【点睛】高分句型 1.After watering the vegetables,they would remove the weeds that popped up around the plants and apply organic fertilizer under Nanas instruction if necessary.(由关系词that 引导的限制性定语从句)高分句型 2.Never had they looked forward to summer like this before.(否定词 never 提于句首的部分倒装句)高分句型 3.They all learned that many hands make light work and patience really pays off.(由连接词 that 引导的宾语从句作 learned 的宾语)试卷第 9 页，共 24 页 4阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。I could feel the excitement rising in me as I held the beautifully wrapped present in my hands.I fumbled(抚弄)with the string and then,unable to contain my curiosity any longer,I opened it.It was a shiny,brand new laptop.I had scored straight As for my O level examination and this was my reward.I had always envied my friends who were exchanging news about“chat rooms”,“instant messaging”and“e-mailing”,all of which I knew nothing about.Now I was going to find out.It started out simply enough.I was searching for some information online when I chanced upon a social networking site.Soon I became glued to my new-found electronic friend.I began to spend more and more time on YouTube and became trapped by Facebook and Twitter.I had never imagined that the day would come when I would be addicted to the glowing screen before me.Whenever I was not glued to these social networking sites,I would be going through gossip or fashion websites.As time passed,I realized that I was hooked on the Internet.During weekends,when I had more time on my hands,I could easily spend a few hours on my laptop.It came to a point where I chose to lock myself in my room,refusing to come out and take part in family discussions.I preferred to stay connected to the people I befriended in cyberspace although I had never met them.Soon I was spending the small hours of the morning glued to the Internet.Sleep was no longer complete and continuous but divided into small pieces.My grades at school also began worsening.注意：1.续写词数应为 150 左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。It was about this time that my parents started voicing their disapproval._试卷第 10 页，共 24 页 _ Then one day,my father took away my laptop._【答案】It was about this time that my parents started voicing their disapproval.It became obvious to them that I was spending too much time on the Internet.I was asked to
