雅思写作动笔前5分钟思考的重要性.docx

雅思写作动笔前5分钟思考的重要性 在起先你的雅思写作之前，肯定抑制住自己迫切动笔焦急忙着写完作文的心。我知道时间珍贵，所以你准备边写边构思，可是这真的是一条雅思写作的不归路，因为匆忙之中的动笔，往往造成无可挽回的错误，这错误可能是审题，可能是观点，可能是论证方法。所以，请停下脚步，用珍贵的5分钟想一想想一想。 雅思写作动笔前5分钟思索的重要性 有效的写作来自于有效的思索 你写的和你想的必需是一样的，而不是写前想一想，提笔又是另一篇只是简洁的规划思路是不够的 最好是写之前想好，而不是写完了再来想雅思索试真的没时间打几遍草稿 什么时候想?每段开头和每句开头句子是你作文的关键组成部分 怎么想?定向思维最好列个清单，这样会很有帮助的。 说明一下为什么要在”Thinking”上花时间(而不是草草动笔)表面上看起来这样做会“奢侈”一些时间，因为大多数人的想法是：快些写啊写啊!想啥啊! 但是当你想完了以后，你会发觉你写的更有效(more efficiently)也就是说，废话少了，不仅写完了，而且还写好了(这就不仅仅是写完一篇作文，而是写好一篇作文) 来看看详细怎么做吧! 清楚的思维使你更好的写作 其实道理很简洁，你雅思作文一半的得分都来自 Task Response (是否切题，还是写跑题了)与Coherence and Cohesion(文章连贯性，是不是上句不接下句，还是很有层次，有依次)。这两个评分标准跟你运用的语言(单词，词组，语法)都没什么关系，但是跟你的行文思路(thought)和文章结构(organisation)干脆相关。换句话说，你全文语法(grammar)全对，词汇(vocab)用的都特别美丽，你也就能得5分。要拿那另外的分，就得有思索的技能。 脑子里的规划是不够的 在考场上再去想你要写什么基本是没什么卵用的。就算你现想出文章的结构，所运用的词汇还有思路，你还是不知道怎么把它们拼凑到一起去。并且几乎就没什么学生可以在考场上的那一点点时间就可以规划出以上所提的这些。缘由是什么?因为你觉得想这些东西是在奢侈时间。 大错特错。你的写作规划不是完整的答案，你可以边写边完善。 你的结构/思路/词汇全都须要你的规划(Plan)来组织。 别老是打草稿，想好了再写 假如你没方法在40分钟内写完雅思作文那大部分都是因为你老是写错，各种错(语法错了啊，单词不会拼啦，反复表达一个意思又重写句子啦等等)耽搁了你的时间。要避开这个问题就肯定要想好了再写。想想应当怎么说最好。假如你以前写作一些学术类的文章，你就应当知道，最好是把你一遍遍打草稿的时间拿来想想究竟该怎么写。 写每一段之前，想一想 学生写作文的时候，写着写着就停笔了，他不知道怎么写下去了!别笑，我们大家都常常犯这样的错误。为什么?因为句子与句子之间都没什么联系。(没有连贯性)。 你得有一个完整的思路。必需把整个思路想清晰了再动笔，别小看这个小技巧，你试试，写作立马不一样了!(而不是边写边想) 想你所想 OK，我们知道动笔前要想了，那“想”些什么呢?这取决于你的阅历，你的学历等等。不要怕观点不对，说你自己心里想的，说实话就行了。 检查清单 段落 思路/语言 我的语言和思路够写一篇完整的文章吗? 这段话的中心思想是什么?我能写一句话吗? 文章结构 在我的文章里有中心思想吗? 这一段跟其他段有什么联系? 连贯性/结构 这段话在整个文章结构里是什么? 对于这个意思的表达，我须要说明缘由或举例吗? 这段话要写几句? 句子连贯性 我准备用这几个句子说明个什么问题?在脑子里能把它说出来吗? 这个句子是主要想法吗?还是一个例子?一个说明?或者别的? 这个句子跟上个句子有联系吗?须要用连接词吗?可以用别的方式去连接吗? 语法 你确定语法都正确吗?假如不确定的话，能不能换个说法(不至可能出现语法错误?) 语法是不是太简洁了?(只有陈述句)还是太重复了?(老是定语从句) 词汇 精确运用词汇了吗? 我须要运用上面句子的词汇吗(还是要换一个)?我运用了同义词吗? 这段话是书面体吗(而不是口头语)? 方法总结：或许，摆了这么思索项，有人已经看不下去了：你倒是让我60分钟写一篇文章，还是让我想一篇文章啊。讲了这么多，其实是想告知大家，做任何事情，都是讲方法论的，雅思写作自然如此。诚然你可以激情灵感迸发地边写边思索，让灵动的思绪带领你的文章的肆意前行。可是，这种方式是很危急的，是难以复制的，你状态好时，可能发飙写出高分作文，可你状态不好时，有可能让你写出一篇偏题的，观点孱弱的，结构混乱的垃圾文章。上面讲的这个5分钟审题，其实就是为了一步步告知你一个平安保险的捷径写作方法，前期的麻烦是会了给你以后削减麻烦。在刚起先操练时，很耗时，可只要娴熟之后，它就会带来你整个写作过程的高效。你的框架，你的观点，你的主要论据已经提前构思好。那么无论如何，你不会偏题，你的字数不会缺，你的观点论证过程够饱满。这几点加起来就是一个7分的作文了。 雅思写作观点语料：语言 language 语言 English as an international language English is widely used around the world It is becoming a global second language It is the dominant language of technology, science and international business International business meetings are regularly held in English The most important textbooks and journals are published in English The ability to speak English is a necessary skill in the modern world Negative of English as an International Language If one language is dominant, other languages may disappear The dominant language brings its own culture American culture has become popular around the world Other cultures may be damaged As an alternative to English, a new global language could be invented It would have no nationality or culture attached to it This could help to promote international peace and understanding Esperanto is an example of a language that was invented with this aim 相关雅思历史真题 1.Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small numbers of people. Some people say that governments should spend public money on saving these languages, while others believe that would be a waste of money. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. 2.Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 3.Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? 雅思写作观点语料：房屋建筑 Housing and Architecture住房与建筑 State/council housing 公共住房 In some countries the government provides state or council housing This helps people who cannot afford to buy their own house It can be argued that state housing creates dependence on the government People should be rely on the government to look after them People have no incentive to earn money and buy their own home Council properties are often made with cheap, poor-quality materials. Old Buildings 老建筑 Historic buildings are part of a countrys heritage They should be protected Old buildings are often considered to be works or art They give character to cities and attract tourists They show us how people lived in the past We identify countries by architectural symbols like the pyramids in Egypt Governments should spend money on looking after historic buildings They need regular repairs and maintenance New buildings should be designed to complement them Modern/green buildings 现代/绿色建筑 Modern buildings should be designed to be environmentally friendly They should use less energy and produce less waste Modern insulation can make houses more energy-efficient Solar and wind power can be used to generate electricity Rainwater and waste water can be recycled and used to flush toilets. Modern glass buildings take advantage if natural light 相关雅思历史真题 1.It is more important for a building to serve its purposes than to look beautiful. Architects do not need to worry about whether it is a real work of art. Do you agree or disagree? 2.Some people believe that new buildings should be built in traditional styles. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 雅思写作观点语料：钱 Money金钱相关语料 Money and Society Society has become increasingly materialistic People aspire to earn more money They want a bigger house or a better car We connect wealth and material possessions with happiness and success Brands like “Armani” or ”Mercedes” are status symbols Advertising creates new desires and needs It persuades us to buy the latest styles Positives of Consumerism Consumerism creates employment It helps to reduce poverty It encourages innovation and creativity in business We live in a global economy We have a better quality of life Negatives of Consumerism Consumerist societies create more waste They use more natural resources They cause damage to the environment Consumerism creates a “throw-away” culture Advertisers tell us who we are and what we want Wealth does not lead to happiness Materialism causes greed and crime We should return to traditional values like sharing 相关雅思历史真题 1.Economic progress is often used to measure a country's success. However, some people believe that other factors are more important. What other factors should also be considered when measuring a country's success? Do you think one factor is more important than others? 2.Some people believe that money is the most important factor for achieving happiness. However, others believe that happiness has nothing to do with money. Do you agree or disagree? 3.Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 雅思写作动笔前5分钟思索的重要性本文来源：网络收集与整理，如有侵权，请联系作者删除，谢谢！第13页 共13页第 13 页 共 13 页第 13 页 共 13 页第 13 页 共 13 页第 13 页 共 13 页第 13 页 共 13 页第 13 页 共 13 页第 13 页 共 13 页第 13 页 共 13 页第 13 页 共 13 页第 13 页 共 13 页