人教版高三英语写作中词汇与句型表达的多样 新课标 人教.ppt
How to improve passages Focusing on varieties of words and sentence patterns2021/8/9 星期一11993年高考作文年高考作文 2021/8/9 星期一21 One day my parents went to work in the fields and my little sister and Ar Fu followed.While my parents were working,my sister walked to the river and Ar Fu followed her.She saw a beautiful flower on the bank of the river,she wanted to pick it.She fell into the river.When Ar Fu saw that,it barked and jumped into the river quickly.One day,followed by my little sister and Ar Fu,my parents went to work in the fields.While my parents were working,my sister,with nothing to do,walked to the riverside nearby with Ar Fu.At the sight of a beautiful flower on the river bank,she wanted to pick it.However,she fell into the river.Seeing that Ar Fu barked and jumped into the water as soon as possible.2_2021/8/9 星期一3书面表达评分标准：北京卷2005年考试说明中的评分标准情景作文一、评分原则：本题总分为20分，按5个档次给分。评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。评分时应考虑：内容要点，上下文的连贯，词汇和句式的多样性及语言的准确性。拼写、标点符号或书写影响内容表达时，应视其影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。词数少于60，从总分中减去1分。词汇和句式的多样性词汇和句式的多样性2021/8/9 星期一4(因为因为)_ his help,I finished the work at last.Thanks toAs a result ofOwing to Due to 因为因为Because of /with/for2021/8/9 星期一5p我花了50块钱买这本字典。Spend on/inIt costs/takes to Pay forCharge sb forI was charged$50 for the dictionary.2021/8/9 星期一6p我会尽我所能去帮助他。我会尽我所能去帮助他。do/try my best do everything I can do all that I can do what/whatever I can I willto help him.I ll help him as much as possible.2021/8/9 星期一7高考经典句型结构高考经典句型结构:1.Its years since I worked in Beijing.2.It wont be long before you get well.3.It was not until you told me that I realized my mistake.4.Not until you told me did I realize my mistake.5.It is said that a fire broke out last night.6.There always exist big gaps between dreams and realities.7.She was so excited that she burst into tears.8.Work hard,and you are sure to win.2021/8/9 星期一8pHe sat there,_（手里拿着书手里拿着书）。）。_（eyes/closed）。_（背着书包）（背着书包）。_（nothing/to do)。2021/8/9 星期一91.There is a girl.She is sitting between us.2.This is a book.The book was bought yesterday.There is a girl who is sitting between us.This is a book which was bought yesterday.Rewrite following sentences2021/8/9 星期一103.走在大街上，他遇见了一个老朋友走在大街上，他遇见了一个老朋友.While he was walking in the street,he met an old friend.4._,the city looks beautiful.Walking in the street从天空中看，When it is seen from the sky,the city looks beautiful.Seen from the sky2021/8/9 星期一11由于不知道他的电话，他无法与Tom取得联系。Not knowing his telephone number,he cant get in touch with Tom.2021/8/9 星期一12Rewrite the following passage：pThey went for a walk on the street.They saw the old man.He was knocked down by a car.The car was passing by.2021/8/9 星期一13readingsleepingshoesbarkingcatdumbfounded（adj.目瞪口呆）目瞪口呆）请你根据以下四幅图请你根据以下四幅图(总分总分20)写一篇写一篇100词左右的短文。词左右的短文。参考词语参考词语:slippers(拖鞋拖鞋)要点：要点：1老人穿着拖鞋读报,狗在边上睡觉。2 老人想出门，叫狗 拿鞋。3 狗闭着眼睛，一动 不动，汪汪直叫，老人很纳闷。4猫嘴里叼着鞋走进 来，老人目瞪口呆。2021/8/9 星期一14An old man was sitting in an armchair at home,reading his newspaper.Beside him lay a dog sleeping soundly.Suddenly the old man decided to leave home for a while,but he couldnt go out with his slippers on.So he woke up the dog to get the shoes for him.Out of his expectation,the dog just barked with two eyes closed again.The old man was completely puzzled.As he was wondering what was happening,he saw the cat coming towards him with the pair of shoes in its mouth.Seeing this,he was totally dumbfounded.An old man was sitting in an armchair at home,reading his newspaper.Beside him lay a dog sleeping soundly.Suddenly the old man decided to leave home for a while,but he couldnt go out with his slippers on.So he woke up the dog to get the shoes for him.Out of his expectation,the dog just barked with two eyes closed again.The old man was completely puzzled.As he was wondering what was happening,he saw the cat coming towards him with the pair of shoes in its mouth.Seeing this,he was totally dumbfounded.2021/8/9 星期一15 Assignment:优化写作优化写作P189 下面下面4幅图片描述的是星期天上午在中山公园里发生的幅图片描述的是星期天上午在中山公园里发生的一件事。请根据图片所提供的信息用英语为你校的一件事。请根据图片所提供的信息用英语为你校的“英语园地英语园地”写一篇短文。写一篇短文。注意：注意：短文须包括所有图片的主要内容。短文的内容要短文须包括所有图片的主要内容。短文的内容要 连贯、完整；连贯、完整；短文单词数：短文单词数：100左右左右（已给句子中的单词不计入总词数）（已给句子中的单词不计入总词数）参考词汇：货摊参考词汇：货摊stand(n.);抢夺抢夺 snatch(v.);逮捕逮捕 arrest(v.)2021/8/9 星期一16Thanks a lot!Any comment is welcome!2021/8/9 星期一172021/8/9 星期一18
