中考英语书面表达备考.pptx

一，河南中招英语作文评分标准 书面表达，15分。考生应根据题目要求，采用适当的时态、语态、句式和词语，完整、准确地表达所要求的内容。分四档评分。第一档：符合题目要求，内容完整，层次结构清晰，表达清楚，语言无误。13-15分。第二档：基本符合题目要求，内容较完整，层次结构较清晰，表达较清楚，语言有少量错误。912分。第三档：部分内容符合题目要求，内容不够完整，层次结构不够清晰，表达不够清楚，语言有较多错误。4-8分。第四档：不符合题目要求，整篇表达不清楚，或照抄、拼凑几个词语。0-3分。第1页/共47页1.审题不清如有一年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动，有些考生将作文的主题定位为“我最喜欢的活动”，偏离了“一项、课外活动”这一主题。依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被判为三四类作文。中考英语作文常见问题分析第2页/共47页 2.拼写问题 拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，一般来说两个错误扣一分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。第3页/共47页 3，语法问题 语法问题主要包括：名词单复数,动词的时态与语态以及缺少动词的情况,形容词和副词的等级形式,代词、介词、数词和冠词的使用,主谓一致等等方面的错误。另外,还有诸多常见的固定句式的错误。经调查分析,学生的语法错误主要是受母语的负迁移影响。第4页/共47页语法问题之 缺少动词在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但 英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成 如：“我累了。”这个句子没有动词作谓语，而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一 定要加上be动词，写成：Im tired.误 I happy I can come to Beijing zoo.正 I am happy I can come to Beijing zoo.误 The apples cheap.Ill take some.正 The apples are cheap.Ill take some.第5页/共47页语法问题之 代词的误用英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误误 I mother and I went to the shop to buy a present for I father.正 y mother and Iwent to the shop to buy a present for my father.第6页/共47页减少失分，重在夯实基础 通过前面对学生问题的分析，不难看出如果能学好英语这八类词：名词、动词、形容词、副词、介词、数词、冠词和连词。能正确使用5种基本句型，两种语态，这些初中阶段要求掌握的基础知识，作文失分一定会大大减少。第7页/共47页Head Beginning Body TailEnding第8页/共47页 BeginningBody Ending Concluding sentence 结论句Supporting sentence 支持句（例子、实事、数据或引文）topic sentence 主题句开门见山，紧扣主题总结观点，发表己见，首尾呼应总分总结尾通常总结文章主要观点结尾通常总结文章主要观点,或者发表自或者发表自己的观点等等己的观点等等.第9页/共47页1.Cross-question(审题)u Style(体裁）u Person（人称）u Tense（时态）默读题目弄清要求,抓取有效信息,并适当分析。第10页/共47页健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。牛刀小试Cross-question(审题)visit friends or parentstravelstay at homework第11页/共47页Style(体裁）：_Person（人称）：_Tense（时态）:_调查报告，记叙文第一人称一般现在时1.Cross-question(审题)据实描写：适当发挥：度假方式细节及提倡假日休闲第12页/共47页2.An outline drawing（概略图）u List key points(列要点)u Arrange and Add (布局加首尾)第13页/共47页 如何度假调查报告倡议假日休闲根据关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。List key pointsvisit friends or parentstravelstay at homework列要点时，内容、结构上不能有缺漏，如有漏点，扣分最多！第14页/共47页 List key points1.A lot of people travel.2.Some people stay at home.3.Some other people visit friends or parents.4.A few people work.Enjoy your vacation.visit friends or parentstravelstay at homework第15页/共47页How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.（the beginning）A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.(the key points)Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.（the ending）加(add)加首尾 总分总第16页/共47页3.Sentence Making and Beautifying word phrase sentence Beautifying内容和语言表达内容全面，表达有新意或亮点第17页/共47页3.Sentence Making and Beautifying（美化）word phrase sentence Beautifying第18页/共47页How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.(the beginning)A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.(the ending)most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.美(beautify)第19页/共47页方法一:善用意义相近的 高级词汇，避免行文单调第20页/共47页Which is better?1我希望你能帮助我。A I hope you can help me.B Im looking forward to your help.2 我不吃垃圾食品。A I dont eat junk food.B I stay away from junk food.3 我们应该努力取得好成绩。A We should work hard to get good grades.B Were supposed to try our best to get good grades.第21页/共47页 Most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.Some people stay at home.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.It makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents.A few people have to work.It makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents.A few people have to work.第22页/共47页方法二:活用多种句型,避免重复和呆板,增加文采尽量使用自己熟悉的句型,以正确、通顺为最基本要求第23页/共47页Which is better?1 雨下得很大，所以他没赶上校车。A It rained heavily.So he didnt catch the school bus.B He missed the school bus because of the heavy rain.missedbecause of 2 我们应该保护环境。A We should protect the environment.B Its our duty to protect the environment.第24页/共47页Most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.Some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.It makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents.A few people have to work.(the key points)Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.（the ending）As the saying goes,“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.（the ending）只会用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻Proverb（谚语）第25页/共47页方法三:妙用引文和例子，旁征博引，丰富文章内容，增加说服力。第26页/共47页加谚语(Proverb)集中注意力于学习We should concentrate on our studies.As the saying goes,“No pains,no gains.”We should concentrate on our studies.第27页/共47页加谚语(Proverb)加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法Joining the English club is a good way to learn English.As the saying goes,“Practice makes perfect.”So joining the English club is a good way to learn English.第28页/共47页Enjoy some proverbs1.Practice makes perfect.2.Think twice before you do.4.Do as the Romans do.7.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.roads lead to Rome.三思而后行。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。入乡随俗。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。失败是成功之母。5.The early bird catches the worm.一天一个苹果，医生远离我。条条大路通罗马。3.Where there is a will,there is a way.6.Failure is the mother of success.第29页/共47页青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.For example,we can use recycled bags instead of plastic bags,stop using napkins,plant more trees and save water and energy.加例子第30页/共47页4.Sentence connectionsentencespassageLinking words（连接词）Try to use some Try to use some linking wordslinking words to make your to make your writing more fluentlywriting more fluently第31页/共47页连(connect)How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.（the beginning）As the saying goes,“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”Come and enjoy your vacation.People whorelax well work well.（the ending）Most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.Some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.It makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents.A few people have to work.(the body)第32页/共47页连(connect)How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.According to it,most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.Then some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.And it also makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents.However,a few people have to work.As the saying goes,“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”Come and enjoy your vacation.People Who relax well work well.第33页/共47页方法四:妙用关联词，使行文连贯流畅，使文章富有层次感。第34页/共47页1.表示并列:and,as well as,not onlybut also bothand,neithernor，2.表示递进:besides,whats more 3.表示转折:but,however,althoughthough,after all,anyway4.表示因果:because,since,for,so,therefore,as a result5.表示条件:if,unless关联词(connection words)第35页/共47页6.表示对比:instead,notbut,while,in the same way,on the one handon the other hand7.表示解释:for example,for instance,such as,that is to say,in other words,to tell the truth8.表示顺序:to begin with,first(of all),firstly,second(ly),finally,in the end；next,later,since then,from then on9.表示强调:also,besides,especially,actually,in fact10.表示结论:all in all,in a word,generally speaking,in short 关联词(connection words)第36页/共47页 Lets try_ I am tired,I keep on working till midnight.He didnt go to movies,he went to the concert _.We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming,running and hiking._,he stood up.Then he got out._,he went back._,he smiled.()Its too late to invite any more people._,you know how Tim hates parties.A Besides B However C Still D InsteadThoughAlthoughinstead such asFirstNextFinallyAt lastA第37页/共47页5.CheckinguSpelling(拼写)uTense(时态)uGrammer(语法)uHandwriting(书写)uPunctuation marks(标点符号)通览全文仔细检查第38页/共47页1.名词的单复数问题More and more students use the mobile phone.mobile phones2.数的不一致、时态不一致、代词不一致以及主谓不一致等问题Some students said they will put the mobile phone at home.would their mobile phones3.时态和语态问题Great changes were taken place there over the years.have taken place4.Chinglish 现象They often compare their mobile phone good and bad.I think we shouldnt take the mobile phone to school.5.行文的逻辑性问题6.词类错用7.介词、动词等习惯搭配错误问题典型病例第39页/共47页6.Copying out u书写规范，卷面整洁第40页/共47页解决方法：平时认真规范书写，少用或不用胶带或修正液，尽量减少涂改。认真誊写，书写规范，卷面整洁第41页/共47页誊改连列审书面表达Steps of writing认真审题，勾画出要点并适当分析.据文章要点及中心思想，列出主要句型、关键词，加上首尾，形成提纲。根据写作提纲和要点，按步骤写出每一部分的具体内容，用关联词把文章各部分连起来成文。通览全文，检查并纠正文章中出现的语言错误。认真誊写，书写规范，注意卷面整洁巧用关联词necessary美善用高级词汇活用多种句型If possible妙用引文和例子 Writing skills第42页/共47页不会表达，另辟蹊径个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。锦上添花，量力而行第43页/共47页复习和强化训练要求 热点1.记。系统地熟读和背诵课文中关于话题的一些句子、句型和短文,积累写作素材。大量的背诵和阅读是提高写作能力的有效办法。2.练。对考纲上和课本中列出的所有话题逐一进行写作训练。3.写。限时训练，提高应试能力。要求20分钟内写出80字.质量高、内容全、形式正确。这样形成习惯，考试时就能得心应手。第44页/共47页第45页/共47页Thank you for listening!第46页/共47页感谢您的观看！第47页/共47页