高中英语写作指导.doc

高中英语写作指导  一、如何提建议 给交友有困难的同学提建议I am sorry you are having trouble in making friends.【引出建议】Here are some tips to help you.【列举建议】First, why not go and talk to people standing on their own. I agree this is difficult but that person may be lonely too. If you do this, I am sure you will soon have a new friend. Second, you can begin the conversation by asking about their likes and dislikes,【理由】which will make you find people with the same interests. Finally, you should try to join in a discussion, 【理由】letting people know how friendly you are. I hope you will find these ideas useful.二、列举个例  良好饮食习惯As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, its important for us to form healthy eating habits.However, some students have formed a variety of bad eating habits, such as not having breakfast,loving eating snacks, being particular about food, eating and drinking too much and so on, which will surely do harm to their health. To keep healthy, we should have healthy diets. Not only should we have various foods, like fish, meat, vegetables, fruits as well as rice, noodles, but also we should have the foods regularly and properly. Personally, I think it is important to keep a healthy diet, which contributes to building up a strong body. Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.三、举例说明  和谐师生关系对你的影响【要证明的观点】Actually, having a good relationship with teachers makes it easier for us to get along smoothly with our study at school. 【引出例子】Take me for example. 【例子】My teacher is my good friend. When I fail in the exam, it is my teacher that first helps m to analyze the problem. She is patient enough to make me get over all the difficulties in my study. When I am unhappy she always listens to me carefully and then gives me some reasonable suggestions, so that I can focus on my study soon. Also, I have learned to be helpful and considerate. 【重申主题】But for（要不是） the good relationship with my teachers, I could not have made such progress.套语背诵1.There is no denying that confidence plays an important role in our life.A convincing example that jumps into my mind is about speaking English.2.Such example can be seen easily in our daily life. A good case in point is 这样的例子在生活中很容易见到，一个很好的例子就是四、讨论或辩论  禁止乞丐在地下人行道行气留宿【引出主题】Recently, Guangzhou has passed a law to ban beggars from begging  and sleeping in the subways and our class had a discussion about it last Monday.【反对及其理由】56% of the students dont agree with the idea because they think some beggars really have difficulty in making a living and have to play music in the subway to survive.【赞成及其理由】However, 44% of the students favour the idea because they think beggars bring a lot of trouble for the city. Whats more, some beggars are just taking advantage of peoples compassion to make easy money.【个人看法】Personally, I think it is a good idea to forbid beggars in public places and we should take some measures to help them.五、利弊对比  网购的利弊【点明主题】Nowadays many people prefer to shop on line. 【罗列益处】Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First, its convenient for us to shop on line.Secondly, it helps save much time, with which we can do more other important things. 【罗列弊端】But just as the saying goes, every coin has two sides. Its negative aspects are also apparent. One of the disadvantages is that we are not sure whether the goods we buy are in good quality. 【你的观点】Through the above analysis, I believe that positive aspects of shopping on line for outweigh negative ones. Therefore, I would like to shop on line.六、采访类  中学生英语单词拼写的问题Last Wednesday, I had an interview with Mr Wang, an English teacher, concerning the issue ofEnglish word spelling among middle school students. According to Mr Wang, slightly more than half of the senior middle school students English handwriting is very poor and about 45% of them can not spell words correctly although they are able to speak. He also pointed out that the causes for spelling problems are that there are no specific word spelling checks in exams, and there is not enough training.Worse still, the students are lazy to memorize word spelling. He suggested that we should raise the awareness and place great emphasis on that, and above all, we should master skills while we are training ourselves.七、调查类 21世纪最令人担忧的问题Last week, we made/did a survey among 500 Senior Two students about the most worrying problems in the 21st century. The survey shows that 32% of the students think that they worry about the natural disasters（自然灾害）most, for earthquakes and floods have taken many peoples lives. Besides, 29% of the students hold the opinion that environmental pollution（环境污染）is the most worrying problem while 17% of the students consider the housing problem（住房问题）to be the most worrying one. The percentage of the students who worry most about employment（就业问题） is the same as that of the students who worry most about food safety（食品安全）.As for myself, food safety is the most worrying problem because it is linked closely to our health.八、心得体会  诚实/ 勿以善小而不为1. After reading the story, I am so touched by Alan, whose behavior is worth praising. There is no doubt that honesty still plays a very important role in peoples life and only those who are honest will be trusted and respected by people. （诚实）3.After reading the story, I was lost in thought. I came to realize that people should never ignorethe deed of small kindness. Your small good deeds sometimes will get big returns or make a great difference! （勿以善小而不为）九、记叙事件经过或过程  日记或游记【总述】Today we visited Qinghua University.【过程】 Early in the morning we arrived at the gate of Qinghua University, where we were warmly welcomed by an old professor, who then showed us around the campus. In the library, we saw some university students reading attentively in the reading rooms. After that, we came to the lab building. At the end of the visit, the old professor gave us a lecture on science in the afternoon, which interested us very much. Time passed so quickly that before we knew it, it was time that we had to say goodbye to the professor.【结果】Since then, I have worked harder at my lessons than usual and made up my mind to be a student of Qinghua University.十、人物简介 用英语简介李敏同学【姓名职务与特点】 Li Min, monitor of Class 1 Grade 2 (同位语), is healthy and lively. 【成绩与爱好】 She does well in all her subjects, and she  is fond of sports, singing and dancing. 【事迹】When she came to school, she had much difficulty with English, but through hard work she made great progress.  In 2006 she took part in the National Physics Olympic Competition and won the first prize. Li Min is very strict with herself in her work and daily life, and is always ready to help others.相关短语：1. be admitted into a key university 考上重点大学2. major in law主修法律     3. get a masters degree 获得硕士学位4. graduate from Harvard University  毕业于哈佛大学5. win the first prize  获得一等奖   6. win a gold medal  赢得一枚金牌7. become a world champion 成为世界冠军8. set a good example to us    给我们树立了良好的榜样9. be highly thought of    受到好评10be awarded a medal for   因而获得奖章11be awarded the title of  获得称号 12devote .to . 把专用于/奉献给13. born of a poor clerk s family    出生在一个贫困的小职员家庭中 十一、假设处境  假如你当时在场，你会怎样做？If I had been on the spot, I would have jumped into the river to rescue the child on the condition that I could swim. If not, I would have first called the police and then persuaded the people on the boat and the swimmers nearby to help. (湖北大学生为救溺水小孩死三人事件)十二、说明异同  古典音乐与流行音乐的异同【同】From the point of many people, there are many similarities between classical music and pop music. Both of them can make people relax and enjoy life as well. 【异】 However, the differences are also obvious. Classical music can remind them of the sweet memories in the past. Besides, classical music, which was made by the famous musicians like Beethoven is in high class and can last long, while the words of pop music are often concerned with modern life, even true love between friends or lovers.  Whats more, pop music is easy to sing.十三、图表作文1. 【总述现象】 From the chart, we can see clearly that there has been a sharp rise in the average income of Chinese farmers in the past 30 years. （从上表可以清楚地看出, 在最近30年里中国农民的人均收入急剧上升。）2.【数据变化】 As early as 1978, the average income of Chinese farmers was only 193 yuan . Thenonly 16 years later, it increased to 2181.52 yuan.  And by 2010, the average income of Chinese farmers had reached 7890 yuan, which was 40 times as much as 30 years ago.3.【解释原因】There are many reasons accounting for this change. Firstly . Secondly . Finally .有许多原因可以解释这种变化。第一第二最后4. 【阐述观点】 As far as Im concerned, I firmly support the policy of reform and opening up, which is the exact way  to make China powerful.（就我来说, 我坚决支持改革开放政策, 改革开放是强国之路。）十四、地点简介  介绍广州 概况中国第三大城市；别称：五羊城、花城；广东省省会；全市面积7,434平方公里；人口：1,000多万。历史2,200多年的历史文化名城，历史上丝绸之路（海路）的始发港。地理珠江从市中心穿过，温暖湿润。旅游风光旖旎，旅游业资源丰富。 Guangzhou, the third largest city in China, also known as Five-lamb City, Flower City and so on,serves as the capital city of Guangdong Province. This city covers a total area of 7, 434 square kilometers with a population of more than ten million. Guangzhou, a famous city with a history of more than 2, 200 years, is a starting port of the Silk Road on the sea in history. With the Pearl River windingits way through the city, Guangzhou enjoys a warm and wet climate. The beautiful city, well-known for its beautiful scenery, is also abundant in traveling resources.十五、邀请信  邀请外籍老师参加学校新年晚会Dear Mr. Green,On behalf of the Students Union, Im writing this letter to invite you to participate in our New Year Evening. The party is going to be held in the school meeting hall from 7:00 p.m. to 9:00 p.m. next Friday. Many wonderful performances, presented by the teachers and students in our school, will be shown on the stage, such as the Chinese folk songs and dances, Chinese musical instruments, short plays of traditional style and so on. So it will surely offer you a good opportunity to obtain a clearer picture of Chinese traditional culture. We should be very delighted if you could come; meanwhile, our evening would be more cheerful if you could give a performance.We are looking forward eagerly to your participation.Yours,Li Ming十六、节日简介 介绍端午节时间 The Dragon Boat Festival, a traditional Chinese festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar. It dates from over 2000 years ago, which falls on June 6th this year. 方式 On this day, Chinese people prepare Zongzi glutinous(粘黏的) rice dumplings wrapped in bamboo leaves. As the festival name shows, people have dragon boat races to celebrate it, especially in the southern places where there are many rivers and lakes. 意义 The Dragon Boat Festival is in memory of Qu Yuan, a great poet of ancient China.十七、兴趣爱好  我最喜欢的运动是游泳My favorite sport is swimming. 【喜欢的程度】I first became interested in swimming when I was eight in primary school. Now I am a member of my school swimming team and I keep on swimming every day in the river near my home even in winter. 【喜欢的原因】I like swimming because it cannot only help me build up my body, but also enrich my life. 【最喜欢的运动员】In this sport, although I like Liu Yu, I admire Michael Phelps, who is one of the best athletes in the world and got 8 gold medals in Beijing Olympics. 【愿望】How I wish to be an Olympic champion some day!十八、通知  举办“中学生才艺大赛”的通知NoticeA “High School Students Talent Show” will be held in Guangzhou Television Station on May 1. There will be eight kinds of talents, including speeches, songs, dances, and musical instruments playing etc. One 1st prize, three 2nd prizes and five 3rd prizes for each type of talent will be offered at the show. If youd like to have a try, please go to the TV station to sign up before April 30. Its a good chance for you to show your special talent.The Students Union十九、分析原因  分析极端天气出现的原因指出现象与引出原因 Reasons for extreme temperatures are varied. 分析原因 For one thing, humans activities like burning fossil fuels produce carbon dioxide, which make the globe warmer, causing the global temperature to go up. For another, people s cutting down trees that can absorb large quantities of carbon dioxide for furniture also contributes to the warming of the earth, which gives rise to extreme temperatures.二十、问题解决  建设绿色校园In order to build a green campus, we need to take the following steps. (学校)  On the one hand, the school should make rules and regulations to prevent students doing something harm to our green campus.(学生)  On the other hand, students should take some classes to raise their awareness. I dont doubt that our campus will be more beautiful if we work together.二十一、说明重要性  责任心的重要性 提出观点 Responsibility is essential to us. 论证 (正面)It not only represents ones noble quality,but also enables one to be steady-going. Being responsible, you will gain many precious things, such as true love. (反面) Without responsibility, however, you will be an annoyance and cant do anything successfully. Whats worse，people will lose belief in you if you are irresponsible. 总结 In short, only when we are responsible will we be respected and loved by others.二十二、发表看法  假期外出旅游Nowadays, more and more people are in favor of travelling during vacation. 表明观点 To be frank, I cant agree more with it. 说明理由 There are several factors contributing to my point. In the first place, journeys can widen our knowledge of geography, customs, cultures and lifestyles of different places and countries and enrich our experiences. In the second place, it is a good way to relax ourselves in my opinion. Furthermore, we can develop better relationship with our friends or family. 得出结论Therefore, it goes without saying that we can benefit a lot from travelling.二十三、观点对比  说说人们对幸福的理解引出不同观点 Opinions are divided on the feeling of happiness. 观点一 Some people believe that if they have much money or many things, they will be happy. With great wealth, they will be able to do everything they want, with which they will be happy. 观点二 On the other hand, some people regard their intelligence, or their health as their great happiness. 观点三 Still others maintain thathappiness is closely tied to their family, for they believe that they feel happy when all members of their family are happy and healthy.二十四、经历感受  拔苗助长The story reminds me of a similar experience of my friend. He was once badly ill and went to see the doctor. The doctor gave him some pills, telling him to take them three times a day. However, he failed to follow the doctors advice and took them 6 times a day. To his great surprise, he became worse. Just as the old saying goes, “more haste less speed”. No matter what we do, we should obey the law of nature. It is the same with our studies. Only by learning step by step can we achieve something.二十五、概况记叙文的内容要点The author tells a story about (某人)a Chinese student with a