初三书面表达指导.ppt
Whatdoyouthinkoftheproblem?ThinkoftheproblemItsseriousproblembecauseitdoesharmtoourhealth.Itscommonforstudentstohavedifficultiesinsleeping,andthisdoesharmtoourhealth.Oneisthatwehaveawrongdiet.Theotheristhatwefailtoreduceourpressure.Toomuchfriedfoodandtoomanysweetsarenotonlybadforourteethbutalsomakeusfat.Studentsdonttakeasmuchexerciseasbefore.Studentsareeatingjunkfoodinplaceofvegetablesandfruit.Itisthehugepressurethatbringsyoumanydifficulties.Weretoobusytodosports.Thereasonoftheincreasingweightisourbadbehaviorinhealthsuchaseatingjunkfood,stayingstillinfrontofTVandsoon.Howcanwesolvetheproblem?HealthdietsportsrelaxGiveadviceYoushould/shouldnt.WhydontyouWhynotItsagoodideatoHowaboutTry(not)toDietDonteattoomuchjunkfood,itmakesyouputonweight_becominglesshealthy.Itsessentialtoeatfruitandvegetables_junkfood.A healthy diet can _peopleshealth.Trytoeatmorefruitandvegetables_junkfood.Abaddietmightleadyoutmakearealdifferencetoyou,_abaddietmightleadyouintotrouble._toeatmorevegetablesandfruit.SolvetheproblemaswellasinsteadofmakearealdifferencetoratherthanItsbetterwhileSportsDosportsregularly_putonweight.Its a good idea to take some outdoor sports_joggingandplayingbasketball.Choosethesportsyoulikebest_youwontfeelbored.Itsagreatwaytodosomesports_eatinglessfood.inordernottoincludingsothatinsteadofRelaxHaveenoughsleep_youcan.Pleasedonot_toolateortakeexerciseinthenight.A relaxing feeling will help you_fast andmakeyourbodystronger._ is more effective than listening to some lightmusic.Listeningtosomesoftmusicisagoodwayto_.A nice feeling can_during keepinghealthy.aspossibleasstayupfallasleepNothingrelaxyourselfplayanimportantrole最近，学校校园网的英语论坛上，正在进行以“健康生活”为话题的大讨论。下面是学生们在讨论中提到的两个实际问题，请你任选其一，从健康生活的角度谈谈你的想法。内容提示如下：1.Whatdoyouthinkiftheproblem?2.Whatsyouradvice?要求：1.中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；2.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名3.词数在80词左右审提示语及要求审提示语及要求,确定中心内容确定中心内容Health1.Whatdoyouthinkoftheproblem?2.Youradvice 审审 时态的确定时态的确定 一般现在时一般现在时列列列提纲确定文章结构列提纲确定文章结构（段落及段落中心）（段落及段落中心）Talk about the problems and the reasonsTalk about the problems and the reasonsParagraph 2Give the adviceGive the adviceParagraph 3Show your hope and best wishesShow your hope and best wishesParagraph 1连连恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。(一)段落写作，达到各个段落的统一、完整和连贯性。(二)段落间的衔接过渡。段落的连贯性段落的连贯性连贯性包括连贯性包括意连意连内在的逻辑型内在的逻辑型形连形连使用过渡词语、过渡句等使用过渡词语、过渡句等使用某种逻辑顺序使用某种逻辑顺序表示原因：表示原因：because,becauseof,for,since,nowthat表示让步：表示让步：though,although,eventhough,whetheror,Nomatterwhat/how表示时间关系：表示时间关系：when,while,until,before,after,assonnas,since表示并列关系：表示并列关系：and,so,but,or,otherwise,bothand,eitheror,neithernor,notonlybutalso表示目的：表示目的：inorderto,sothat表示条件：表示条件：if,unless如何做到行文连贯如何做到行文连贯:恰当使用语句之间的连接成分恰当使用语句之间的连接成分开始陈述开始陈述:firstofall，aboveall,atfirst显示事件的先后顺序显示事件的先后顺序firstly/secondly/thirdly；first/second/third,then,next,afterthis,afterthat,beforethis,beforethat表示表示“另外另外,还有还有”whatsmore,besides,also,inaddition,still,aswellas结束陈述结束陈述:finally，lastly，intheend提供例子提供例子:like,suchas,forexample换一种方法表述换一种方法表述:inotherwords,Thatistosay用于陈述事实用于陈述事实:infact,Totellyouthetruth显示资料来源显示资料来源:accordingto对一个话题进行总结对一个话题进行总结:Inshort,Allinall,Inaword段落间的衔接（过渡句）：段落间的衔接（过渡句）：1.Theproblemisntseriousbecausetherearemanywaystoloseweight.Heressomeadvice.2.However,whatshouldwedotosolvethisproblem?3.However,youdontneedtoworrybecausetherearesomecorrectwaystostayahealthybody.改改选好词句，修改修改文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。书面表达写作技巧书面表达写作技巧审审 列列连连改改Lets enjoy our compositions!
