中考英语写作专题讲解.pptx
主要特点主要特点记叙为主稍加议论旁带说明第1页/共37页能力要求能力要求第2页/共37页主要问题主要问题要点不全线索不清原因：步骤不对第3页/共37页书面表达书面表达六 步 法第4页/共37页书面表达六步书面表达六步法法第5页/共37页书面表达六步法书面表达六步法一、审题确定基本要素:5W1H何时何地何人为何如何做了何事第6页/共37页书面表达六步法书面表达六步法二、抓要点确定主要行为Whathappened?第7页/共37页书面表达六步法书面表达六步法三、扩展成句形成基本语义单位Who did what?第8页/共37页书面表达六步法书面表达六步法四、连句成文时间空间细节连贯呼应第9页/共37页书面表达六步法书面表达六步法五、查错改错要尽量剔除错误第10页/共37页书面表达六步法书面表达六步法六、誊写卷面不工整扣5分第11页/共37页课堂练习课堂练习请用六步法写一篇短文第12页/共37页五个五个 “WW”一个一个 “H H”第一步第一步 审题审题认真读题然后找出把答案写在题中相应的位置第13页/共37页书面表达经典示例书面表达经典示例书面表达经典示例书面表达经典示例假设你是李华，在美国探亲。2000年2月8日清晨，你目击了一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料，报告当时所见情况。根据下列图画写出报告。1、目击者应该准确报告事实；2、词数100左右；3、结尾已为你写好。_About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.Li Hua第14页/共37页附图附图1234第15页/共37页At 7:15 on the morning of February 8,2000,I saw a woman driving a car hit the man in the street.第16页/共37页第二步第二步 抓要抓要点点一幅图，一要点时态直达语态到位介/副词紧随抓要点，配动词第17页/共37页第三步第三步 扩展成扩展成句句把要点变成完整的句子。注意使用介/副词第18页/共37页第四步第四步 连句成文连句成文增加细节 呼应首尾句与句相连词与词搭配第19页/共37页第五步第五步 查错改错查错改错主谓一致吗？时态正确吗？时态正确吗？有“半截话”吗？第20页/共37页第六步第六步 誊写誊写卷面整洁不一定加分，卷面潦草一定要扣分！第21页/共37页作业选评作业选评要改进吗？为什么？第22页/共37页第23页/共37页At 7:15 a.m.on the morning of Feb.8th,2000,I was heading east on the south side of the Park Road,taking my morning walk as usual.I saw an old man on the other side of the road outside the gate of the City Park.第24页/共37页He was just crossing the street when a car on the 3rd Street made a sudden right turn at the crossing.第25页/共37页The car was so fast that the old man even didnt have time to dodge and the car hit the elderly hard.第26页/共37页I thought the driver would have stopped to help,but she didnt.Instead,she just drove off,leaving the old man still lying on the ground in pain.第27页/共37页Fortunately,I noted down the details:it was a yellow car,the plate number of which was AC864,and the driver was a young lady.After that,I went over to check out the old man.第28页/共37页About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.Li Hua第29页/共37页第30页/共37页第31页/共37页年轻妇女颜色：黄第32页/共37页AC864第33页/共37页小结小结审题，抓点造句，成文改错，誉写第34页/共37页作业作业复习本课要点背诵精彩范文第35页/共37页第36页/共37页谢谢您的观看！第37页/共37页
