2016年高考英语新题型“概要写作”.ppt

2016年高考英语新题型“概要写作”what the summary writing is the criteria of a good summaryhow to write a good summary1235After this class,you will be able to know:2021/5/222普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明概要写作：提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。（满分25分）词数词数少于少于4040的和的和多余多余8080的，的，从从总分中减去总分中减去2 2分分2021/5/223评分原则本题总分为25分，分5个档次给分第五档(21-25)理解准确,涵盖全部要点。能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要结构紧凑。完全使用自己的言语。2021/5/224Narration（记叙文）（记叙文）Exposition Exposition（说明文）（说明文）（说明文）（说明文）Forms of LiteratureArgumentation(议论文）议论文）2021/5/225Argumentation(议论文）议论文）TopicSupporting ideasConclusion2021/5/226There is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirtStep 1:Readtopic sentence:structureIn what order does the passage develop to show the different“attitudes”?2021/5/227(Para2)Intheearly16thcentury,peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease,asmedicalopinionhaditthatwashingoffdirtwithhotwatercouldopenuptheskinandletillsin.Aparticulardangerwasthoughttolieinpublicbaths.By1538,theFrenchkinghadclosedthebathhousesinhiskingdom.SodidthekingofEnglandin1546.ThusbeganalongtimewhentherichandthepoorinEuropelivedwithdirtinafriendlyway.HenryIV,KingofFrance,wasfamouslydirty.Uponlearningthatanoblemanhadtakenabath,thekingorderedthat,toavoidtheattackofdisease,thenoblemanshouldnotgoout.(Para3)Thoughthebeliefinthemeritofdirtwaslong-lived,dirthasnolongerbeenregardedasaniceneighboreversincethe18thcentury.Scientificallyspeaking,cleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth.Cleanwatersupplyandhandwashingarepracticalmeansofpreventingdisease.Yet,itseemsthatstandardsofcleanlinesshavemovedbeyondsciencesinceWorldWar.Advertisementsrepeatedlyselltheidea;clothesneedtobewhiterthanwhite,clothseversofter,surfacestoshine.Hasthehatefordirt,however,gonetoofar?(Para4)Attitudestodirtstilldifferhugelynowadays.Manyfirst-timeparentsnervouslytrytowarntheirchildrenofftouchingdirt,whichmightberesponsibleforthespreadofdisease.Onthecontrary,MaryRuebush,anAmericanimmunologist(免疫学家),encourageschildrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmunesystem.Andthelatterpositionisgainingsomeground.2021/5/228There is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirtStep 1:Readtopic sentence:structure supporting ideasFind out the topic sentence of each paragraphthink,believe,consider,regard,argue,support,be convinced that,in ones opinion,from ones point of view2021/5/229 Para2:Intheearly16thcentury,peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease,asmedicalopinionhaditthatwashingoffdirtwithhotwatercouldopenuptheskinandletillsin.Aparticulardangerwasthoughttolieinpublicbaths.By1538,theFrenchkinghadclosedthebathhousesinhiskingdom.SodidthekingofEnglandin1546.ThusbeganalongtimewhentherichandthepoorinEuropelivedwithdirtinafriendlyway.HenryIV,KingofFrance,wasfamouslydirty.Uponlearningthatanoblemanhadtakenabath,thekingorderedthat,toavoidtheattackofdisease,thenoblemanshouldnotgoout.ExamplesofsomeEuropeancountries2021/5/2210(Para3)Thoughthebeliefinthemeritofdirtwaslong-lived,dirthasnolongerbeenregardedasaniceneighboreversincethe18thcentury.Scientificallyspeaking,cleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth.Cleanwatersupplyandhandwashingarepracticalmeansofpreventingdisease.Yet,itseemsthatstandardsofcleanlinesshavemovedbeyondsciencesinceWorldWar.Advertisementsrepeatedlyselltheidea;clothesneedtobewhiterthanwhite,clothseversofter,surfacestoshine.Hasthehatefordirt,however,gonetoofar?2021/5/2211(Para4)Attitudestodirtstilldifferhugelynowadays.Manyfirst-timeparentsnervouslytrytowarntheirchildrenofftouchingdirt,whichmightberesponsibleforthespreadofdisease.Onthecontrary,MaryRuebush,anAmericanimmunologist(免疫学家),encourageschildrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmunesystem.Andthelatterpositionisgainingsomeground.2021/5/2212Step 2:Make an outline Topic:Thereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirtsuppor-tingIdeas(Para2)(Para3)nowadays(Para4)Inthe16thcenturysince18thcenturyPeoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdiseasehasnolongerbeenregardedascleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealthencourageschildrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmunesystem2021/5/2213 Step 3:Rewrite the sentences in other ways There is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.different,mixed,various反义转换opinions,views,ideas同义词替换同义词替换 Peoples attitudes to dirt vary in different times.towards句型转换句型转换 People hold different opinions towards dirt over time.The attitudes to dirt is not always the same.2021/5/2214 In the early 16th century,people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease.Have a try!2021/5/2215 People hold mixed opinions towards dirt on our skin.In the 16th century,people of some European countries,such as France,believed that dirt protected people from getting ill.People began to change their attitudes to dirt more than 200 years ago.They have been told that washing dirt off our body can keep us healthy.Nowadays,some scientists believe that exposure to some dirt may help our immune system.However,Nevertheless/But/however people Add two linking words to make the passage coherentStep 4:Make the summary coherent nowadays,2021/5/2216Step 5:Revise(67 words)People hold mixed opinions towards dirt on our skin.In the 16th century,people of some European countries believed that dirt protected people from getting ill.However,people began to change their attitudes to dirt about 200 years ago.They have been told that washing dirt off our body can keep us healthy.But nowadays,some scientists believe that exposure to some dirt may help our immune system.4“C”:complete,correct,concise,coherent 2021/5/2217Step 6:Clearly copy your draft to the paper2021/5/2218How to write a summary(argumentation)1.Read 2.Make an outline 3.Rewrite4.Make it coherent5.Revise6.neatly copy-Topic,structure,key supporting sentences2021/5/2219Homework Finish the summary writing of Passage B2021/5/2220PPT模板下载：行业PPT模板：节日PPT模板：PPT素材下载：PPT背景图片：PPT图表下载：优秀PPT下载：PPT教程：Word教程：Excel教程：资料下载：PPT课件下载：范文下载：试卷下载：教案下载：2021/5/2221 In the early 16th century,people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease.think:believe,hold,consider,insist,argue,are convinced.同义词替换同义词替换block out disease:prevent/protect/keep away from illness;One possible version:In the 16th century,people believed that dirt protected people from getting ill.2021/5/2222.dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18th century.Scientifically speaking,cleaning away dirt is good to health.wash off,get rid ofbenefits,is beneficial to,does good to,contributes toOne possible version:People began to change their attitudes to dirt about 200 years ago.People have been told that washing dirt off our body can keep us healthy.2021/5/2223 Nowadays,encourages people to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system.One possible version:Nowadays,some scientists believe that exposure to some dirt may help our immune system.People are encouraged to语态转换语态转换be exposed to.believe,support,agree,approve.2021/5/2224谢谢！