【课件】高考英语读后续写真题讲解课件 2021年06月新高考1卷.pptx
读后续写真题2021.6新高考新高考1卷卷1试题再现2试题分析3写作思路4范文赏析目录CONTENTS2021试题再现历年高考英语读后续写真题分析01 A MOTHERS DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mothers Day.How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed.They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge.They had watched their mother in the kitchen.There was nothing to it.Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.The big day came at last.The alarm rang at 6 a.m.The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen.They decided to boil the porridge first.They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast.Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk.Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture.Next,Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan.Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread.The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds.Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread.This time,she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake.The next minute,the porridge boiled over and put out the fire.Jenna panicked.Thankfully,Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly.But the stove was a mess now.Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge.But Jeffs hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain.Jenna made him put his hand in cold water.Then she caught the smell of burning.Oh dear!The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.Para1 As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.Para2 The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.2021试题分析历年高考英语读后续写真题分析02on Mothers dayWhenWhereAt homeWhoThe twins,Jeff and JannaMom,DadMain IdeaThe twins were preparing the breakfast but they messed it up and burned the finger.WhatMain IdeaWhythey wanted to surprise their mom HowJeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake.The next minute,the porridge boiled over and put out the fire.Jenna panicked.Thankfully,Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly.(1)读大意，抓中心主大意，抓中心主题双胞胎双胞胎Jeff和和Jenna准准备备在母在母亲节为亲节为母母亲亲做法式吐司和做法式吐司和鸡鸡肉粥的早餐，母肉粥的早餐，母亲节亲节当天，他当天，他们们先煮粥，然后把面包放先煮粥，然后把面包放进鸡进鸡蛋和牛奶的混合液中。但由于火太大，面包焦了，在第二蛋和牛奶的混合液中。但由于火太大，面包焦了，在第二块块面面包将要煎成功的包将要煎成功的时时候，沸候，沸腾腾的粥把火熄的粥把火熄灭灭了，厨房里一片狼藉，了，厨房里一片狼藉，Jeff的手也的手也烫伤烫伤了，了，Jenna帮他用冷水冲手的帮他用冷水冲手的时时候候闻闻到了面包到了面包烧烧焦的味道。焦的味道。(2)读人物，找人物，找续写人物写人物读续写两段的首句可知，写两段的首句可知，Dad,Mom和和twins是是续写内写内容的关容的关键人物人物(3)读时态，选续写写时态通通读全文可知，全文可知，该故事主要是用一般故事主要是用一般过去去时讲述的，述的，故故续写内容的写内容的时态也也应一致。一致。(4)读结构，辨划分方式构，辨划分方式弄清故事的弄清故事的结构特点及表构特点及表现形式，形式，选择合适的方式划分段合适的方式划分段落，常用的有落，常用的有4：以以时空空变化划分化划分(指指时间和地点和地点)；以人物思想感情的以人物思想感情的变化来划分；化来划分；按按记叙内容的叙内容的变化来划分；化来划分；按描述角度的按描述角度的变化、事情化、事情发展的展的阶段来划分。段来划分。再看回真再看回真题，一开始，一开始，这对双胞胎在母双胞胎在母亲节前就在策划前就在策划给母母亲的的惊喜，而后是在母惊喜，而后是在母亲节当天，两人在厨房当天，两人在厨房为母母亲准准备早餐。而由早餐。而由续写两段首句可知，写两段首句可知，续写第一段写第一段这对Twins还是是在厨房里，第二在厨房里，第二段是在楼上段是在楼上妈妈的卧室里，人物所的卧室里，人物所处地点不断地点不断变化，由此可知化，由此可知,题目是按照目是按照时空空变化来划分的。化来划分的。而我而我们在构思在构思续写内容写内容时也也应在在这两个地点的基两个地点的基础上上进行拓展。行拓展。(5)读语言，定言，定风格特色格特色挖掘文本挖掘文本语言表达言表达风格，模仿原文格，模仿原文语言写言写句子。使句子。使续写部分的写部分的语言言风格与原文的格与原文的风格格相一致，以促相一致，以促进语言言协同。此外，如果原文同。此外，如果原文有有较多多对话,续写也可出写也可出现对话；如原文没有；如原文没有对话,尽量少用尽量少用对话形式。形式。elements1.personJenna&Jeff(twins),mother,father2.place3.time4.What happened5.How to doAt homeAt 6:00 am in the morningThe twins wanted to surprise their mother on Mothers DayThe twins planned to cook breakfast for their motherAction Vs.EmotionExcited 1.The twins planned a breakfast.confident2.The twins thought they knew the job.under control 4.The bread got burnt.5.The porridge became a mess.panicked6.The second bread turned black.Losing confidence3.The beginning went well.fineWhat was the rest story?solutionA messClean itThe breakfast was ruinedCook it all over againOver-confidentReadjust the situationNot sophisticated in houseworkStart to learn.2021写作思路历年高考英语读后续写真题分析03The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.Gratitude to mothers hard work.There was nothing to it.Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.Housework needs to be learned,mastered and shared by every family member.Oh dear!The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.ThemeHow pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed.Implication from the two sentencesPara1 As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.Para2 The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.What would the twins say to their mother?Would their father help them out?What would Father do in order to help?Was the situation at that moment?What did they understand and realize from this incident?2021范文赏析历年高考英语读后续写真题分析04Para1 As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.Their father seemed to understand exactly what had happened and what to do next.He grabbed the handle of the pan and slipped a bar of butter to melt before putting another slice of cup.Then he swiftly removed the burnt porridge away,and poured another cup of rice,starting to cook it all over again.In between,he kept silent and focused on what he was doing.The twins stood straight and awe,watching the hustle and bustle from their father.At 7 oclock,every thing was done and perfect.The twins took over the tray,feeling guilty about being over-confident about their competence in performing the house chores.Para2 The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.They presented the well-cooked breakfast in front of Mother.Their mother beamed from ear to ear,praising and appreciating childrens nice act of gesture.However,the twins lowered their heads,shoulders drooping down.It didnt turn out as they had planned.Finally,Jenna broke out the silence,confessing“Mother,we have taken it for granted for so long that the breakfast that you make for us every morning is a super easy job.”Jeff cut in“But it wasnt.”Jenna continued“On this Mothers day,we would like to thank you for your dedication and care for us.”“And from tomorrow,we will learn to make our own breakfast in order to take back our responsibility from you.”Mothers eyes were welled up with tears and nodded.版本二版本二THANK YOU
