读后续写：When someone believes in you 讲义-高三英语写作专项.docx

读后续写材料：When Marco was a boy, he tried everything to get his father s love and attention. He worked hard to earn exceptional marks. he tried to be obedient he chose inspiring friends and always tried to behave well. However, it felt to Marco that his father had little time for him. Except for his demands around chores after school, communication was nonexistent. It seemed to Marco the only time his dad ever spoke to him was to be demanding or critical. Marco sank further into his low self-esteem and was overwhelmed with feeling unappreciated, inadequate and depressed.One day his father, already tired after a long day, tripped over Marco's bike in the garage .The angry quarrel that followed left Marco feeling grieved. It seemed no matter how hard he tried he could never do anything right. In despair Marco blurted out, “That 's it! It's enough!”For two days, Marco felt so miserable. All he could think of was wanting to leave this enormous pain, those overwhelming feelings of rejection and unworthinessTwo days later, his aunt called him. To Marco, this seemed like a miracle. Aunt Dinette usually only called once a year, on his birthday. She said she had just seen some young teenagers participate in a public speaking contest called Gala Personnalite sponsored by Club Optimiste and she thought about him. She thought he should give it a try. She told him she firmly believed he could perform on stage like the other kids, since she had seen him perform for the family at ChristmasMarco was startled, and not a little taken aback. Him? Onstage? In a public speaking contest?To agree would be contrary to his entire shy, timid personality. But Aunt Ginette was so confident .She seemed really serious. She was sure it was something he could do. She truly believed in him注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为 150左右2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph 1:Feeling her strong belief, Marco agreed to enter the contest.Paragraph 2:Four months later, the big night arrived!文章大意：讲述了一个叫Marco的男孩，为了能够得到父亲多一点的关爱，他不遗余力勤奋刻苦，但是父亲的反应却非常的冷漠，对他的要求也很苛刻，导致的结果就是Marco sank further into his low self-esteem and was overwhelmed with feeling unappreciated, inadequate and depressed.主题是关于相信可以改变一个人情节走向：续写段一首句Feeling her strong belief, Marco agreed to enter the contest.  后面的犹豫和参赛也足以说明Aunt的这种信任对他自我成长的积极作用。学生在续写段一时可以考虑Marco是如何训练的，遇到了什么困难。为了呼应前文，父亲是种什么样的态度。Marco的信心是否一如既往，假如气馁了有否受到阿姨的鼓励？段二首句Four months later, the big night arrived. 这里的big night就是指比赛日。经过了长时间的训练后，Marco站到了台上。他有怎样的心情，对手表现如何，比如有无波澜，观众席中有谁，最终结果怎样，赢得比赛后Marco又是怎样的心情，有着怎样的感悟，这种感悟如何凸显人与自我成长的这一主题的。语言积累父亲的冷漠和苛刻对Marco的影响For two days, Marco felt so miserable. All he could think of was wanting to leave this enormous pain, those overwhelming feelings of rejection and unworthinessAunt的信任She told him she firmly believed he could perform on stage like the other kids, since she had seen him perform for the family at ChristmasMarco的犹豫不决To agree would be contrary to his entire shy, timid personality. But Aunt Ginette was so confident .She seemed really serious. She was sure it was something he could do. She truly believed in him参考答案：Feeling her strong belief, Marco agreed to enter the contest. The first thing in his mind was to determine a proper topic and supporting details. His Chinese teacher offered to help him and gave him some good advice. Then followed the repeated practice. Every morning he would get up very early and speak to a mirror to check whether everything is in its proper place. After several weeks practice, Marco became quite confident and couldn't wait for the speaking contest.Four months later, the big night arrived, Standing before an audience of hundreds for the first time, Marco felt extremely nervous and unexpectedly made a grammar mistake. He was frustrated and decided to give up. But the moment he spotted his aunt and his father 's fond but firm eyes, he gathered his courage and went on. Thunderous applause and the announcement that he won the first place made Marco cry. After the contest, He wrote in his diary: Believe in yourself, be thankful to the one who believes in you and accept the one who don't understand you.学科网（北京）股份有限公司