新高考英语外研版一轮学案层级4第1讲记叙文.docx

H1层级精巧缜密的谋篇WV第1讲记叙文一、写人记叙文谋篇布局P对人物进行简单介绍-详细描述人物的特点I概括人们的评价亮点句式夺人眼球开头句1. Mr. Zhang played an important role in promoting my studies, which left a deep impression on me.张老师在我提升学习成绩的过程中起着重要作用，这给我留下了深刻的印象。2. Whenever I talk about the Dragon Boat Festival, I can't help thinking of Qu Yuan, a great patriotic poet in Chinese history.每当谈论起端午节，我都不禁想起屈原，中国历史上一位伟大的爱国诗人。3. Martin, whose Chinese name is Ma Lin, is our oral English teacher this term. 马丁是我们这学期的英语口语老师，他的中文名是马林。亮点出彩篇中间4. He is honest and always ready to help others. Thafs why we made him our monitor.他诚实且乐于助人。所以我们选他当班长。5. The longer he stays with us, the more popular with us he has become.他与我们相处越久，就越受我们的欢迎。6. Thanks to his help, I have made much progress and caught up with others.多亏他的帮助，我取得了很大进步并赶上了其他同学。韵味无穷结尾句7. He is such a learned teacher that all of us respect him.他是如此博学的老师，我们大家都很尊敬他。8. Such is Mr. Li, a kind- hearted, humorous and responsible teacher.这就是李老师，一位心地善良、幽默、有责任心的教师。9. Looking at my grandma's pale face and white hair, I was close to tears.看着奶奶苍白的面庞和满头白发，我眼泪都快掉下来了。佳作背诵（2020全国卷I ）你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为 题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：1 .人物简介；2 .尊敬和爱戴的原因。注意：1.词数100左右；3 .短文题目和首句已为你写好。The person I respectThere are many respectable people around us.The person I respectThere are many respectable people around us.As for me, my English teacher, Ms Li, is the person I respect most.Though she has been teaching English for twenty years, she is still passionate about teaching.She always tries new ways to make her classes lively and interesting.Hard- working and knowledgeable, she is one of the best teachers in our school, widely admired and praised.She is kind and considerate towards us just like our dear mother. Whenever we encounter problems, we will turn to her for help.She always talks to us patiently and helps us to find a solution.In our eyes, Ms Li is not only our teacher, but also our best friend.She deserves our love and respect.针对性训练（2020.武汉市六月供题）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Robert看了 BBC纪录片 杜甫：中国最伟大的诗人后，发来一封邮件，询问中国人对杜甫的看法。请你回复邮件，内容包括:1 .著述颇丰；2 .心怀百姓。注意：1.词数80左右；2 .可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3 .开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Robert,How's everything going? I'm glad to hear that you have watched the documentary Du Fu: Chincis Greatest Poet made by BBC. Here I will introduce something about Du Fu to you.Wish you all the best.Yours,Li Hua参考范文Dear Robert,How's everything going? Pm glad to hear that you have watched the documentary Du Fu: China's Greatest Poet made by BBC. Here I will introduce something about Du Fu to you.Du Fu is regarded as one of the greatest poets in Chinese history. He was quite productive, leaving about 1, 500 poems behind, most of which are still popular today. In most of his poems, he described the life of ordinary people and the extreme hardship they were facing as well as criticizing the government who didn't care about the common people.I'm delighted that you have an interest in Chinese culture. If you learn more about it, you'll have a better understanding of China.Wish you all the best.Yours,Li Hua 二、叙事记叙文谋篇布局介绍事情发生的时间、地点一-详细描述事情经过I发表感想亮点句式夺人眼球开头句1. Yesterday afternoon I went to the park, where I happened to witness a touching story.昨天下午我去了公园，在那里碰巧目睹了一个动人的故事。2. Last night I was busy preparing for my test when I heard a loud noise.昨晚当我正忙着准备我的考试时，我听到一声巨响。3. Today is the traditional Chinese festival -the Mid-autumn Festival.今天是中国的传统佳节中秋节。亮点出彩篇中间4. A blind man was moving slowly with a walking stick in his hand.一个盲人手里拿着一根拐杖，慢慢挪动着脚步。5. The blue sea and the golden beach made us feel completely relaxed and happy. 蓝色的大海，金色的海滩，令我们心旷神怡。6. Before we knew it, we had to see goodbye and get back home.不知不觉我们必须说再见回家了。韵味无穷结尾句7. I think that the unforgettable experience will be fresh in my mind forever.我想这次难忘的经历会永远留在我的脑海中。8. The tears sparkling in my mother's eyes must be tears of happiness.妈妈眼中闪烁的泪花一定是幸福的泪花。9. Through this meaningful activity, I learned something that can't be learned in class.通过这次有意义的活动，我学到了一些课堂上学不到的东西。佳作背诵（2020全国卷H）上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括:1 .农场情况；2 .采摘过程；3 .个人感受。注意：1.词数100左右；4 .题目已为你写好。题目：My WeekendMy WeekendLast week my classmates and I went to a farm to pick fruits.There are many kinds of fruit trees on the farm, which is located at the foot of the hill near our school. We began picking fruits in two groups, one picking fruits and the other carefully putting them into big boxes. Bathed in the sunshine, we sang and laughed, enjoying being close to nature.What a wonderful day we had! Through the picking activity, not only did we gain relaxation but also we became aware of the significance of physical labour.针对性训练假定你是李华，得知你的美国笔友Jack将满18岁，请你写封邮件祝贺他成年, 并讲述你在学校参加的成人礼(the coming-of-age ceremony)以及你的感受。注意：1.词数80左右；5 .可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；6 .开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jack,How is everything going? Yours，Li Hua参考范文Dear Jack,How is everything going? I am so happy to know you're turning 18 very soon.Congratulations on your coming-of-age ! A month ago， we senior students celebrated our coming- of- age ceremony at school.With the theme represented as u Gratitude and Responsibility it had invited both our parents and teachers, to whom we sincerely expressed our gratitude during the ceremony.Following that, we convey our determination to be a better self in the future and fully shoulder our responsibilities.As a new adult, I felt very excited and a little bit nervous because of what it gives and expects of me一more rights, more independence and more responsibilities.Congratulate you again on your coming- of- age! How will you celebrate it? Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua