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WritingWriting Topic:healthy life Topic:healthy life Collect the money from the boxes!Share sayingsHow to keep healthy?Healthy habitsHow to give suggestionsPracticeCompositionHealthy life 2.have healthy eating habits1.take exercise3.relax ourselves(important)ZXXK(helpful)(necessary)It is important to have healthy eating habits.1.How do you have healthy eating habits？2.What kind of sports do you usually do?3.How do you relax yourself when you are stressed out（压力过大）（压力过大）?Group workPlease discuss the following questions in groups.学科网学科网Z.X.X.K Z.X.X.K healthy food healthy drink fruit meat vegetables unhealthy food unhealthy drink eating habitsWe shouldWe shouldnt take exercisego skateboardinggo skatingplay baseballplay basketballplay volleyballplay tennisplay soccerruntake a walkswimgo hikingrelax yourselflisten to musicplay computer gamesdo some sportsget eight hours sleep(get enough sleep)talk to othersI can relax myself by listening to some music.抄改连扩抓审书面表达作文六步法作文六步法作文六步法一、审题确定基本要素确定基本要素:5W1H何何 时时 何何 地地 何何 人人 为为何何 如如 何何 做做 了了 何何 事事作文六步法作文六步法二、抓要点确定主要行为确定主要行为What happened?作文六步法作文六步法三、扩展成句形成基本语句形成基本语句Who did what?书面表达六步法书面表达六步法四、连句成文时间 空间 细节连贯 呼应书面表达六步法书面表达六步法五、查错改错要尽量剔除错误书面表达六步法书面表达六步法六、抄写卷面整洁不一定加分，卷面不整洁一定会扣分！加加(add)加首尾加首尾，使结构完整。可以采取总分总总分总结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁、漂亮。How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.（the beginning）A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.They watch TV or surf the internet.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.（the ending）加加(add beginning and ending)6.我们晚饭后散步好吗？我们晚饭后散步好吗？Shall we _ _ supper?7让我们睡个好觉。让我们睡个好觉。Lets _ a good _.8你不准乱扔垃圾。你不准乱扔垃圾。You mustnt _ litter _.9我们最好不要去拥挤的地方。我们最好不要去拥挤的地方。We had better not _ to _ places.10.我必须要吃药吗？我必须要吃药吗？不，不，你仅仅需要充足的睡眠。你仅仅需要充足的睡眠。_ I take medicine?No,you _.You just need enough sleep.中考链接：中考链接：walkafterhavesleepthrowaboutgocrowdedMustneedntLets tryMany students like to eat junk food,it is bad for our health.We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming,running and hiking._,he stood up.Then he got out._,he went back._,he smiled.butlike/such asFirstNextFinally/At lastWriting skills（“写写”的技巧）的技巧）方法一方法一:善用词汇善用词汇 甚至善用甚至善用高级词汇高级词汇Which is better?我喜欢听音乐放松自己。我喜欢听音乐放松自己。A.I like to listen to music to relax myself.B Listening to music is a good way to relax.Which is better?我希望你能帮助我。我希望你能帮助我。A I wish you can help me.B Im looking forward to your help.A I think doing sports very day is important.B I find it really important to do sports very day.我认为我认为每天锻炼很重要每天锻炼很重要。我们我们应该保持愉快的心情应该保持愉快的心情。A We should keep a good mood every day.B It is important for us to keep a good mood every day.Body条理清晰：善用关联词条理清晰：善用关联词适度扩充：适当加例子适度扩充：适当加例子First,what to write?(先写什么？先写什么？)Then,what to write?(然后写什么？然后写什么？)At last,what to write?(最后写什么？最后写什么？)表顺序表顺序:to begin with,firstly,first(of all),second(ly),next,then,finally,in the end思路清晰思路清晰Think我们应该多锻炼我们应该多锻炼。We should do more sports.Such as,playing basketball,climbing mountains,running and swimming.加例子加例子我们要养成健康的饮食习惯。我们要养成健康的饮食习惯。We should develop healthy eating habits.For example,we can eat more fruits and vegetables and eat less meat and junk food.加例子加例子Ending 总结全文，点明主题总结全文，点明主题表结论表结论:all in al,in a word,in short引用谚语（引用谚语（proverb），名人名言），名人名言(saying)Beginning 开门见山，引出话题开门见山，引出话题表结论表结论:all in al,in a word,in short引用谚语（引用谚语（proverb），名人名言），名人名言(saying)健康的生活对我们都很重要。健康的生活对我们都很重要。It is important for us to keep healthy.As the saying goes,“The first wealth is health.”So it is important for us to keep healthy.加谚语加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。加谚语加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于可用于”beginning”和和”ending”。加谚语加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于可用于”beginning”和和”ending”，多用，多用后者。后者。锻炼对学生有好处锻炼对学生有好处 It is good for us students to do exercise.As the saying goes,“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”It is good for students to do exercise.我们应该多吃健康食品。我们应该多吃健康食品。We should eat more healthy food to keep healthy.As the saying goes,“An apple a day keeps the doctor away.”So we should eat more healthy food to keep healthy.加谚语加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。加谚语加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于可用于”beginning”和和”ending”，多用，多用后者。后者。Enjoy some proverbs 1.The first wealth is health.2.Reading is to the mind while exercise to the body.3.Care killed the cat.4.Bed is a medicine.5.Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy,wealthy and wise.健康是第一财富。健康是第一财富。读书益脑，运动健身读书益脑，运动健身忧虑伤身。忧虑伤身。睡得早起得早，聪明富裕身体好。睡得早起得早，聪明富裕身体好。睡好觉如服良药。睡好觉如服良药。练练笔，写作文练练笔，写作文Our Sunshine Sports Programmer 我们的阳光体育活动我们的阳光体育活动中考链接：中考链接：Do Some ReadingDear Jane,Thank you _ your last letter asking about our Sunshine Sports Programmer.Now we have s_ for an hour every day.In my school,most boys are_ in playing basketball.Basketball makes them much s_ than before.While girls often jump ropes to relax themselves and many of them _prf:doing sports outside to staying inside.They believe sports will keep them fit and slim.forportsinterestedtrongerpreferOur Sunshine Sports Programmer 我们的阳光体育活动我们的阳光体育活动Do Some ReadingI think the Sunshine Sports Programmer is very_mpt()nt to us students.We used_（感觉）（感觉）tired and some of us were not strong _（足够）（足够）because we have too much homework that we didnt have enough time for sports.So the Programmer will certainly do good to our h _ and keep us away from the _(疾病疾病).importantto feelenoughealthillnessesStay in a good mood/spiritsWhen you are in a bad moodWhen you are in troubletalk to your friendslisten to soft musictake part in daily activitiesask your teachers,parents or friends for helpsmile at lifeexercise and relax every dayPlease remember:Smile everyday!Smile everyday!Smile at life!Smile at life!短文表达（共短文表达（共15分）分）健康对于我们每个人来说都很重要，没有一个健健康对于我们每个人来说都很重要，没有一个健康的身体，就不会学习得很好。但最近班里的同康的身体，就不会学习得很好。但最近班里的同学感冒的特别多，你的健康状况如何？请你谈谈学感冒的特别多，你的健康状况如何？请你谈谈 1.健康对学习的重要性；健康对学习的重要性；2.你自己平时是怎么做的；你自己平时是怎么做的；3.并为全班同学提出不少于三条的建议。并为全班同学提出不少于三条的建议。根据中文大意，写出根据中文大意，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少不少于于90词的短文。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。词的短文。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。Keep HealthyOpening：Its very important for us to Its necessary for us to.If we arent healthy,we We cant study or work well without Body：First of all,.Second,.Third,.Finally,.At last,Last but not least,.As for,On the other hand,Whats more,.However,but I think.In my view,.In my opinion,Its said that Ending：I hope what I said can help you.I hope everyone will be healthy.If you,you will.As long as you.,you will.Which group is the most wealthy?.Summary.1.Word Revision2.Comparison of some words.3.Make some sentences and complete some sentences.4.Do some reading about keeping healthy.5.CompositionHomework1.完成双基优化完成双基优化Unit 22.背诵复习短文和词组背诵复习短文和词组3.复习八上复习八上Unit 3
