初三英语书面表达探讨.ppt

永川中学永川中学 曾臻曾臻2014.3.27 ComputersComputer GamesComputer Games 书面表达面表达(15分分)李小虎是一位中学生，但他沉迷于李小虎是一位中学生，但他沉迷于电脑游游戏中，中，影响了他的学影响了他的学习。作。作为他的好朋友，你打算怎么帮他的好朋友，你打算怎么帮助他？助他？请用下面所用下面所给的提示的提示词写一篇短文。写一篇短文。要求：要求：词数数8080词左右左右 提示提示词：give up,concentrate on,be(become)give up,concentrate on,be(become)interested in.interested in._How can we help him?Step Lead-in Step Presentation 重重庆中考作文中考作文评评分分细则细则第四档（第四档（优优）：（：（12-15 12-15分）分）完全完成了完全完成了试题规试题规定的任定的任务务。-覆盖了所有内容要点。覆盖了所有内容要点。-准确使用丰富的准确使用丰富的词汇词汇和和语语言言结结构。构。-全文全文结结构构紧紧凑凑，有效地使用有效地使用了了语语句句间间的的连连接成份，接成份，符合英符合英语语交交际习惯际习惯；具；具备备较较强强的的语语言运用能力言运用能力。第三档第三档 （良）：（良）：（811 811 分）分）完全完成了完全完成了试题规试题规定的任定的任务务。-覆盖了所有内容要点。覆盖了所有内容要点。-恰当使用恰当使用较较丰富的丰富的词汇词汇和和语语言言结结构。构。-适当运用适当运用语语句句间间的的连连接成份，接成份，较较好好地达到了交地达到了交际际的的 目的。目的。第二档第二档 （中）：（中）：（4 7 4 7 分）分）基本完成基本完成了了试题规试题规定的任定的任务务。-没能覆盖所有内容要点。没能覆盖所有内容要点。-词汇词汇和和语语言言结结构不能完全构不能完全满满足写作任足写作任务务的要求。的要求。-文章不文章不够连贯够连贯 ，影响，影响对对写作内容的理解。写作内容的理解。第一档第一档 （差）：（差）：（0 3 0 3 分）分）未完成未完成试题规试题规定的任定的任务务。-漏掉漏掉较较多内容要点或写的内容与多内容要点或写的内容与规规定任定任务务无关。无关。-词汇词汇和和语语言言结结构构 错误较错误较多。多。-内容不内容不连贯连贯，无法，无法传传达有效信息。达有效信息。lHow to perfect a composition?How to perfect a composition?Analyze the given imformation Analyze the given imformation(审审 )Pick out and list the key points.Pick out and list the key points.（列列）Combine the sentences and fill them into twothree Combine the sentences and fill them into twothree paragrahs paragrahs（连连）Correct the composition using senior patterns Correct the composition using senior patterns（美美）Write it down with neat and beautiful handwritingWrite it down with neat and beautiful handwriting（写写）Step Explore 李小虎是一位中学生，但他沉迷于李小虎是一位中学生，但他沉迷于电脑游游戏中，影响了他中，影响了他的学的学习。作。作为他的好朋友，你打算怎么帮助他？他的好朋友，你打算怎么帮助他？请用下面所用下面所给的提示的提示词写一篇短文。写一篇短文。要求：要求：词数数8080词左右左右 提示提示词：give up,concentrate on,be(become)give up,concentrate on,be(become)interested in.interested in._ _主主题：人称：人称：时态：帮助朋友李小虎帮助朋友李小虎远离网离网络第一人称和第三人称第一人称和第三人称以一般以一般现在在时为主主Analyze(审审)李小虎是一位中学生，但他李小虎是一位中学生，但他沉迷沉迷于于电脑游游戏中，影响了他中，影响了他的学的学习。作。作为他的好朋友，你打算怎么他的好朋友，你打算怎么帮助帮助他？他？请用下面所用下面所给的提示的提示词写一篇短文。写一篇短文。要求：要求：词数数8080词左右左右 提示提示词：give up,concentrate on,be(become)give up,concentrate on,be(become)interested in.interested in._list（列）（列）a middle school student spend too much time in.be bad harmful for.1.join in after-school activities,such as.2.ask.for help 3.concentrate on study.4.become interested in.5.help him with.Li Xiaohu,a middle school student spent too much time playing computer games.Now its bad for his study.As a good friend of his,I must do something to help him._,I think study is very important.He should spend most of his time on his study,he shoudnt spend much time playing computer games._,playing computer games too much is bad for his health,especially for his eyes._ he must give it up.I can play more sports with him after school.Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games._Ill ask him to concentrate more on his study.Of course,I will try my best to help him with all his subjects.At the same time,Ill ask both his parents and our teachers to help him,too.I think he will get good grades soon.FirstFirstlySecondlySoThirdlyAnd then lAdd words Li Xiaohu,a middle school student spent too much time playing computer games.Now its bad for his study.As a good friend of his,I must do something to help him.First,I think study is very important.He should spend most of his time on his study,he shoudnt spend much time playing computer games.Secondly,playing computer games too much is bad for his health,especially for his eyes.So he must give it up.I can play more sports with him after school.Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games.ThirdlyAnd then Ill ask him to concentrate more on his study.Of course,I will try my best to help him with all his subjects.At the same time,Ill ask both his parents and our teachers to help him,too.I think he will get good grades soon.I think its very important for him to study.He should spend most of his time on his study instead of playing computer games.If he decides to give up computer games,Im sure hell make great progress soon.Remember,Nothing is impossible!Li Xiaohu,a middle school student spent too much time playing computer games.Now its bad for his study.As a good friend of his,I must do something to help him.First,I think study is very important.He should spend most of his time on his study,he shoudnt spend much time playing computer games.Secondly,playing computer games too much is bad for his health,especially for his eyes.So he must give it up.I can play more sports with him after school.Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games.ThirdlyAnd then Ill ask him to concentrate more on his study.Of course,I will try my best to help him with all his subjects.At the same time,Ill ask both his parents and our teachers to help him,too.I think he will get good grades soon.I think its very important for him to study.He should spend most of his time on his study instead of playing computer games.If he decides to give up computer games,Im sure hell make great progress soon.Remember,Nothing is impossible!Step Practice “幸幸福福生生活活，从从呼呼吸吸开开始始”。随随着着中中国国经经济济快快速速发发展展，伴伴随随而而来来的的环环境境问问题题日日益益突突出出，尤尤其其是是近近段段时时间间以以来来，北北京京市市的的雾雾霾霾天天气气对对人人们们的的健健康康和和出出行行造造成成严严重重的的影影响响。假假如如你你是是一一名名北北京京市市的的中中学学生生。请请写写一一篇篇以以“protecting the environment（保保护护环环境境）”为为主主题题的的英英语语短文短文,谈谈谈谈如何如何改善改善北京的北京的雾雾霾天气。霾天气。要求：要求：1.haze weather(雾霾天气雾霾天气)2.词词数数80词词左右左右 3.书书写工整写工整,语语言言连贯连贯,就就话题话题展开可以合理展开可以合理发挥发挥 With the development of China,environment problems are becoming more and more serious.Especially the haze weather in Beijing._