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读后续写 The parents with their three-year-old son went to see a film.When they walked into the cinema,the attendant said to them:“Youll have to go out if your son cries.But well refund(退款退款)you the tickets.”About half an hour later,the husband asked his wife,“What do you think of the film?”“Ive never seen such a boring film.”His wife answered,“Its not worth seeing.”“I dont think much of it,either.”The husband said,“Wake the child up and_.”Share funny jokeslet him cryWhat do you think is a good ending?阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。ItwasChristmasDay.Pappywasworkingalonefixinganoldlanterninthebackroomwhenheheardtheringingofhisbellontheshopdoor.Thebell,whichproducedauniquelypleasantsound,hadbeeninPappysfamilyforoverahundredyears.Hevalueditdearlyandenjoyedsharingitssongwithallwhocametohisshop.Althoughthebellhungontheinsideofthemaindoor,Pappyhadtiedawiretothescreendoorsothatitwouldringwhethertheinnerdoorwasopenornot.Hearingthebell,heleftthebackroomtogreethiscustomer.“AndhowcanIhelpyou,littlelady?”Pappysvoicewasjoyful.“Hello,sir.”Thelittlegirlspokealmostinawhisper.ShelookedatPappywithherbigbrowneyes,andthenslowlyscannedtheroominsearchofsomethingspecial.Shylyshetoldhim,“Idliketobuyapresent,sir.”“Well,letssee,”Pappysaid,“whoisthispresentfor?”“Mygrandpa.Itsformygrandpa.ButIdontknowwhattoget.”Pappybegantomakesuggestions.“Howaboutapocketwatch?Itsingoodcondition.”Thelittlegirldidntanswer.Shehadwalkedtothedoorwayandputhersmallhandonthedoor.Sheshookthedoorgentlytoringthebell.Pappysfaceseemedtoglowashesawhersmilingwithexcitement.“Thisisjustright,”thelittlegirlsaid.“Mommasaysgrandpalovesmusic.”Justthen,Pappysexpressionchanged.Fearfulofbreakingthelittlegirlsheart,hetoldher,“Imsorry,Missy.Thatsnotforsale.Maybeyourgrandpawouldlikethislittleradio.”Thegirllookedattheradio,bowedherhead,andsadlysighed,“No,Idontthinkso.”Inanefforttohelpherunderstand,Pappytoldherthatthebellhadbeenhisonlycompanion,fortherestofhisfamilywereallgonenow,exceptforhisestranged(疏远的)daughterwhomhehadnotseenfornearlyadecade.Withagianttearinhereye,thelittlegirllookedupathim._LaterthateveningwhenPappywasclosinguptheshop,heheardafamiliarringing._2018年浙江温州六校年浙江温州六校协协作体作体 *use different structures（结构）（结构）*use transitional words（过渡）（过渡）*add some details（细节）（细节）1 *Predict all the possbile plot with the help of“PRS”strategyn *given two sentences（段首语）*main plots of the passage（故事情节）3 steps3 steps when wherewhowhatA little girl was selecting _for her grandpa in pappys shop.However,she insist on buying _,which my pappy _ dearly.HowStep 1 Thorough ReadingPappyOne Christmas DayIn Pappys shop?A little girlexcited sadjoyful embarrasseda Christmas gifta bellvaluedPara 2 Problems:Later that evening when pappy was closing up the shop,he heard a familiar ringing.Results:Solutions:Step 2 Creative PlottingPara 1 Problems:With a giant tear in her eye,the little girl looked up at him.Results:Solutions:Underlined words:When:Christmas DayWho:pappy,the little girl,grandpa,momma,daughterWhat：presentHow:sigh,specialTip1KeyWordsPappy may feel a sense of sympathy and went to comfort the little girl.Pappy had a deal with the girl.The girl got her dreamed bell.Tip2consistentlogicPossible results/solutionTip4Youcangetyourwritingpolishedbyusingadvancedphrases&structuresvividverbsnecessaryinnerthoughtsnaturaltransitionalwordsUnderline the differences and think about two questions:1.What details can be added to enrich the outline?2.Whats improved in the second edition?Tip3Toenrichtheplot,wecanadd_,_,_,_,etc.actionsemotions(looks)surroundingsdialoguesWhich group do you favor?-First,besides/plus/additionally/furthermore,whats more,-fortunately,unexpectedly,surprisingly,happily for him,Inspired by,Out of curiosity/Driven by curiosity,Apparently,needless to say,immediately,in an instant,insteadCircle out the differences.3.advancedphrases&structures1.vividverbs2.innerthoughts(looks,surroundings,dialogues)4.propertransitionalwordsStep 3 Polishing With a giant tear in her eye,the little girl looked up at him.She forced a smile,murmuring“Thank you”and made her way to the door.There was a dead silence in the shop.Suddenly Pappy thought of his daughter.Driven by a sense of sympathy,Pappy called out,“How much have you got to spend?”Hearing this,the little girl counted money in her purse-two dollars altogether.After thinking for what seems like a few seconds,Pappy announced,“Today is Christmas Day and this is your lucky day.It is two dollars that the bell costs exactly.”The child danced out with great joy the special bell held in her hand.What details can be added to enrich the outline?Tip4improvementTip3adddetails With a giant tear in her eye,the little girl looked up at him.She forced a smile,murmuring“Thank you”and made her way to the door.There was a dead silence in the shop.Suddenly Pappy thought of his daughter.Driven by a sense of sympathy,Pappy called out,“How much have you got to spend?”Hearing this,the little girl counted money in her purse-two dollars altogether.After thinking for what seems like a few seconds,Pappy announced,“Today is Christmas Day and this is your lucky day.It is two dollars that the bell costs exactly.”The child danced out with great joy,the special bell held in her hand.Later that evening when Pappy was closing up the shop,he heard a familiar ringing.He couldntbelievehisears!Thereinthedoorwaystoodthelittlegirl,ringingthebellandsmilingsweetly.Puzzled,Pappy approachedher.“Haveyouchangedyourmind,littlelady?”“No,”thechildgrinned,“Mommasaysthepresentisforyou.”BeforePappyhadtimetosayanotherword,thechildsmothersteppedin.Holdingbackhertears,shegentlysaid,“Hello,Dad.”