英语作文-要点作文.ppt
作文作文 -要点作文要点作文 期末作文评分细则期末作文评分细则内容要点：内容要点：概括主要问题：同父母关系紧张概括主要问题：同父母关系紧张针对以下主要问题提出看法：针对以下主要问题提出看法：父母不采纳他的建议父母不采纳他的建议父母逼她做他不想做的事父母逼她做他不想做的事父母要求他在学习上多花时间父母要求他在学习上多花时间解决问题的具体建议，如：有耐心，多沟通，解决问题的具体建议，如：有耐心，多沟通，先搞好学习等先搞好学习等说明：说明：以上内容要点在回信中要覆盖至少三分之以上内容要点在回信中要覆盖至少三分之二，可以用不同的表达方式。二，可以用不同的表达方式。可以在词数范围内有适当发挥可以在词数范围内有适当发挥内容要点少于规定的，句子语法结构不对，内容要点少于规定的，句子语法结构不对，时态、语态误用，均为大错；介词，冠词、时态、语态误用，均为大错；介词，冠词、单词拼写、大小写、标点符号方面的错误单词拼写、大小写、标点符号方面的错误均为小错；均为小错；3个小错相当于一次大错。个小错相当于一次大错。范文：范文：Thank you for writing us about your problems with your parents.Im glad you love your parents and want to get on well with them.You think they dont understand you and dont let you do what you want to do.My question is whether you understand your parents.I think your parents are right in getting you to do housework.In fact,they are preparing you for your future family life.As a student,you should devote most of your time to studies.It is their duty to urge you to spend more time on your studies.What youre learning in school today will determine whether you can meet the greatest challenges in the future.My suggestion is that you try your best to do well in your studies and help with the housework as much as you can.In doing so,Im sure your parents wont be hard on you and will allow you to practice your hobbies.信件作文写作要点：信件作文写作要点：1.看清要点，最好在审题时标注好，列出提纲看清要点，最好在审题时标注好，列出提纲2.对所给出的提示，进行简要概括，然后扩充对所给出的提示，进行简要概括，然后扩充3.注意书写注意书写第一小节：已给第一小节：已给第二小节：第二小节：知心话：知心话：a.感恩感恩-内容内容 b.期望期望-内容内容第三小节：第三小节：寒假打算寒假打算-a.内容内容 b.内容内容 c.内容内容第四小节：已给第四小节：已给感恩：关切鼓励，倾注爱心感恩：关切鼓励，倾注爱心Thank you forIm grateful to you forI want to express my thanks to you foryour care,your encouragement and love Thank you for your caring for me and encouraging me whenever I need.Whats more,I really want to express my thanks to your selfless love which makes me cheer up every time Im in low spirits.1.多加交流，使自己保持良好状态多加交流，使自己保持良好状态municate,in good condition/a good state3.which will make me well-prepared for the coming College Entrance Examination4.2.创造条件，给自己提供适时帮助创造条件，给自己提供适时帮助5.create conditions,timely help寒假打算一定要合情合理寒假打算一定要合情合理I want to in face ofWeather/time permitting,I plan to becauseIf possible,I decide toIts important/necessary for me to.
