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应用文应用文3 3 请求信请求信 (2016年英语高考全国卷年英语高考全国卷1）假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教）。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信，请他帮你修改所附材料的文写信，请他帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（字和格式（format）。）。注意：注意：1.词数词数80左右左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。From YJQ Im writing to ask you for help.Since Id like to take a part time job in a foreign company,a proper application and resume are badly needed.Until now,Ive already completed them by myself.Nevertheless,I wonder whether the format and the attached material is suitable or not.You are always a great suggestion giver and your advice is very instructive.Your suggestion will certainly make my resume a huge success.Id appreciate it if you could do me a favor.学生佳作学生佳作From SJQWhy do you write to me?express your purpose of writing directly and clearly in the beginningIm writing to ask for your assistance with my application and personal resume.Im writing to ask you a favor in applying for a position.Im writing to ask for your help with my application and resume.第一段第一段Im writing to ask for your help.Im writing to ask for your help.too much useless information(From WXM)Which one is more acceptable?Order express your request in a polite and appropriate manner.第二段第二段DiscussionHow to ask your teacher to revise the application and resume in an appropriate manner?I wonder if you could help me revise the application and resume.I will be more likely to be employed if you could help me revise.Hopefully,you could spare some time to help me revise the application and resume.Will it be convenient to you if I ask you to aid me in polishing words and format?From PMFWhat do you need me to do?Restate your request at the end of the letterBe a polite person！From WXMFrom LZXFrom WSWexpress your gratitude at the end of the letterI will be very grateful if you could help me at your earliest convenience.I would appreciate it if you could offer your generous help.第三段第三段假定你是李华假定你是李华,最近获得了某外国语大学英语最近获得了某外国语大学英语面试的机会。请你用英语给外教面试的机会。请你用英语给外教Mr Hall写一写一封信封信,主要内容包括主要内容包括:1请他帮你提高口语请他帮你提高口语;2给予一些面试指导。给予一些面试指导。注意注意:1词数词数80左右左右;2可适当增加细节可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。以使行文连贯。请求信请求信2Im writing to ask for your assistance with my interview for a university of foreign languages.Im writing this letter,hoping that you could do me a favor with my coming interview.Im writing to ask you a favor with my interview for a university of foreign languages.I wonder if./I am wondering if.I wonder if it is convenient for you to help me.Hopefully,could you please spare some time to.I will be more likely to impress the interviewers if you can provide me with professional guidance.Faced with such a fierce competition,I am in really urgent need of your professional help.Will it be convenient for you if I ask you to help me with.I will be very grateful if you could help me with.Id appreciate it if you could.I will be more likely to impress the interviewers if you can provide me with professional guidance.Faced with such a fierce competition,I am in really urgent need of your professional help.Will it be convenient for you if I ask you to help me with.I will be very grateful if you could help me with.Id appreciate it if you could.