雅思写作大作文高分攻略分享.docx

雅思写作大作文高分攻略分享 雅思写作大作文考试范围比较广泛，而且考题偏学术类，所以我们想在考试中拿到高分，那么就要在完全的构造层面、内容层面以及语言方面都特别精彩。接下来小明为大家共享一些雅思写作高分攻略，希望能帮助各位考生在考试中更有把握拿到一个满足的成果。 雅思写作大作文高分攻略共享 构造层面 起先段和末尾段不必过长,也不是重心点. 高校作业我常常是先写行为主体一部分,进行后,再写起先段和末尾段,较为省时省力.雅思大作文也是,起先段尽可能简易,末尾段也是,乃至可以不写. 按段“paragraphing”在高校作业和雅思都很重要. 段落最好是长短特别,尽量削减一长一短.雅思索试的行为主体段落一般5句就较长了,而高校作业能够略微长一点,能够写到100多英语单词一段. 內容层面 高校作业和雅思作文都注意中心句. 中心句做为段落详细内容的小结,出現在第一句话,让阅读者快速清楚段落的內容,可谓是学术探讨书面语言的运动定律之一. 很多中国学生在中心句上关键犯2个不正确： 1,沒有相匹配题型; 2,段落探讨和中心句不符. 高校作业一段话一般只写一个观点,段落阐述全过程中特别少出現转折点(譬如说however, on the other hand这些).高校作业一般篇幅很多,假如一段话写2-三个观点,通常就不足观点进行全部作业. 我常常和学员说：“高校作业,遇到一个观点肯定要好好珍惜”. 而雅思作文因为我经常激励学员只写一个观点,不必写2-三个观点.将一个事儿说清楚,比将2-三个观点列举好些的多. 高分数高校作业和高分数雅思作文常有个特点：你了解自身在写什么. 很多同学们写高校作业较为大的难题是她们受自身搜集的信息内容的危害,七拼八凑,沒有清晰的观点和具体的阐述,该阐述的没阐述(由于找不着材料),不应当详尽写的写一大堆(由于恰好找寻有关的文章内容),常有舍本逐末,重中之重不清晰的难题. 雅思作文也是这般,很多同学们事实上也说不大清晰这一观点的大道理是啥(譬如说,学习历史为何能够吸取教训,去看书怎么会激起想像力,这些),因此经常是反复、弹跳、扯别的的物品凑篇幅,这些,沒有清晰表述. 每一个观点要有区分度,不必反复.观点还要有唯一性,不能够正反面观点都能够应用(譬如说有同学说图书管能够散播专业学问,可是互联网还可以散播专业学问,这一观点就沒有唯一性). 語言层面 高校作业和雅思作文都不能用you. 都不行以应用习语,或是一小段文案的表述(譬如说a lot of, heaps of, tons of这些),也不能引用名言警句. 将事儿说清楚,而不是有意应用长尾词和长句. 一个语句假如超出25个英语单词,就并不是特别好.就算一个语句那麼长,最好是不必持续好多个语句那麼长. 必需写具体的语句. 高校作业无论是写essay還是report,一般必需陈述句,不必写祈使句或是疑问句.雅思作文也是. 雅思写作素材：年青一代 Does the younger generation know best? Arguments 1. The young are better educated and more broad-minded. 2. The young enjoy a lot more things than the old: they have money to spend; they are less dependent on their parents; they grow up more quickly; and they enjoy more freedom. 3. The young question the values and assumptions of the older generation and they are right. 4. The young enjoy more freedom and have a stronger sense of responsibility. 5. The old tend to settle differences by conventional politics and violence. 6. Some old people do not have noble ambitions and only strive for material possessions. 7. The old are unable to keep away from the rat race, in which they have lost touch with the most important things in life. 8. The old can learn from the young. Young people are more devoted to their friends. 9. The young know how to enjoy work and leisure and not to be inhibited. 10. The young live in the present rather than in the past or future. Counter-arguments 1. The young do not assume their responsibility; they evade it. 2. The young have too much money and they are spoiled. 3. The young are only interested in themselves. 4. The young seek material possessions like clothing, cars, etc. They do not wish to work for them. 5. The young should feel grateful to the older generation, who have created a good life for them. 6. The old provide the young with a good education and money to spend. 7. The older generation fought in the two world wars. They faced real problems, but the young have an easier life. 8. Young people have too much freedom and have no sense of morality. 9. The older generation is too kind and soft with the young. A tougher policy is needed and might work wonders. 10. Young people's outlook on the world is very bleak and they are sceptical of everything. 雅思写作素材：应当放任孩子的发展吗? Does parental permissiveness affect children's development? Arguments 1. The excessive pennissiveness of present-day parents is doing more harm than good to children and society as well. 2. Children should develop the habit of working and living independently and, meanwhile, practise the virtue of being filial to their parents. 3. Children who have a surfeit of happiness in their childhood often emerge like stodgy puddings and fail to make a success of life. 4. The fact that young people nowadays are self-centred, indifferent and inconsiderate of others is largely the outcome of parental permissiveness in their childhood. 5. Parental authority in a family helps a child to develop his character healthily. 6. Parents should exercise strict discipline over their children because, the more permissive the parents are, the more rebellious against their parents the children will become. 7. Lavish care and excessive permissiveness will only give rise to hedonism among the younger generation. 8. If one lets the child do whatever he wants to, he will ruin the child for life. 9. We have to admit the fact that we now have got a generation of spoilt, selfcentred brats with no respect for their elders. 10. The spread of juvenile delinquency in our age is largely due to parental pennissiveness. Counter-argmnents 1. More care for children is not the same as permissiveness to them. 2. The truth is that parents nowadays do not take enough care of their children and often neglect their development because the parents are only interested in their careers. 3. Parents are not at all permissive to their children. Violence often takes place in families in which children are abused. 4. Only a relaxed family atmosphere can help the physical and psychological growth of children. 5. To let children do what they like contributes to their independence and competence in their adult lives. 6. It is unfair to blame parents for the spread of juvenile delinquency. There are a lot of other causes involved. 7. Many cases show that children leave home and become members of street gangs just because they can not bear authoritarian control over them by their parents. 8. Strict discipline does not always work in terms of developing children's personal qualities. Too much pressure on children leads to rebellion and other extreme actions. 9. Parents are not justified in using violence to keep discipline and maintain their authority over the children. 10. Children are human beings, too. They need to be protected instead of being frequently scolded or physically abused. 雅思写作全攻略：处于被动危害大 真情流露没必要 考试时，监考老师通常发觉有的考生坐在那里根本就是在玩深厚，他在那里思索人生的宏大哲理;他在那里要想出一个观点，想出一个理由，想出一个措施，非要显得别出心裁。陷入这种境地的考生，明显犯了一个根本性的错误。参考时间为40分钟的作文，一般应当在35分钟之内完成，再用几分钟的时间检查语言错误。可有的考生十几分钟一句话都写不了，就是因为他太进入角色了，他想向判卷的老师掏心掏肺。这是一个很大的误区。 表达顺畅最关键 考作文的目的纯粹是通过这一命题形式，考查考生的英语水平怎样。命题人关注的是书面表达实力是否顺畅，而不是看一个人有没有内容，思想有没有深度。千万不要去揣测判卷的老师喜爱什么观点。只有当作文明显跑题时，内容才体现出其重要性。不管缘由也好，措施也好，某一考生想到的任何一点，很可能命题人早已料到，而且确定会被成千上万的考生重复多数遍。因而曾经令自己激烈一时的想法，在判卷的老师看来全无感觉。规定式作文的拓展空间原来就特别有限，所以只要把作文按命题要求表达顺畅是关键。 英语表达憋得慌 许多学生在作文时最大障碍就是用英语表达意思很困难。对于这一点，首先要树立信念。事实上，大部分考生都受过正规的高校英语教化，即使是一些自学的考生，其英语水平也足以写好一篇考研作文。关键在于要把这种潜力挖掘出来。朗文词典(Longman的Dictionary)的最大特点，就是用2000个核心词来说明几十万个词条，而且词条大都有几个义l项。由此可见，并不肯定要用多么困难l的英语来表达，也不肯定非得添加一些高难度的单词以加深判卷老师的印象。事实上，简洁的语言也能表达困难的事物。闻名的美国作家海明威的作品以其明白晓畅的语言吸引了千千万万的读者，就是一个明证。 英语思维不现实 用英语思维来写作文是不现实的。假如能用英语思维，也就谈不上会遇到多大的困难了。在实际写作过程当中，脑子里想的是中文句子，然后把一个一个的中文句子译成英文。在翻译的时候努力寻求一一对应的关系，希望找到与中文词对应的英文单词。结果句子结构和单词的选用受到中文的影响，自己感觉上也是“憋”得费劲，或者觉得表达出来了，意思差不多，而事实上给人的感觉依旧还是中文。若是让老外来看这篇作文的话，或许根本就弄不清晰文章的内容，而判卷的中国老师在判卷时往往能想象出文章是怎样写出来的。在这种状况下，出路在于把中文译成英文时，不要去追求一一对应的关系，而应当“得其意，忘其形”。 语言表达简洁化 在写作时用简洁的语言把困难的意思表达出来也可谓之宏大。对于一个一时找不着词的概念，应当用一种迂回曲折的方式把意思表达清晰。或用一个短语，或用一个从句，或三言两语，假如没出什么语言错误的话，这也算是一种宏大! 处于被动危害大 许多人在写作过程中从头至尾都处于被动状态，当有内容想要表达清晰的时候，却又发觉种.种途径都不行能表达好，只好硬着头皮把自己意识到没把握的东西牵强写上去。毫无疑问，这种连自己都意识到可能是错误的东西，只会产生于己不利的负面作用。所以，当有的内容感觉一点找不着、的英语实在表达不清晰的时候，就应当彻底地放弃。开动脑筋多想几点内容、的理由和措施，假设想到四条理由，但因为语言表达的问题，其中一条理由说不清晰，那么就应当机立断地把它放弃，写上另外三点理由就可以了(或许两点就够了)。由此可见，主动主动的看法会使自己在考试中有更大的敏捷性。 雅思写作大作文高分攻略共享本文来源：网络收集与整理，如有侵权，请联系作者删除，谢谢！第13页 共13页第 13 页 共 13 页第 13 页 共 13 页第 13 页 共 13 页第 13 页 共 13 页第 13 页 共 13 页第 13 页 共 13 页第 13 页 共 13 页第 13 页 共 13 页第 13 页 共 13 页第 13 页 共 13 页