读后续写：驱风男孩 讲义-高考英语作文备考.docx

读后续写原材料On a hot September afternoon, Peter and his friend Isabel were on their way to the library. When they passed by Tubman park, Isabel suggested cutting through it to get to the library. As they entered the park, the sight of the swings and the merry-go-round brought back a flood of memories of their childhood spent there. But now everything looked so old, sad, and dirty. Rubbish lay on the ground next to an overflowing trash bin. There were still young schoolchildren playing there but they had to avoid the rubbish that littered the playground. A little boy told them that the city took the other trash bins away and the remaining one never got emptied often.As they headed toward the library, the two high school students wrinkled their forehead. In the library, they encountered Mrs. Evans, their kind-hearted fifth-grade teacher, retired yet still passionate. Mrs. Evans listened as Isabel and Peter eagerly explained what they'd seen. Finally, she recommended them to go to the City Hall to voice their concerns.The next day, Isabel and Peter went into the building of the City Hall but were met with an impatient officer. They were informed that the city couldn't help with their problem due to a tight budget. Discouraged, they left and turned to Mrs. Evans for help.Under her guidance, they decided to ask Go Green, a non-profit organization whose goal is to protect the environment, for help. "This group is good at raising money for projects just like yours," said Mrs. Evans. She promised to arrange them to present their ideas to Go Green. Hearing this, their face lit up.Two main tasks remained ahead: researching ways to clean up the park and preparing a convincing presentation. As Isabel was good at researching while Peter always had a talent for speaking, they cooperated quite well. Isabel learned from a science magazine that a new type of trash bin can squeeze the rubbish down without being emptied often, which saves time, money, and energy. Based on this, Peter practiced his presentation over and over again.主题分析：个人成长类   ，遇到困难，勇敢克服，最终取得成功第一段主要内容为，鼓起勇气，上台演讲第二段主要内容为，外在的反响，Peter 听到好消息的感想和动作      Question series:Para.1:Version1:A week later, Peter stood nervously at the back of the hall where Go Green was meeting. He could feel nothing but his hands shaking and heart pounding." You'll be great, Peter,” Isabel encouraged him. Just then, Peter heard his name being announced. It was time to present! Peter took a deep breath , went on the stage and said, “Tubman Park needs a new kind of trash can.” (谓语A+B+C)Peter explained, pointing to a poster of a trash can. Then Peter explained the working principle of the trash can in detail. The judges nodded as they listened, seeming interested in the project.After the meeting, Isabel excitedly told Peter the good news. Go Green had agreed to buy new trash cans for the park! Hearing the inspiring news, they both felt delighted, leaping into the air with joy.（外界刺激+情绪+行为结果） Peter barely had time to savor(体味，体会) the moment before Isabel started sharing the news with Mrs. Evans and showing their gratitude to her. Learning the result, Mrs. Evans smiled through misty eyes. “I know you can do it! Tubman Park is sure to become one that is clean and green again!” Never before had Peter and Isabel been so proud of themselves. （倒装句）Version 2:A week later, Peter stood nervously at the back of the hall where Go Green was meeting. Having heard the host announce his turn, Peter mustered up his courage to (鼓起勇气做某事)walk toward the stage, with his fists clenched(攥紧拳头). （分词做状语+主句+with 复合结构）Taking a deep breath, he started to make a speech about the present situation of the park and what he expected the organization to do. The several minutes saw Peter deliver a wonderful speech, during which the judges nodded non-stop and smiled knowingly. （无灵主语，非限制性定语从句）Peter waited for the result after the speech, anxious but hopeful.（adj 做状语）After the meeting, Isabel excitedly told Peter the good news. Holding Isabel into his arms tightly, Peter wore a relieved smile on his face, feeling that it was worth all efforts. (用动作描写，面部表情，心里活动来描写Peter听到好消息的感受)There followed an exciting moment when Go Green set out to raise money to buy new type of trashes which could keep the park clean due to their unique property. What delighted Peter and Isabel a lot was that the park took on a new look with everything new and no trash on the ground after the group implemented some plans. （主语从句+表语从句）Seeing children playing happily in the park, the two high school students felt proud of what they had done. （分词做状语）         Version3:A week later, Peter stood nervously at the back of the hall where Go Green was meeting. Heart racing, palms sweating and throat tightening, he dragged his shaky legs onto the stage. But at the thought of the messy Tubman Park, the hard work he and Isabel poured into their presentation as well as Mrs. Evans' encouraging eyes, Peter quickly regained his composure and calmly explained the plight Tubman Park was currently trapped in. Logically and systematically, Peter brought the new trash cans to the judges' attention and then articulated(说清楚) how they worked, why they were more cost-effective (物有所值的) and worth introducing. His persuasive and inspiring speech won constant approving nods from the panel of judges(评审团).          After the meeting, Isabel excitedly told Peter the good news. Go Green agreed to buy the new trash cans for Tubman Park! Hoping up and down(蹦蹦跳跳) , hardly could the two friends contain their raptures and they simply could not wait to break the good news to Mrs. Evans. On hearing the results, the retired teacher shed(洒下) tears of joy and pride. Never in her life had she witnessed two high school kids achieved such a feat(壮举). Now, equipped with the intelligent and efficient trash cans, Tubman Park returned to its former cleanness, tranquility(宁静) and merriness. Thanks to such kind individuals as Peter, Isabel and Mrs. Evans, Tubman Park, an ealier heaven (天堂) for kids,  was finally restored and recreated.            语料库1.He could feel nothing but his hands shaking and heart pounding. 他只能感觉他的手在颤抖，心跳加快。2. Peter took a deep breath , went on the stage and said. 皮特深呼吸，走上舞台并说.3.Hearing the inspiring news, they both felt delighted, leaping into the air with joy. 听到令人振奋的消息后，他们都感觉很高兴， 开心地跳到空中4.Never before had Peter and Isabel been so proud of themselves. 皮特和以萨贝尔从未对自己这么自豪过5.mustered up his courage to 鼓起勇气做某事6.with his fists clenched攥紧拳头7.Taking a deep breath, 深呼吸8.The several minutes saw Peter deliver a wonderful speech 皮特做了几分钟精彩的演讲9.Peter wore a relieved smile on his face皮特脸上带着宽慰额笑容。10.What delighted Peter and Isabel a lot was that.让皮特和以萨贝尔高兴的是.11. felt proud of what they had done对他们做过的事感到自豪12.Heart racing, palms sweating and throat tightening,心跳加快，手掌出汗，嗓子发紧13.Peter quickly regained his composure 皮特很快地恢复镇静14.        won constant approving nods from.赢得来自.频频同意地点头15. shed tears of joy and pride 洒下开心和自豪的眼泪         下水作文：利用上面的语料库         Para1: William knew this was his moment- his moment to show everyone he wasnt crazy, to find out if his experiment would work. Ignoring other peoples disbelief, William connected two wires that held a small bulb with great care. The several minutes witnessed him make a lot of preparations that were demonstrated in the book. William wore a relieved smile on his face as the wind blew, making the blade spin slowly. With the power of the wind increasing, the blade turned around faster and faster. Heart racing, palms sweating, and throat tightening, William was waiting for his miracle. “Look!” someone shouted.” Hes made light.” William won constant applause from people below, as a result of which, he shed tears of joy and pride.(101w)Para2: A month later William found enough wires to reach from the windmill into his house. Well-prepared, William couldnt wait to switch on the light in his house. His face lit up when the light flicker yellow to the rhythm of the blades outside, bright enough to see everything in the house. Seeing his family were wild with joy, he had an ambitious dream-he wanted to make electricity accessible to everyone in the village. With the assistance of his best friends, he went to great lengths to build more windmills, and eventually every house had access to electricity. Never before had William felt so proud of himself when he saw people enjoy their life with electricity.(100w)学科网（北京）股份有限公司