非谓语动词在写作中的运用优秀PPT.ppt
非谓语动词在写作中的运用第一页,本课件共有22页Our Spring Outing National College Entrance Examination is coming.To relax ourselves,our class had a meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing.Having a barbecue is our choice.The next day,we set off early in the morning.We climbed the mountain,talking and laughing.When we arrived,we began to barbecue.Having had a big dinner,we enjoyed the warm sunshine and the beautiful view.We were tired but happy.What do you think of it?2011年浙江省高考考试说明年浙江省高考考试说明(写作写作)考生应能考生应能 (1)清楚、连贯地传递信息,表达意思;清楚、连贯地传递信息,表达意思;(2)有效应用所学语言知识。有效应用所学语言知识。第二页,本课件共有22页Our Spring Outing National College Entrance Examination is coming.To relax ourselves,our class had a meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing.Having a barbecue is our choice.The next day,we set off early in the morning.We climbed the mountain,talking and laughing.When we arrived,we began to barbecue.Having had a big dinner,we enjoyed the warm sunshine and the beautiful view.We were tired but happy.第三页,本课件共有22页1.Making our city greener is everyones duty.2.The government is determined to continue the green program.3.I find my hometown changed so much.4.Having fresh air,trees can reduce air pollution.5.Every effort to make the program makes a difference.5.5.定语定语2.2.宾语宾语4.4.状语状语3.3.宾补宾补1.1.主语主语找出非谓语动词,并判断成分第四页,本课件共有22页 1.Looking from the top of mountain,the city is beautiful.2.In my opinion,climb mountain is an enjoyable thing.3.Which team is good at cooking?A team called itself the supper cook.Correction第五页,本课件共有22页写作中非谓语动词常见的错误写作中非谓语动词常见的错误1、状语动作行为者与主句主语不一致、状语动作行为者与主句主语不一致Looking from the top of mountain,the city is beautiful.Looked from the top of mountain,the city is beautiful.第六页,本课件共有22页写作中非谓语动词常见的错误写作中非谓语动词常见的错误2、用动词短语充当主语、表语和宾语、用动词短语充当主语、表语和宾语2.In my opinion,climb mountain is an enjoyable thing.In my opinion,climbing mountain is an enjoyable thing.第七页,本课件共有22页写作中非谓语动词常见的错误写作中非谓语动词常见的错误3、主动、被动含义混淆、主动、被动含义混淆 A team calling itself the supper cook.3.Which team is good at cooking?A team called itself the supper cook.A team called the supper cook.第八页,本课件共有22页1.It is high time we took part in some activities.We want to make ourselves more healthy.2.A girl climbed so hard that she lost her temper.She complained about the long walk.3.The monitor has set a good example for us.Therefore,the monitor deserves the honor and we should learn from her.Connection第九页,本课件共有22页 It is high time we took part in some activities.We want to make ourselves more healthy.It is high time we took part in some activities to make ourselves more healthy.+目的状语目的状语 第十页,本课件共有22页 Wangqi climbed so hard that she lost her temper.She complained about the long walk.Wangqi got so angry that she lost her temper,complaining about the long walk.伴随状语伴随状语 +第十一页,本课件共有22页 The monitor has set a good example for us.Therefore,the monitor deserves the honor and we should learn from her.Having set a good example for us,the monitor deserves the honor and we should learn from her.原因状语原因状语 +第十二页,本课件共有22页高考临近,保持良好的心态有助于减轻高考临近,保持良好的心态有助于减轻焦虑,还能增强克服困难的勇气焦虑,还能增强克服困难的勇气。Step1:拆分成几个简单句:拆分成几个简单句(中文中文)高考临近。高考临近。保持良好的心态很重要。保持良好的心态很重要。它有助于减轻焦虑它有助于减轻焦虑(relax)和勇敢地克服困难和勇敢地克服困难。Step2:分别翻译这几个简单句:分别翻译这几个简单句National College Entrance Examination is coming.It is important to have a right attitude.It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.第十三页,本课件共有22页Step3:合并句子:合并句子 With National College Entrance Examination coming,it is important to have a right attitude to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.National College Entrance Examination is coming.It is important to have a right attitude.It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.Sentence1:第十四页,本课件共有22页Step3:合并句子:合并句子 With College Entrance Examination coming,it is important to have a right attitude which helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.College Entrance Examination is coming.It is important to have a right attitude.It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.Sentence2:Tip:Try to use differentways to express.第十五页,本课件共有22页建议建议 有足够的睡眠是必要的。有足够的睡眠是必要的。原因原因1.它能有效的改善我们的课堂学习。它能有效的改善我们的课堂学习。2.保持健康的身体是进一步学习及工作保持健康的身体是进一步学习及工作的基础。的基础。(20112011高考模拟)高考模拟)要求:要求:1.1.用用2-32-3句话句话表达表格内容表达表格内容 2.2-32.2-3句话要有句话要有连贯性连贯性Having a try第十六页,本课件共有22页建议建议 有足够的睡眠是必要的。有足够的睡眠是必要的。原因原因1.它能有效的改善我们的课堂学习。它能有效的改善我们的课堂学习。2.保持健康的身体是进一步学习及工作保持健康的身体是进一步学习及工作的基础。的基础。Having a tryIt is necessary to have enough sleep.Having enough sleep is necessary.It will be an effective way to improve our learning in the class.Keeping healthy is the base for our further study and work.To Keep healthy is the base for our further study and work.第十七页,本课件共有22页 Passage:Having enough sleep is necessary,because it will be an effective way to improve our learning in the class.Moreover,to keep healthy is the base for our further study and work.Tip:Never ignore the conjunction.第十八页,本课件共有22页1.beggar,lie,sleep2.Mr.Li,hurry,pay no attention to3.stick out,trip over(绊倒绊倒),angry A beggar第十九页,本课件共有22页A beggarWriting2.Mr Li hurried home,paying no attention to a beggar.1.The beggar lay on the ground,sleeping.3.Suddenly,the beggar stuck out his legs,tripping over Mr Li,which made him very angry.Make an ending第二十页,本课件共有22页 Exchange and discuss your partners composition,following the criteria.Criteria(标准)(标准)Content(内容)(内容)Language(语言)(语言)Coherence(连贯)(连贯)Pair work第二十一页,本课件共有22页 A beggar One day,hurrying home,Mr.Li paid no attention to the beggar who lay on the ground,sleeping.Suddenly,the beggar stuck out his legs,tripping Mr.Li over,which made him very angry.Realizing the beggar was a disabled person,Mr.Li began to search for some money in his pocket to give him.He took out a 100-yuan note,which was suddenly blown into the air by the wind.Seeing this,the beggar jumped quickly to run after the note,making Mr.Li so surprised that he stood there with his mouth open.第二十二页,本课件共有22页