Writing-(人教版高中英语选修六第一单元写作)ppt课件.ppt

How to write a letter for advice火灾袭来时要迅速疏散逃生，不可蜂拥而出或留恋财物，要当机立断，披上浸湿的衣服或裹上湿毛毯、湿被褥勇敢地冲出去1.1.建议信建议信 作者就作者就有关问题有关问题进行进行分析分析并针对这些问题并针对这些问题提出自己的提出自己的看法和建议看法和建议。2 2.对象对象1）写给写给个人个人，就其遇到的，就其遇到的某个问题某个问题提出自己提出自己的的看法和观点看法和观点；2）写给写给某个组织和机构某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告建议或忠告。火灾袭来时要迅速疏散逃生，不可蜂拥而出或留恋财物，要当机立断，披上浸湿的衣服或裹上湿毛毯、湿被褥勇敢地冲出去3.3.基本框架：基本框架：Beginning-开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点。(state your idea)Body-对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议。(reasons and evidence)Ending-呼应开头，重申观点。(restate your opinion.)火灾袭来时要迅速疏散逃生，不可蜂拥而出或留恋财物，要当机立断，披上浸湿的衣服或裹上湿毛毯、湿被褥勇敢地冲出去4.4.注意事项：注意事项：1）建议信要写出写信的建议信要写出写信的原因原因，建议的，建议的内容内容，提出，提出建议的建议的理由理由。提出的。提出的理由要入情入理理由要入情入理，语气一定要，语气一定要礼貌当先礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力具有合理性和说服力2）建议的建议的角度要多样化角度要多样化，避免重复。可从政治、，避免重复。可从政治、经济、文化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建经济、文化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建议。议。3）符合英文信件的符合英文信件的基本格式基本格式火灾袭来时要迅速疏散逃生，不可蜂拥而出或留恋财物，要当机立断，披上浸湿的衣服或裹上湿毛毯、湿被褥勇敢地冲出去常用表达常用表达火灾袭来时要迅速疏散逃生，不可蜂拥而出或留恋财物，要当机立断，披上浸湿的衣服或裹上湿毛毯、湿被褥勇敢地冲出去A A建议信开头常用句式建议信开头常用句式(根据材料根据材料,灵活运用灵活运用)1.After I read your letter in the newspaper,I am sorry to 1.After I read your letter in the newspaper,I am sorry to know that know that 2.Thanks for trusting me.Regarding(2.Thanks for trusting me.Regarding(至于至于至于至于,关于关于关于关于),Id),Id like to make some suggestion.like to make some suggestion.3.I am writing to express my views concerning 3.I am writing to express my views concerning 4.I am writing to share some advice on with you.4.I am writing to share some advice on with you.5.You have asked me for my advice onand Ill try to 5.You have asked me for my advice onand Ill try to make some suggestions.make some suggestions.火灾袭来时要迅速疏散逃生，不可蜂拥而出或留恋财物，要当机立断，披上浸湿的衣服或裹上湿毛毯、湿被褥勇敢地冲出去B.B.表达建议（表达建议（bodybody）1.I think it would be more beneficial(1.I think it would be more beneficial(有益的有益的有益的有益的,有利的有利的有利的有利的)if)if you could you could 2.I would like to suggest/recommend(2.I would like to suggest/recommend(推荐推荐推荐推荐)that)that3.If I were you,I would3.If I were you,I would4.You may consider doing4.You may consider doing5.As far as Im concerned(5.As far as Im concerned(就我而言就我而言就我而言就我而言)/In my opinion/As)/In my opinion/As for me,it would be wise to take the following action.for me,it would be wise to take the following action.6.I wonder if you have considered the following tips.6.I wonder if you have considered the following tips.7.7.When it come toWhen it come to such a situation,I would like to such a situation,I would like to suggest that you cansuggest that you can火灾袭来时要迅速疏散逃生，不可蜂拥而出或留恋财物，要当机立断，披上浸湿的衣服或裹上湿毛毯、湿被褥勇敢地冲出去C.C.建议信结尾常用句式建议信结尾常用句式 1.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions1.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions /recommendations /recommendations practical practical/usefuluseful/helpfulhelpful.2.I would be ready to discuss this matter in further details.2.I would be ready to discuss this matter in further details.3.I will be more than happy to see improvements in this 3.I will be more than happy to see improvements in this matter.matter.4.If you have any more problem,please 4.If you have any more problem,please feel free to(feel free to(随意地随意地随意地随意地做某事做某事做某事做某事)contact me at any time.contact me at any time.5.I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it.5.I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it.6.Im willing to discuss this matter with you whenever 6.Im willing to discuss this matter with you whenever you need.you need.火灾袭来时要迅速疏散逃生，不可蜂拥而出或留恋财物，要当机立断，披上浸湿的衣服或裹上湿毛毯、湿被褥勇敢地冲出去 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友假定你是李华，你的英国朋友假定你是李华，你的英国朋友假定你是李华，你的英国朋友PeterPeterPeterPeter来信向你咨询如何来信向你咨询如何来信向你咨询如何来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。要点：要点：要点：要点：参加中文学习班；参加中文学习班；参加中文学习班；参加中文学习班；看中文书刊、电视；看中文书刊、电视；看中文书刊、电视；看中文书刊、电视；学唱中文歌曲；学唱中文歌曲；学唱中文歌曲；学唱中文歌曲；交中国朋友。交中国朋友。交中国朋友。交中国朋友。注意：注意：注意：注意：可适当增加细节，开头语已给出。可适当增加细节，开头语已给出。可适当增加细节，开头语已给出。可适当增加细节，开头语已给出。Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Best wishes,Yours，Li Hua火灾袭来时要迅速疏散逃生，不可蜂拥而出或留恋财物，要当机立断，披上浸湿的衣服或裹上湿毛毯、湿被褥勇敢地冲出去1.1.参加中文学习班参加中文学习班2.2.看中文书刊、电视看中文书刊、电视3.3.学唱中文歌学唱中文歌4.4.交中国朋友交中国朋友take Chinese coursesread books,magazines,newspapersin Chinese,watch TV,see moviessing Chinese songsmake Chinese friends火灾袭来时要迅速疏散逃生，不可蜂拥而出或留恋财物，要当机立断，披上浸湿的衣服或裹上湿毛毯、湿被褥勇敢地冲出去1.take Chinese courseslearn from the teachers practice with your fellow studentslearn more about Chinese history and culturemake more friends火灾袭来时要迅速疏散逃生，不可蜂拥而出或留恋财物，要当机立断，披上浸湿的衣服或裹上湿毛毯、湿被褥勇敢地冲出去2.read books,magazines,newspapers in Chinese,watch TV,see moviesbroaden our horizons practice our Chineselearn more about Chinese history and culture火灾袭来时要迅速疏散逃生，不可蜂拥而出或留恋财物，要当机立断，披上浸湿的衣服或裹上湿毛毯、湿被褥勇敢地冲出去3.singChinesesongslearn and remember Chinese words more easily;give much fun to us4.make Chinese friendstell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese火灾袭来时要迅速疏散逃生，不可蜂拥而出或留恋财物，要当机立断，披上浸湿的衣服或裹上湿毛毯、湿被褥勇敢地冲出去表先后次序：表先后次序：First,second,third.FinallyFirstly,secondly，eventuallytobeginwith/tostartwith,atlast递进关系：递进关系：furthermore;moreover;notonly.butalso.;besides;inotherwords;ontheonehand.，ontheotherhand.;meanwhile;atthesametime；注意衔接词使用注意衔接词使用:火灾袭来时要迅速疏散逃生，不可蜂拥而出或留恋财物，要当机立断，披上浸湿的衣服或裹上湿毛毯、湿被褥勇敢地冲出去Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on_.I will try to make some suggestions here.As far as Im concerned,it would be wise to take the following actions:First,it is important to_,as youll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students._,it also helps to watch TV and read books,newspapers,and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.fhowtolearnChinesewelltakeChinesecoursesInaddition火灾袭来时要迅速疏散逃生，不可蜂拥而出或留恋财物，要当机立断，披上浸湿的衣服或裹上湿毛毯、湿被褥勇敢地冲出去Besides,it should be a good idea to_,because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily.Whats more,you can also make more Chinese friends,who will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try writing to me in Chinese next time.I hope youll find these proposals useful,and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you about further details.Good luck with you!Yours sincerely,Li HualearnChinesesongs适当运用模板适当运用模板火灾袭来时要迅速疏散逃生，不可蜂拥而出或留恋财物，要当机立断，披上浸湿的衣服或裹上湿毛毯、湿被褥勇敢地冲出去Dear _,Dear _,You have asked me for my tips concerning_(You have asked me for my tips concerning_(问题问题问题问题),),and I will try to make some suggestions here.As far as Im and I will try to make some suggestions here.As far as Im concerned,it would be wise to take the following actions:concerned,it would be wise to take the following actions:First,_(First,_(建议一建议一建议一建议一);in addition_();in addition_(建议二建议二建议二建议二););whats more _(whats more _(建议三建议三建议三建议三).).I hope youll find these proposals useful,and I would be I hope youll find these proposals useful,and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you about further details.ready to discuss this matter with you about further details.Good luck with you!Good luck with you!Yours sincerely,Yours sincerely,Li Ming Li Ming