中考英语作文写作指导-精华.ppt

中考英语作文写作中考英语作文写作By Lu Sulin SheHong Middle School初中英语新课程标准初中英语新课程标准 五级写作目标：五级写作目标：能根据写作要求，收集，准备素材能根据写作要求，收集，准备素材能独立起草短文，短信等，并在教师指导下进行修改能独立起草短文，短信等，并在教师指导下进行修改能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系能简单描述人物或事件能简单描述人物或事件能根据所给图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明能根据所给图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明 7-97-9年级分别完成三、四、五级目标年级分别完成三、四、五级目标中考英语作文中考英语作文8 8个常考话题个常考话题一、一、介绍人和事件介绍人和事件 （自己、家庭、朋友、老师、个人变化、个人感受等）（自己、家庭、朋友、老师、个人变化、个人感受等）二、介绍地点（旅游等）二、介绍地点（旅游等）三、校园生活（春游、校规、科目、学习困难等）三、校园生活（春游、校规、科目、学习困难等）四、课外生活（家庭生活、家务劳动、电影、个人爱好等）四、课外生活（家庭生活、家务劳动、电影、个人爱好等）五、假期安排（计划、过去经历等）五、假期安排（计划、过去经历等）六、节假日活动（志愿者活动、过去经历）六、节假日活动（志愿者活动、过去经历）七、环境、健康（环保、疾病、食品健康等）七、环境、健康（环保、疾病、食品健康等）八、个人观点建议（提建议、劝告等）八、个人观点建议（提建议、劝告等）Dear Dr.Know，I m pleased to write to ask for some help.I want to tell you some problems we meet in English study.First，some of us arent interested in English.We thinkstudying English is such a boring thing.And then its sodifficult for us to remember all the words in the texts.So lots of us dont have enough confidence to keep up English study.And we are always afraid to join the group discussion.Whats more,there are so many new words we havent meet before in the passage.I dont know what to do.Sometimes we cant understand the main idea,let alone(更不更不用说用说)answer the questions about them.But the most difficult thing is to write.We often use wrong words and sentences.Can you help us?How can we improve our English?Pleasegive us some useful advice.Thank you very much.Please write soon.Mary(the beginning)(the ending)the body（正（正文）文）basic structure(基本结构安排基本结构安排)basic steps(基本写作步骤基本写作步骤)search（审）（审）list（列）（列）add(加加:开头和结尾开头和结尾)connect(连连)beautify(美：谚语美：谚语/例子例子)健康很重要。在学习和健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告调查报告,并提倡大家并提倡大家进行假日休闲。进行假日休闲。审审(search)travelstay at homevisit friends or parentswork 如何度假如何度假调查报告调查报告倡议假日休闲倡议假日休闲stay at homeworkvisit friends or parentstravel列列(list)根据以下关键词及图表用根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。简单的句子列出文章的要点。A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.Enjoy your vacation.列列(list)How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.（the beginning）A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.They watch TV or surf the internet.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.（the ending）加加(add)加首尾加首尾，使结构完整。可以采取总分总总分总结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁、漂亮。How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.According to it,a lot of people travel.And some people stay at home.They watch TV or surf the Internet.Also some other people visit friends or parents.However,a few people work.Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.连连(connect)Writing skills（“写写”的技的技巧）巧）方法一方法一:善用词汇善用词汇 甚至善用甚至善用高级词汇高级词汇Which is better?他们在海滩上听音乐。他们在海滩上听音乐。A They listened to the music on the beach.B They enjoyed the music on the beach.Which is better?我希望你能帮助我。我希望你能帮助我。A I wish you can help me.B Im looking forward to your help.Which is better?他们很早就到了。他们很早就到了。A They arrived early.B They arrived as early as they could.Which is better?最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。A His dog was saved at last.He was very surprised.B To his surprise,his dog was saved at last.A I think learning English is interesting.B I find it really fun to learn English.我认为学英语很有趣。我认为学英语很有趣。我们应该保护环境。我们应该保护环境。A We should protect the environment.B Its our duty to protect the environment.方法二方法二:活用多种句型活用多种句型Writing skills（“写写”的技的技巧）巧）她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。A She is very young.She cant carry the heavy box.B She is too young to carry the heavy box.C She is so young that she cant carry the D She is not old enough to carry the 方法三方法三:妙用关联词妙用关联词Writing skills（“写写”的技巧）的技巧）1.表示并列或递进表示并列或递进:and,as well as,bothand,whats more not onlybut also,neithernor2.表示选择表示选择:or,eitheror3.表示转折表示转折:but,however,althoughthough,after all,anyway4.表示因果表示因果:because,so,therefore,since,for,as a result5.表示条件表示条件:if,unless6.表示对比表示对比:instead,notbut,while,in the same way,on the one handon the other hand7.表示解释表示解释:for example,for instance,such as,that is to say,in other words,to tell the truth8.表示顺序表示顺序:to begin with,firstly,first(of all),second(ly),next,later,since then,from then on,finally,in the end9.表示强调表示强调:also,besides,especially,actually,in fact10.表示结论表示结论:all in all,altogether,in a word,generally speaking,in short关联词关联词(connection words)Lets try_ I am tired,I keep on working till midnight.He didnt go to movies,he went to the concert _.We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming,running and hiking._,he stood up.Then he got out._,he went back._,he smiled.ThoughAlthoughinsteadlikeFirstNextFinallyAt lastHow do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.According to it,a lot of people travel.And some people stay at home.They watch TV or surf the Internet.Also some other people visit friends or parents.However,a few people work.Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.连连(connect)美美(beautify)We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report.According to it,most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.Then some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed.However,a few people have to work.Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.美美(beautify)According to it,most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.Then some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.However,a few people have to work.As the saying goes,“All work and no play makesJack a dull boy.”Come and enjoy your vacation.Peoplewho relax well work well.美美(beautify)And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed.Proverb（谚语）（谚语）/saying加谚语加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于可用于”beginning”和和”ending”，多用，多用后者。后者。锻炼对学生有好处锻炼对学生有好处 It is good for us students to take exerciseAs the saying goes,“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”It is good for us students to take exercise.集中注意力于学习集中注意力于学习We should concentrate on our studies.As the saying goes,“No pains,no gains.”We should concentrate on our studies.加谚语加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。加谚语加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于可用于”beginning”和和”ending”，多用，多用后者。后者。加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法Joining the English club is a good way to learn English.As the saying goes,“Practice makes perfect.”So joining the English club is a good way to learn English.加谚语加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。加谚语加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于可用于”beginning”和和”ending”，多用，多用后者。后者。Enjoy some proverbs1.Practice makes perfect.2.Think twice before you do.4.Do as the Romans do.三思而后行。三思而后行。熟能生巧。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。有志者事竟成。入乡随俗。入乡随俗。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。失败是成功之母。失败是成功之母。5.The early bird catches the worm.3.Where there is a will,there is a way.6.Failure is the mother of success.Enjoy some proverbs 7.It is no use crying over spilt milk.8.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.9.All roads lead to Rome.10.Never too old to learn.覆水难收。覆水难收。一天一个苹果，一天一个苹果，医生远离我。医生远离我。条条大路通罗马。条条大路通罗马。活到老，学到老。活到老，学到老。方法四方法四:妙用引文和例子妙用引文和例子（多用于（多用于“the bodythe body”）Writing skills（“写写”的技巧）的技巧）青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.For example,we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags,stop using napkins,plant more trees and save water and energy.加例子加例子加例子加例子在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。I often help my parents do housework,such as washing dishes,folding the clothes,taking out the trash and so on.结尾：结尾：提出倡议或号召提出倡议或号召Lets Do it now!/Dont do it again!As students,we should start from ourselves.Dont wait.Join us now!Start to join us now!Dont put it off!Become a volunteer today!How amazing!I cant wait!Save animals!Save Ourselves!Save our planet!Dont hesitate(犹豫犹豫).It will be great fun!书面表达写作技巧书面表达写作技巧审审列列加加连连美美知己知彼，学范文知己知彼，学范文 First，some of us arent interested in English.We think studying English is such a boring thing.And then its so difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts.So lots of us dont have enough confidence to keep up English study.And we are always afraid to join the group discussion.Whats more,there are so many new words we havent met before in the passage.I dont know what to do.Sometimes we cant understand the main idea,let alone(更不用说更不用说)answer the questions about them.But the most difficult thing is to write.We often use wrong words and sentences.Lets go for it!123465 Dear Mary,I heard you didnt do well in English.Here is some advice for you.Yours _,I think reading English every day and listening to the teacher carefully in class are the most important._,you can join the English club to practice English.You know,“Practice makes perfect.”_,it is necessary for you to listen to the English radio every morning.It can improve your listening skill._,English is not difficult to learn and I hope what I have said is helpful for you.Your turn to go for it!（试填一填）（试填一填）Dear Mary,I heard you didnt do well in English.Here is some advice for you.Yours _,I think reading English every day and listening to the teacher carefully in class are the most important._,you can join the English club to practice English.You know,“Practice makes perfect.”_,it is necessary for you to listen to the English radio every morning.It can improve your listening skill._,English is not difficult to learn and I hope what I have said is helpful for you.To begin withOf courseIn factThenYour turn to go for it!（check）123 The Life as a Grade 9 Student How time flies!Now Im in Grade Nine.Actually I feel the life is quite different from it used to be.Now Im as busy as a bee.Theres a lot of homework and exams.The only feeling I have is:The life as a Grade Nine student is very busy and challenging!Theres an old saying:He who fails to plan plans to fail.I dont want to fail,so I create a plan for the following days.Since nothing is difficult if I put my heart into it,I will change my attitude towards maths and physics which I am poor at now.Ill spend the rest time efficiently.As theres no elevator to success,Ill try my best to do everything step by step!I believe that I can do it!Its your turn!（请分析以下的文章请分析以下的文章）Your turn to go for it!Good words:Good sentences:Connection words:随着人口的增多，人类不仅需要越来越多的地方随着人口的增多，人类不仅需要越来越多的地方居住，而且需要越来越多的食物。人类把森林变居住，而且需要越来越多的食物。人类把森林变成了耕地；新的城市和道路占据了动物的栖息地；成了耕地；新的城市和道路占据了动物的栖息地；许多动物遭到猎杀许多动物遭到猎杀所有这些都导致了越来越所有这些都导致了越来越多的动物濒临灭绝。然而动物是我们人类的朋友，多的动物濒临灭绝。然而动物是我们人类的朋友，我们有责任去保护他们，而不是伤害或猎杀它们。我们有责任去保护他们，而不是伤害或猎杀它们。请根据上述内容写一篇不少于请根据上述内容写一篇不少于8080词的英语短文。词的英语短文。要求：要求：1.1.语言规范、意思连贯、表达完整；语言规范、意思连贯、表达完整；2.2.提示的内容要全部用上。提示的内容要全部用上。Its your turn!(练练笔练练笔)Lets Help Our Friends With the increasing population,human needs more places to live in and more food to eat.As a result,we change the forests into farmland.I feel pity for the animals.More and more new cities and roads are built on animals habitat.A lot of animals are killed because of their tasty meat or beautiful fur.There used to be lots of animals,but now more and more animals become endangered because of our crazy and silly behavior.For example,there are only 2500 manatees in the USA now.Do you want to see these gentle and shy animals disappear?Do you want our children only to see model animals in the future?Dont you think animals are our lovely friends?I know your answer is“No”.So its our duty to protect them instead of hurting or killing them.Dont put it off！Lets try our best to help our friends today!Your turn to go for it!Good words:Good sentences:Connection words:模板作文模板作文开头公式一：名人名言开头公式一：名人名言 1.A proberb says/As an old saying goes,“You are only young once.”2.As everyone knows/As is known to us,no one can deny that 开头公式二：数字统计开头公式二：数字统计 1.According to a recent survey,about 78.9%of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.2.A recent statistics shows that 附附 结尾公式一：结论结尾公式一：结论1.Obviously,we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.2.to sum up/in conclusion/in brief/on account of this/thus结尾公式二：建议结尾公式二：建议1.Accordingly,I recommend that some measures be taken.2.Consequently,to solve the problem,some measures should be taken.写作的写作的“五项基本原则五项基本原则”一、一、长短句原则长短句原则 As a creature,I eat;as a man,I read.Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectualneed of mind,they are in a way quite similar.二、二、主题句原则主题句原则 To begin with,you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam（主题句）.Without sufficient preparation,you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、三、一二三原则一二三原则 1）first,second,third,last2）firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally3）the first,the second,the third,the last4）in the first place,in the second place,in the third place,lastly5）to begin with,then,furthermore,finally6）to start with,next,in addition,finally7）first and foremost,besides,last but not least8）most important of all,moreover,finally 9）on the one hand,on the other hand10）for one thing,for another thing四、四、短语优先原则短语优先原则 I cannot bear/stand it.I cannot put up with it.I want it.I am looking forward to it.五、多变句式原则五、多变句式原则 I enjoy music and he is fond of playing guitar.Not only the fur coat is soft,but it is also warm.The car was quite old,yet it was in excellent condition.hen,therefore,consequently,accordingly,hence,as a result,for this reason,so that This is what I can do.Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.I dont enjoy that book you are reading.Mr liu,our oral English teacher,is easy-going.Whether your tastes are modern or traditional,sophisticated or simple,there is plenty in London for you.Nowadays,energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil,coal,natural gas,solar heat,the wind and ocean tides.We have got to study hard,to enlarge our scope of knowledge,to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.THANK YOU