专四写作模板课件教学文案.ppt

专四写作模板课件第一段第一段:(用现象或事实陈述用现象或事实陈述)引出要比较的两引出要比较的两个事物个事物,用一句话表达自己的观点用一句话表达自己的观点./用现象陈用现象陈述法、提问法引出比较的事物，主题句指出两述法、提问法引出比较的事物，主题句指出两个事物存在着明显的差异或不同点。个事物存在着明显的差异或不同点。第二段第二段:主题句承接首段观点主题句承接首段观点,限定本段内容限定本段内容.然后比较两事物的优缺点然后比较两事物的优缺点.(Topicsentence+First,second,third,theadvantageofA,butthedisadvantageofB.+supportingdetails)/直接评述直接评述A事物的主要特点事物的主要特点+扩展句，扩展句，B事物事物的主要特点的主要特点+扩展句。扩展句。第三段：结论，注意首尾观点一致。第三段：结论，注意首尾观点一致。/得出倾得出倾向性的结论，表明作者的态度。向性的结论，表明作者的态度。Which Mode of Travel Do you Like?With the general standard of living improving and the working week becoming shorter,more and more people are able to make a holiday trip to places of interest.While many like to join package tours for convenience,I prefer to travel on my own.The first part (from general to specific从从面面到到点，从点，从现象到具体象到具体讨论的事物，引出自己的事物，引出自己观点点)I liketravelingon my own not only becauseit givesagreatofindependenceandfreedom.Travelingonmyown,Immyownboss,andIcandecidewhentostartonmyway,wheretolingeralittlelongerandwhichspotcanbeskippedovertosaveenergyandtimeforanother spot.I can always adjust my plan.On thecontrary,inapackagetouryouredeprivedofasmuchfreedom as in a military base.At the sound of thewhistle,youhavetojumpupfromasoundsleepandhurrytothegatheringplacewhereyouarecollected.Atthesightofthelittleflagwaving,youmustimmediatelytakeyourselfawayfromthescenesyouaremarvelingatandfollowtheguidewhosesoleinterestistocoverallspotsaccordingtohisstrictschedule,regardlessoftheweatheroryourhealthcondition.（阐述理由，对比优缺点）（阐述理由，对比优缺点）True,youmayencounterinconveniencesifyoutravelindividually,forinstance,gettingaccommodations for the night and finding aplaceformeals.Butnothingcanbecomparedwiththefreedomwhichisvitaltoapersonwhotakes a holiday trip mainly to escape fromconstrainsofhisroutinelife.（首尾观点一致，得出结论，进一步阐明观点）（首尾观点一致，得出结论，进一步阐明观点）二、意义、重要性、危害性说明类作文二、意义、重要性、危害性说明类作文TheimportanceofextracurricularactivitiesTheimportanceofkeepingagoodmoodTravelbroadensourmindAmajoradvantageordisadvantageofadvertisingonTVadvertisingMorepressurefromacademicstudiesDOES(orDOESNOTdo)goodtous提示：第一段：大背景提示：第一段：大背景(上义背景，自己的态度：上义背景，自己的态度：重要？有利？有害？重要？有利？有害？)用引言句（概括式，描写，用引言句（概括式，描写，数据，提问）引出要讨论的事物或现象，表明作数据，提问）引出要讨论的事物或现象，表明作者对这一事物的基本看法。某种程度上就是再现者对这一事物的基本看法。某种程度上就是再现标题所给的标题所给的“定论定论”。第二段，之所以有利、有害、重要、有优势原第二段，之所以有利、有害、重要、有优势原因有两个，因有两个，firstly,(topicsentence)+supportingdetails;主题句承上启下,限定本段内容即重要性或危害性主要体现在哪些方面，接下来分述危害性或重要性，注意层次和句式。Secondly,(topicsentence)+supportingdetails第三段：结论第三段：结论.如果阐述重要性，则宜用建议式如果阐述重要性，则宜用建议式或展望式。如阐述其危害性，则用警示式结尾。或展望式。如阐述其危害性，则用警示式结尾。On Today s Education One of the main problems with todays education is that too much emphasis is placed on the test score.It has become the most important criterion for college enrollment.A student,however,creative and intelligent,will not be admitted into a college if his total scores are just one point less than required.It is also one of the crucial factors either in job assignment or in employment competitions.（由面及点入（由面及点入题）Thecompetitionforhighscoresamongstudentsbecomesintense.Studentsfindthemselvesconcentratingmoreonstrategiestoachievehighscoresthanonacquiringtheknowledge.Theywillplaytruantofsomesubsidiarycourses,skipoverthesubstancewhichwillnotbetestedon,evenpumpteachersforhintsonupcomingexams.（第一个角度：学生）（第一个角度：学生）Teachersareapttogivetheirstudentshighscores.Astheirjobisjudgedmainlybythestudentsperformanceintermsofscores,someteacherstendtoseteasypaperstotesttheirstudentsornarrowdownthescopeoftheexam.Someteachersevenleak“accidentally”theexamquestionsorlowertheircriterionofscoring.Asaresult,thetestfailtoachievethedesiredresults.（第二个角度：教师）（第二个角度：教师）Wemustsearchforanimmediatesolution,becausethecompetitionforhighscoresbecomessointensethatitactuallydefeatstheacademicgoalsofeducation.（警示式结尾）（警示式结尾）三、观点论证类三、观点论证类 （agree or disagreeagree or disagree）Ismoneyallpowerful?Isthriftnecessaryinmodernsociety?SomepeoplethinkthatmachinetranslationcanreplaceourEnglishstudy.Doyouagree?Whatsyouropinionaboutreducingchildrensexcessiveassignment?提示：第一段：背景提示：第一段：背景(随着随着有些有些人的观点及他们的理由人的观点及他们的理由),我的观我的观点。点。引言句（现象陈述法，数据法，提引言句（现象陈述法，数据法，提问法，对立法）开头，引出要评论的问法，对立法）开头，引出要评论的事物，说明别人的看法，引出自己的事物，说明别人的看法，引出自己的观点。观点。第二段，陈述理由并举例证明第二段，陈述理由并举例证明.段段首句承上启下，指出原因或理由，用首句承上启下，指出原因或理由，用拓展句分别加以说明或论述。拓展句分别加以说明或论述。第三段第三段,得出结论，提出建议得出结论，提出建议.第一段：引言句引出要评论的事物或问题，第一段：引言句引出要评论的事物或问题，第二句提出自己的论点。第二句提出自己的论点。第二段：段首句承上启下，限定论据范围。第二段：段首句承上启下，限定论据范围。正面论据之一（具有概括性）：用扩展句正面论据之一（具有概括性）：用扩展句加以延伸。加以延伸。正面论据之二（或反面论据）：用扩展句正面论据之二（或反面论据）：用扩展句加以延伸。加以延伸。第三段：结论，进一步阐述观点。第三段：结论，进一步阐述观点。批驳观点，阐述自己观点，采用正面立批驳观点，阐述自己观点，采用正面立论法。论法。Can Success be Measured in Terms of Money?There is a deep-rooted concept in the minds of many people that money is the only yardstick of success.What they do not realize is that there are many types of success,and some are associated with wealth and some not.It is high time that such people opened their eyes and took a good look at the world around them.Whileitistruethatasuccessfulbusinessmanorinventorwillusuallybecomerich,manyotherpeoplewhoareoutstandingintheirfieldsdonotreapmonetaryrewards.Oneexampleistherocketscientistwhomakesgreatachievementsinthefieldofastronauticswhilegaininggloryforhiscountry,butdrawsamodestsalary.AnotherexampleisLeiFeng,whohasmarkedhisnameinhistorybecausehislifewasdevotedhelpingothers,althoughheownedalmostnopersonalpossessions.Measuringsuccessbymoneyaloneleadspeopletostrivetomakemoneybyfairmeansorfoul.Ifonesonlygoalinlifeistobecomerich,withoutservingothersormakinganyworthwhileachievements,thenonecertainlycannotregardoneselfasasuccess.Furthermore,thosewhospendtheirlivesscramblingformoney,eventhoughtheygainit,arethebiggestlosersofall.MyViewonMoneyInmodernsocietyitseemsimpossibletolivewithoutmoney.Forinstance,acountryneedsmoneytodevelopitseconomyandtoraisepeopleslivingstandards.Forapersonsufferingfrompovertyoraseriousdisease,hehastogohungryortowaittodie.Moneyisevenregardedasasymbolofwealthandstatus.Asaproverbgoes,“Moneymakesthemarego.”Differentpeoplehavedifferentattitudestowardmoney.Somethinkofmoneyasthemostimportantthingintheworld.Theymaytryallmeans,suchasgamblingandcheating,tomakemoreandmoremoney.Theybelievethatmoneycanbringthemeverythingsuchasfancycars,luxurioushouses,expensivefurnitureandbeautifullovers.Somepeople,however,thinkthattherearethingsmoreimportantthanmoney,suchasgoodhealth,happinessandachievements.Theydevotethemselvestotheircareers.Theyearnmoneybyhardwork.Itseemstomethatmoneyisveryimportant.Withlotsofmoneywecanlivecomfortably.ButIdontthinkitisall-powerful.Therearestillthingslikefriendshipandlovemorevaluablethanmoney.Thererealsocertainthingsthatmoneycannotbuy,suchashealth,youthandhappiness.Foramillionairesufferingfromseriouscancer,moneycannotserveitspurpose.Moneyisonlyamediumofexchange,asymbolofourworkorachievement.Therefore,weshouldearnmoneybyhonestmeans.Onlywhenmoneyisobtainedbyhardworkcanitmakeusreallyhappy.MoneyIsNotAll-powerfulPeoplehavedifferentattitudestowardmoney.Somebelievethatmoneyisthesourceofhappiness.Withit,theycanbuywhatevertheyneed,whichmakestheirlifecomfortableandcolorful.Othersthinkthatmoneyistherootofallevil.Withmuchmoney,onemaybecomegreedy,selfishandimmoral.Oftenatoostrongdesireforandimproperuseofmoneymaydriveonemadandirrational,leadingtodisasterfinally.Myopinionisthatmoneyisveryimportant,butitcannotbringeverything.There is no doubt that we can hardly manage to live without money.Money is very important.With it we can buy large houses,delicious and nutritious foods,fine clothing and fancy cars.And with all these,we can surely live happily and comfortably.But there are still things that money cannot buy,such as health and friendship.For an affluent person suffering from an incurable disease,money cannot make him healthy again,and thus he can never gain happiness.A millionaire without true friends would feel lonely and sad.Besides,money obtained by illegal means such as gambling or cheating may encourage one to go astray.Therefore,wecannotexpectmoneytobringuseverything.Onlywhenweearnourmoneybyhonestmeansandspenditforthebenefitofothersaswell,canwefeeltruehappiness.四、现象解释类（为什么会有这种现象四、现象解释类（为什么会有这种现象TeenagesmokingsoarsWhycollegestudentshavedifficultyinfindingjobs?Thereasonfortheyoungchildrenscrimes提示：第一段：背景介绍提示：第一段：背景介绍(有一种现象有一种现象)+引引言言(thefollowingtworeasonscanexplaintheproblem)第二段：第二段：firstly,(reason1),secondly(reason2)第三段：总结第三段：总结Why is Western Fast-food So Popular?With Chinas opening policy,more and more foreign products are introduced to China.Among them is the western fast food.We can find many fast food restaurants in big cities and some,such as McDonald and KFC.Whyiswesternfastfoodsopopular?Ithinktherearetwomainreasons.Onereasonistheirenvironment.Almostallthatkindofrestaurantsareveryclean,andthewaitersserviceisfairlygood.AnotherreasonisthattheflavorofwesternfastfoodisquitedifferentfromChinesefood,whichattractsmanypeople,especiallyyoungchildren.Whatcanwelearnfromthissuccessfulcasesoastohelpourownfoodindustry?Firstly,wemustchangeourrestaurantsenvironmentandimprovetheservice.Secondly,weshouldsetupourownbrandandmakeitpopularamongpeople.Meanwhile,weshouldcreatemorenewspecialstylesoffoodtosatisfydifferentpeople.Inthisway,Chinasfoodindustrywilldefeatthewesternone.五、提出建议、解决问题类五、提出建议、解决问题类Onewaytosolvetheproblem(1998)Thebestwaytostayhealthy(2002)Presentsuggestiontoartsfestival(2005)Onewaytosolvetransportationproblem提示：第一段：背景介绍提示：第一段：背景介绍(问题很严重问题很严重+解决办法好解决办法好几个几个+最好最好的一个办法是的一个办法是)第二段：我的办法好第二段：我的办法好fortworeasons.Firstly,secondly第三段：总结第三段：总结How to Keep Healthy Nowadays more and more people are concerned about their health.These people are interested in physical exercises.If you happen to be in one of the city parks early in the morning,you will see lots of people there.Some are practicing Taijiquan and sword play and others are either running,walking or exercising through dance.Research shows that getting plenty of exercises makes the heart and reducing the chance of heart attack,and helping to lower blood pressure.Medicalresearchershaveprovedthatwhatpeopleeataffectstheirhealth.Theyadvisepeopletoeatmorefruitsandvegetablesandlessredmeatlikebeefandporkbecausemeatcontainsmorefatthanpoultryandfish.Fatscanbuildupinthearteries,blocktheflowofblood,andcauseaheartattackorstroke.Gettingridofbadhabitslikesmokinganddrinkingalcoholisalsoanimportantwaytokeephealthy,butitstillfailstodrawenoughpeoplesattention.Ifpeoplepayequalattentiontotheabovementionedthreewaysofkeepingfit,theywillgreatlyimprovetheirhealth.MyIdeaofaUniversityArtsFestivalTheArtsFestivalissupposedtoprovidethestudentsaplatformonwhichtheycanshowtheirstrongsuitstheyarecoveredupwhentheyaresittingintheclassroomandplaytheroleofstudents.ThestudentbodymayorganizetheArtsFestivalintheformofcompetitionandthecompetitioncanbewidelyrangedaccordingtotheinterestsofstudentssuchasspeeches,drawing,dancing,singing,instrumentplaying,chessplayingandsoon.WhyshouldtheArtsFestivalbebetterorganizedintheformofcompetitionbasedonstudentsinterests?First,thestudentsareambitiousgroup.CompetitioncanspicetheFestivalandstimulatethedesiresofthestudentstoshowthemselveswithouthesitationandreservation.Second,aplatformprovidedforstudentsinterestsmayindirectlyhelptheiracademicperformance.Supposeastudentwhoperformspoorlyinhisacademiclifewinsacompetitionofhisstrongsuit,heislikelytostarttoholdapositiveattitudetowardhimself:IamnotasinferiorasIhavebelieved.Hisconfidenceisstrengthenedinsomedegreeandthisplaysanactiveroleinhisstudy.Inthisway,theArtsFestivalhelpsthestudentsinhisstudiesindirectly.TheArtsFestivalisnotonlyanimportantformingpartoftheextracurricularactivitiesofuniversitystudentscampuslivesbutalsoanecessarycomplementtothecopiedlivesofstudy.Therefore,itisthepurposeofArtsFestivalthatcancolorizethecollegelifeandbenefittheuniversitystudentsspiritually.六六.观点阐述类观点阐述类第第一一段段：背背景景介介绍绍引引出出要要讨讨论论的的问问题题或或现现象象（引引言言句句Recently /It is new +现现象象或或问问题题）+不不同同人人们们的的观观点点及及其其理理由由（可可以以用用cases,facts,analogy,referring to an authority）第第二二段段：我我的的观观点点及及其其理理由由First,second,第三段：结论。第三段：结论。My View On Campus MarriageV V There is a newly dissension putting forward these days:Is it legally allowed for Chinese on-campus students to get married before they complete their courses?Some people prefer yes while some others prefer no.Certainly a large number of people just cannot decide which side they should be stand.In fact,the governments allow on-campus students to get marriedbefore they complete their course.Thereisntaregulationproclaimedinwritingtoforbidmarriageofon-campusstudents.Butitmustaffectthosetries.Inmyopinion,itisunnecessarytoforbidon-campusstudentstogetmarriedbeforethey finished their college,however,itshouldnt be advocated or encouraged.Because,for on-campus students,theyplaytheroleaslearners.Theirmaintaskistolearn.Iftheymarried,theirschoolworkmustbeaffectedandtheymaynotgraduate favorably or may not becapable for future works.So,I believe:almostallon-campusstudentswoulddealwiththequestionreasoningly.MyViewonCompetitionandCooperationCooperationandcompetitionarebothimportant.Theyareattributesthatareequallynecessaryforapersontoachievesuccessinhislife.Ifyoulivedonafarmtwohundredyearsago,youcouldbelesscooperativetoearnasuccessfullife,justworkinghardinyourfields,feedingyourfowlsandcows.Butinmoderntimes,peoplearelivingmoreandmorecooperatively.Forexample,inafootballmatch,allplayersontheteammustworkwithjointeffortsinordertowinthematch.Suchactivitiesrequireteamwork.Youcanseeworkersattheassemblylinedoingtheirpartsofworkindividually,butyoucanhardlyseeanyproductsaccomplishedbyonlyoneperson.WiththerapiddevelopmentoftransportationandcommunicationsystemsliketheInternet,cooperationisbecomingmoreandmoreindispensableandvitalforapersontosurviveinthisworld.Butcompetitionisalsoveryimportantinmodernsociety.Ifyouareanentrepreneurandwishcustomerstobuyyourproducts,youhavetocompetewithothers.Competitionstimulatespeopletoimprovetheirworkandmakestheworlddeveloprapidly.Bothcompetitionandcooperationareinvolvedineveryfieldoflifeandwork.Actuallyinmanyactivities,botharerequired.Forinstance,inlearningEnglish,wecompetewitheachother.Asaresult,weallmakegreatprogress.Ourstudyalsodemandsteamwork.Weoftenhelpeachotherbypointingouteachothersmistakesandexchangingideas.Whileweadvocatecompetition,weshouldnotneglectcooperation.Humanbeingsaresocialbeings.Noonecansurvivewithouthelpfromothers.Onlywithbothcompetitionandcooperationcanweachievesuccessandliveinpeaceandharmonywitheachother.此课件下载可自行编辑修改，仅供参考！此课件下载可自行编辑修改，仅供参考！感谢您的支持，我们努力做得更好！谢谢感谢您的支持，我们努力做得更好！谢谢