读后续写：优美段落赏析- 高考英语作文复习.docx

读后续写 优美段落1.（表达不耐烦，不喜欢）Some eyes rolled and there were a few low groans when Ms.Yates was about to speak. Many started looking at their watches and coming up with excuses to be anywhere instead of preparing to listen to a lecture from an old woman who had few kind words for her students and made them work harder than all the other teachers combined.2. （动作描写）Mary was putting her feet up and watching TV when her parents told her to come back. All of sudden, she jumped to her feet because of anger. Initially, she planted her feet firmly to the ground and turned down to make any movement. However, her father stamped his feet annoyedly. The parents carried her out of the hotel angrily, regardless of her feet kicking. Mary dragged her feet unwillingly. To her disappointment, she had to follow her parents home. Upon arriving home, she pulled off her shoes and rushed into her bedroom, barefoot and in tears.3.（演讲后听众的反应）There was a silence over the crowd for a few seconds and then someone started clapping. Tee clapping turned into cheering, then into a deafening roar. Lawyers, truck drivers, bankers and models were rubbing their eyes or crying openly with no shame all because of the words from a long forgotten English teacher from their hometown.4.（文后的升华）In every moment and every circumstance, you can choose to have fuller, richer life by setting a clear intention to transform the victim within, and by inviting into your life the powerful creator that you are.5.（月圆之夜）The moon appeared above the horizon) : huge, silver ball high above the city, and the street filled with people, as Java began to enjoy one of the year' s greatest events : ' the Night of the Full Moon' , a festival that is especially popular with young people, who gathered together and walked slowly through the night. Joking and chatting, they reached the old temple at the top of the mountain.6.心理描写（一）Obviously, that was something I should not go through alone. All of a sudden，a warm feeling of sympathy rose up in my heart. I feel my world is full of blossoming flowers, which is shining. I lie down and shut my eyes,regaining the confidence I need to go through the difficulty and trouble.7.心理描写（二）People can not imagine how scared I was at the approach of the bear. A burst of horror held me entirely in its power, and I couldnt be able to move any more. Hugely frightened, I felt my legs were shaking and my palms were sweating. Beside me was my friend, who was trembling too. Staring at the bear's open mouth, she was nearly scared to death. A feeling of fear swallowed us. 8.母爱On learning the truth, I totally dumbfounded(completely shocked). In a split second, my heart begin to be aching and countless things flashed through my mind.How can I reward my beloved mom so badly, who has sacrificed everything, for her only son! I am supposed to bear in mind that all such changes come from the love of my mom. 9.情绪的描写On the way to the river, a wide excitement took hold of Tom. Tom insisted that we go hiking in the next village, his eyes twinkling with thrill. When we reached the hiking place, Tom couldn't wait to storm out and excitedly urged us to begin. Then, Tom headed towards the river, and then came a scream of excitement. Enjoying the beautiful view, Tom could hardly control her thrill. Apparently, as it was the first time that Tom had been there. Breathing in the fresh air , we jumped up and down with enjoyment.10. 小词的大作用My English was incredibly poor. Therefore, I felt desperately frustrated. I attended a lecture, which aroused my enthusiasm for English . From then on, I spent considerable time learning on a daily basis. Nevertheless, my English remained poor .I sank into despair again. My English teacher constantly encouraged me. I restored my faith in English. I made painstaking efforts to improve my English. In the meantime, I adopted a new approach . Eventually, My efforts bore fruit. I really hope that my story will stimulate you to take the challenges in life.