英语写作训练.ppt

作文题目作文题目：假设你叫李毅：假设你叫李毅,现在上高三现在上高三,你的叔你的叔叔现在在美国工作叔现在在美国工作.你觉得父母管得太严了你觉得父母管得太严了,自自己解决不了这个问题己解决不了这个问题,于是发邮件给叔叔于是发邮件给叔叔,希望希望他跟父母谈谈他跟父母谈谈,劝说他们改变教育方式劝说他们改变教育方式.要点如要点如下下:1.学习上要求太高学习上要求太高,自己达不到他们的期望值自己达不到他们的期望值,并且经常拿自己和邻居家的孩子比并且经常拿自己和邻居家的孩子比,让自己很沮让自己很沮丧丧;2.不准看电视不准看电视,上网上网;3.不准自己和女生交朋友不准自己和女生交朋友;4.觉得自己和父母有代沟觉得自己和父母有代沟,不能很好沟通。不能很好沟通。注意注意:1.词数不少于词数不少于120 个字个字;2.电子邮件的开头结尾已经写好电子邮件的开头结尾已经写好,不计入总字数不计入总字数注意：词数不少于注意：词数不少于120个左右；文章开头与结个左右；文章开头与结尾已给出，不计入总数尾已给出，不计入总数Dear uncle,How are you these days?Im writing to tell you my trouble with my parents._ Best wishes，Yours,Li Yi Step 1 Cross-question 审题 Style(文体):_Person(人称):第_人称为主Tense(时态）:_Key points:_An email一，三一般现在时为主作文题目作文题目：假设你叫李毅：假设你叫李毅,现在上高三现在上高三,你的叔你的叔叔现在在美国工作叔现在在美国工作.你觉父母管得太严了你觉父母管得太严了,自己自己解决不了这个问题解决不了这个问题,于是发邮件给叔叔于是发邮件给叔叔,希望他希望他跟父母谈谈跟父母谈谈,劝说他们改变教育方式劝说他们改变教育方式.要点如下要点如下:1.学习上要求太高学习上要求太高,自己达不到他们的期望值自己达不到他们的期望值,并且经常拿自己和邻居家的孩子比并且经常拿自己和邻居家的孩子比,让自己很沮让自己很沮丧丧;2.不准看电视不准看电视,上网上网;3.不准自己和女生交朋友不准自己和女生交朋友;4.觉得自己和父母有代沟觉得自己和父母有代沟,不能很好沟通不能很好沟通.注意注意:1.词数不少于词数不少于120 个字个字;2.电子邮件的开头结尾已经写好电子邮件的开头结尾已经写好,不计入总字数不计入总字数 1.学习上要求过高2.达到某人的期望值3.对 管得太严4.拿 做比较5.让某人沮丧6.不准 某人干7.阻止某人干8.看电视9.上网10.劝某人不干 11.与 交朋友12.与 沟通13.觉得 verb.14.代沟 15.教育方式1.expect too much of me2.meet/reach ones expectations3.be hard on sb/be strict with pare with/and/to5.make sb upset/discouraged6.dont allow sb to do sth 7.forbid sb from doing sth8.watch TV9.surf the Internet10.discourage sb from doing sth/persuade sb not to do sth 11.make friends municate with13.sense/feel/feel like14.a generation gap15.the way of educationStep 2 Preparation for words and phrasesStep3 Make sentences要点要点1.学习上期望太高，自己达不到他学习上期望太高，自己达不到他们的期望值们的期望值.并且经常拿自己和邻居家的并且经常拿自己和邻居家的孩子比孩子比,让自己很沮丧。让自己很沮丧。1._expect too much of me.2._not able to meet their expectation.3._often compare me with the neighbours children.4._ makes me upset.表述要点时,确定_确定_TheyImTheyIt/That主语，人称主语，人称时态，语态时态，语态要点要点2 不准看电视，上网不准看电视，上网They dont allow me to watch TV or surf the Internet.Step 3 Make sentences要点要点 3 不准自己跟女生交朋友不准自己跟女生交朋友They discourage me from making friends with girlsforbid from doingdiscourage from doingprevent from doing stop from doingkeepfrom doing Step 3 Make sentences表述要点时表述要点时,所选择的词语所选择的词语及短语应避免重复。及短语应避免重复。要点4 觉得和父母有代沟，不能很好地沟通。1.I feel that there is/exists a generation gap between parents and me .I cant communicate well with them.Make sentences遣词造句需要推敲遣词造句需要推敲要点5 自己解决不了这个问题,希望和父母谈谈,劝说他们改变教育方式.I cant solve the problem.I hope you can persuade them to change the way of education.Step 3 Make sentences要点要点1 a.学习上期望太高，自己达不到学习上期望太高，自己达不到他们的期望值他们的期望值.They expect too much of me _Im not able to meet their expectations.,but表达要点句子时,应理清句子间的_逻辑关系逻辑关系.However,Im;however,ImStep4 Make amazing sentences要点要点1 b.并且经常拿自己和邻居家的孩子比并且经常拿自己和邻居家的孩子比,让自己很沮丧让自己很沮丧1.And they often compare me with the neighbours children.It/That makes me upset.2.And they often compare me with the neighbours children,_makes me upset.which表述要点多尝试使用学过的_;_3.And what upsets me is _they often compare me with the neighbours children.that定语从句和名词性从句定语从句和名词性从句 等等.2 不准看电视不准看电视,上网上网;不准自己跟女生交朋友。不准自己跟女生交朋友。2._do they discourage me from watching TV or surfing the Internet;_ they stop me from making friends.Not only but also表述要点多尝试使用学过表述要点多尝试使用学过的句型。的句型。1.They dont allow me to watch TV or surf the Internet;_ do they let me make Friends with girls.Step4 Make amazing sentencesnor,and nor do3.They dont allow me to watch TV or surf the Internet;nor do they let me make friends with girls,saying_.Step4 Make amazing sentencesit is a waste of time.(请补充细节)it has a bad effect on my study.I am expected to focus on my study.表达要点时要补充必要的细节补充必要的细节以增加句子的生动性和感染力。Have a discussion with your partners.4.As far as Im concerned,due togeneration gap between parents and me,I cant communicate well with them,_talking little but arguing a lot.(请补充细节)Have a discussion with your partners.Step4 Make amazing sentencesso that we talk little but argue a lotSummary of writing skills表述要点时表述要点时:1.确定主语确定主语,人称人称,时态时态,语语态。态。2.理清句子间的逻辑关系。理清句子间的逻辑关系。3.多尝试使用学过的句型。多尝试使用学过的句型。1.所选择的词语及所选择的词语及短语应避免重复。短语应避免重复。2.补充必要的细节补充必要的细节以增加句子生动性以增加句子生动性和感染力。和感染力。3.遣词造句需推敲。遣词造句需推敲。Dear Uncle,How are you these days?Im writing to tell you my trouble with my parents.In my opinion,my parents are too strict with me.To begin with,_.And_Whats worse_._._In a word,_总总总总分述要点分述要点_.Now _.I would appreciate it if you_.Im looking forward to your reply.Best wishes,Yours,Li Yi 参考范文参考范文Dear Uncle,How are you these days?Im writing to tell you my trouble with my parents.In my opinion,my parents are too strict with me.They expect too much of me but I really cant reach their expectations.Besides,they often compare me with my neighbours children,which makes me rather depressed.Whats worse,they even dont allow me to watch TV or surf the Internet;nor do they let me make friends with girls saying loudly it is just a waste of time.In a word,as far as Im concerned,with a wide generation gap between us,we cant communicate well with each other,talking little but arguing a lot.Till now,not knowing what I shall do with it,I would appreciate it if you could do me a favor to talk to my parents and persuade them to change the way of education.Im looking forward to your reply.Best wishes,Yours,Li Yi Rome isnt built in a day.The more you read，accumulate and practise，the better your writing will be！.三维设计三维设计page198.课下多练笔课下多练笔Dear Mike,Glad to receive your message.Ill tell youSomething about table manners.If you are invited to dinner in China,try to be free at the dinner table.If you dont know how to use chopsticks,just watch other persons and follow them.If you still have no idea aboutwhat to do,dont be shy to ask the person next to you.Its better to ask politely than to be uncomfortable and nervous.If you like the food,say so.You can thank the host and hostess for the meal and for their kindness.Hope to see you soon.Yours,Li ming