雅思写作7分备考经验分享.docx

雅思写作7分备考经验分享 在雅思写作备考中，许多考生不知道如何来熬炼自己的写作水平，没有什么备考安排和思路。今日我为大家共享雅思写作高分学习阅历，大家可以参考一下，当然每个考生的实际水平是不同的，所以我们还是要以自己的实际水平为准，找到适合自己的方法，可以有效的帮助我们快速取得进步。 雅思写作7分备考阅历共享 基本状况： 成果：7.0 L6.5 R7.0 W7.0 S6.5 四战雅思终过关：5.56.06.07.0 毕业5年了基本没用过英语，9年前过了六级 整个学习周期约20周 写作学习与备考体会 在老外这里学习写作方面的最大的收获是四点(从强到弱)：一是文章的逻辑性，二是少出初中级别的语法错误，三是用几个美丽的collocation，四是尽量用困难句。前两个最重要! 关于逻辑性，这一点唯恐是中国学生备考中最缺乏的，因为市面上的一些考试教材，包括各种辅导班的老师都很少提及。逻辑性主要有两点：一是全篇文章要有逻辑，比如先说自己反对一方的观点，然后再反对之，这点大家应当都能做到。关键是其次点，每一段的各个支撑理由之间，和每个支撑理由内部也要有逻辑性。观点或理由之间应当是logical的链接而不只是用linking词来link。所以，形式上，我的作文或许用first of all，但绝不会再用secondly，thirdly 这样的linker。 另外，少用模板，或者少用中国模板。我曾有意在一篇文章中用了类似这样的“Just like a coin has two sides，this question also has its drawbacks。”那雅思索官老师一看就说你是不是从中国商业书上背下来的，呵呵。 G类雅思写作讲解及范文：Enquiry类 ? Enquiry 目的+详细问题+(急迫心情+感谢+联系方式) 1. I am writing for information about 2. I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding 3. I would be most grateful if you could supply me with the following information. ? End of an Enquiry letter 1. Thank you for your consideration 2. I am expecting your early reply. 3. I am looking forward to your immediate response. 4. In addition, if you could let me have details of I would be more than grateful. Writing task 1 ? As part of a student social survey project, you are organizing a group to visit a historical exhibition in a small town. ? Write a letter asking for information regarding such things as the contents of the exhibition, and the dates of its opening and closing, and if there are any discounts available. Dear Sir, I am organizing a group of students to pay a visit to the historical exhibition in your town. This visit will be part of our schools activities to encourage the students to take part in social surveys. Therefore, I would be grateful if you could supply me with the following information. First of all, what are the dates between which the exhibition will be held, and what are the daily opening hours? Secondly, what is the size of the exhibition, what is its theme and what objects are on display? Thirdly, are there any other activities being held in connection with the exhibition? I must point out that I hope to bring over students to the exhibition. So I would like to inquire if there is any discount available on entrance tickets for students. If so, how much is the discount and what is the minimum number of students necessary to qualify for it? I look forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, George Moore G类雅思写作讲解及范文：Complain类 ? Complaint 说明意图+说明状况+解决方案 1. I am writing to complain about/that 2. I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with somebody about something 3. I am most reluctant to complain, but 4. I feel sorry to trouble you but I am afraid I have to make a complaint about Examples: I am writing to complain about the service on the Beijing-Shanghai train which I took on August 16, 2001. I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about the Walkman I bought at the duty-free shop in your airport on February 14, 2005. ? End of a complaint letter 1. I would be grateful / I shall appreciate it very much if you could take the matter into consideration and solve it at your earliest convenience. 2. I would like to have this matter settled by the end of/ within 14 days. Writing task 1 v You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting. They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you. v Write a letter to the Accommodation Office at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons. Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you that I wish to move into a new room next term. I would prefer a single room, as I find the present sharing arrangement inconvenient. I must explain that the reason for my dissatisfaction is my roommates inconsiderate behavior. For one thing, his friends are constantly visiting him; for another, he regularly holds noisy parties. In addition, he sometimes borrows my things without asking me. In these circumstances, I find it difficult to concentrate on my students, and I am falling behind in my assignments. I am sure you will agree that the only solution is for me to move into a room of my own, where I will be free from such distractions. Therefore, I would be grateful if you could find a single room for me, preferably not in the same building but as near to the college campus as possible. Yours sincerely, Janice Kennedy Writing task 1 You have received your pay for your summer holiday part-time job, but your pay is less than you were promised. Please write a letter to the manager of the unit, clearly stating what work you have done and how long your work took. While explaining your case, put forward your demand and suggestion. Dear Manager, I have received the $800 cheque which you pay to me as a part-time software programmer in your company during my latest summer vacation. However, I am at a loss why the amount is $ 100 less than you promised to pay me. It was contracted that a part-time software programmers weekly wage is $ 300. I signed the contract with you and consequently worked in your company for a total of 3 weeks. In the period, I went to and from work on time and to your satisfaction, I completed each task that you assigned me without any errors. Also, no blame about me was ever heard in any aspect. So my total income should be $ 900, which is $ 100 more than that I gained from you. I firmly insist on your kind explanation of the difference and making it up as soon as possible. Your early reply would be highly appreciated. 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