应用文1：感谢信公开课教案教学设计课件案例试卷.ppt
应用文应用文1：感谢信感谢信 考前背诵考前背诵 Im writing to express our sincere gratitude for your hospitality and generosity during our stay in Britain.It was so nice and considerate of you to have prepared us so many cuisines of British flavor!We were also deeply impressed by the comfortable accommodation you arranged for us.Whats more,the activities you organized not only broadened our horizons but also promoted our mutual understanding.We now have a deeper insight into British culture.Thanks again for all your efforts!We hope you can come to China and visit us in the near future.考试题目考试题目假如你是李华。你收到了美国朋友彼得寄来的最新的英文小说。请你给他回信，要点包括：1.小说收到：2.回馈礼物；3.礼物意义；4.邀请来华。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。学生佳作学生佳作1学生佳作学生佳作2考试范文考试范文Dear Peter,Im glad to receive the novel.Thank you for such a lovely gift as I have been expecting for a long time.This novel gives me some insights into American society and daily life.I know youre interested in Chinese festivals,and therefore I choose some paper cuts for you.Paper cuts are a unique form of Chinese culture,which are often used as decorations for a joyous atmosphere.I hope they will bring happiness and luck to your family as they always do in China.Best wishes.Expecting you to come to China and experience the rich culture in person.Yours,Li Hua问题问题1信件的称呼语与署名信件的称呼语与署名Dear Peter,Yours,Li Hua 或或 Yours sincerely,Li Hua 或或 Sincerely yours,Li Hua问题问题2Dear Peter,Long time no see!Are you all right?Ive just recieved the latest English novel that you sent to me.Its a pretty surprise for me.1.开头太随意！开头是决定你分数高低的地方呀！如何开头？2.写了半天都没有感谢，写信目的不明确！Im writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for the novel you sent me.（开门见山，表明（开门见山，表明写信目的）写信目的）问题问题3This newest Chinese novel is prepared for you.I hope you will like it.The writer is my favorite writer called Liu Cixin.I think you will like him.遗漏写作要点！回赠该礼物的意义？问题问题4It was so nice and considerate of you to have prepared me such a wonderful gift.I will be very pleased to send you a special gift.The book you arranged for me not only broadened my horizons but also promoted my mutual understanding.思维品质决定写作质量！思维混乱导致跳跃式写作！Im glad to receive the novel.Thank you for such a lovely gift as I have been expecting for a long time.This novel gives me some insights into American society and daily life.I know youre interested in Chinese festivals,and therefore I choose some paper cuts for you.Paper cuts are a unique form of Chinese culture,which are often used as decorations for a joyous atmosphere.I hope they will bring happiness and luck to your family as they always do in China.关于感谢的词汇关于感谢的词汇thankthanksthankfulgratefulgratitudeappreciateappreciationappreciativeThank you for your help.Thanks for your help.Thanks to your help,I succeeded.I am thankful to you for your help.I am grateful to you for your help.I am expressing my sincere gratitude to you for your help.I appreciate your help.I am writing to show my appreciation to you for your help.I am appreciative of your help.表示感谢的词组表示感谢的词组1.thank sb for sth/doing sth2.express ones gratitude to sb for sth;convey ones thanks to sb for sth;extend ones appreciation to sb for sth;give ones heartfelt thanks to sb;3.be grateful to sb for sth be thankful to sb for sth感谢信的格式感谢信的格式第一段：表明写作目的：感激之情并说明原因第一段：表明写作目的：感激之情并说明原因第二段：细述并赞赏对方给予的帮助第二段：细述并赞赏对方给予的帮助第三段：再次阐述谢意第三段：再次阐述谢意感谢信的时态感谢信的时态1.在提到对方曾给予帮助时，用在提到对方曾给予帮助时，用一般一般过去时态过去时态；2.在提到对方的帮助所产生的实际效在提到对方的帮助所产生的实际效果时，可用果时，可用现在完成时现在完成时；3.涉及到现状，可用涉及到现状，可用一般现在时一般现在时；4.在表达祝愿或希望时，可用在表达祝愿或希望时，可用一般将一般将来时来时。第一段第一段1.Im writing to express my sincere thanks to you for your contribution to our school.2.Im truly grateful to you for your generous help.3.Im writing to extend my heartfelt appreciation to you for your selfless devotion.4.I sincerely/deeply appreciate the help you offered during your teaching in our school.5.I would like to convey my sincere gratitude to you for your selfless dedication.第二段第二段1.It was really kind/nice of you to devote all your free time to staying with us and helping us.2.But for your help,I wouldnt have made such remarkable achievements.3.Hearing that you will return to the USA,I find myself gradually involved into a good memory.4.Never will I forget your kind hospitality you showed during my stay in your home.5.Without your professional assistance,I would not have won the prize.第三段第三段1.Please accept my sincere thanks for your help,which I will never forget.2.My true gratitude is beyond the words description.3.I cannot thank you more for what you did to me during my visit in China.4.Nothing could return the favor you offered me when I was in the worst moments of my life.5.Please do not hesitate to let me know if there is anything I can do to pay you back.结尾结尾1.Looking forward to your early reply.Your early reply will be highly appreciated.Your arrival is greatly expected.2.请你对请你对Peter表达祝愿。表达祝愿。表达祝福表达祝福Wish somebody something1.Wish you every success in the future.2.Wish you every happiness.3.Wish you good luck.4.Wish you a pleasant journey.5.Wish you all the best.6.Best wishes for a happy journey.考试范文考试范文Dear Peter,Im glad to receive the novel.Thank you for such a lovely gift as I have been expecting for a long time.This novel gives me some insights into American society and daily life.I know youre interested in Chinese festivals,and therefore I choose some paper cuts for you.Paper cuts are a unique form of Chinese culture,which are often used as decorations for a joyous atmosphere.I hope they will bring happiness and luck to your family as they always do in China.Best wishes.Expecting you to come to China and experience the rich culture in person.Yours,Li Hua假如你是李华，得知你们班外教假如你是李华，得知你们班外教Mr.Smith要回美国了要回美国了，请你给外教写，请你给外教写一封电子邮件一封电子邮件。写作要点：写作要点：1.对他表达感谢之情；对他表达感谢之情；2.回顾他任教给你带来的帮助；回顾他任教给你带来的帮助；3.表达祝福表达祝福。注意：注意：1.词数词数80左右左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Im writing to extend my gratitude to you because with your help,I have made great progress in English Learning,which makes quite excited,while the excitement can never sweep the sorrow inside me,as you,my dearest teacher is leaving me.In this year,you really offered a lot of valuable help.You not only coached my oral English but also gave me careful and patient instructions on how to write English compositions well.Its your unreserved help that enables me to obtain this splendid chance of improving English.Wish you could always be in a good mood and keep healthy all the time.学生佳作学生佳作练习练习2假如你是李华假如你是李华,刚刚参加完一个夏令营从纽约刚刚参加完一个夏令营从纽约回来。在纽约期间回来。在纽约期间,你住宿在你住宿在 Smith先生家先生家,得到了他很多的帮助。请你用英文给他写一得到了他很多的帮助。请你用英文给他写一封邮件表达谢意。内容包指封邮件表达谢意。内容包指1.表示感谢；表示感谢；2.回顾回顾Smith先生对你的帮助与照顾；先生对你的帮助与照顾；3.希望他来中国玩。希望他来中国玩。注意：注意：1.词数词数80左右；左右；2.可以适当增加细节可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。以使行文连贯。范文范文Dear Smith,Im writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your kind help and great hospitality I can well remember I was quite uneasy when I first stepped in your house,but your humor and encouragement soon eased my anxiety and made me feel at home.During my stay,whenever I had a problem in language or study,you are always a great helper.Besides,you even invited me to an opera,which is one of the best memories in my life.I do hope some day youll come to China and let me show you around my hometown.Yours sincerely,LiHua
