英语观点对比类作文写作.ppt
观点对比类作文观点对比类作文 写作技巧写作技巧 英语写作英语写作-How to write-How to write an argumentationan argumentation（议论文）（议论文）书面表达书面表达(满分满分25分分)暑假即将来临，你班同学讨论了假期计划，提出了不暑假即将来临，你班同学讨论了假期计划，提出了不同看法，请根据提示写一篇关于讨论的英语短文，同看法，请根据提示写一篇关于讨论的英语短文，并并谈谈你的看法。谈谈你的看法。(2006年陕西卷）年陕西卷）注意：注意：1.词数词数100-120 2.短文必须包括表中所列要点。短文必须包括表中所列要点。3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。The summer holiday is coming.Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday.the structure of the article topic sentence for the opinion against the opinionending sentence diamond 1.convenient and comfortablecost less/save money lose the chance of getting to know the outside world2.increase ones knowledge and widen ones horizons/views1.(待在家中待在家中)花费花费少，舒适方便少，舒适方便 不能亲身了解外界不能亲身了解外界2.(外出旅游外出旅游)增长增长知识，开阔眼界知识，开阔眼界花费多，旅途不便花费多，旅途不便 spend more money and go through some trouble on the waybeginning1.have different views on sth/2.react to sth in different ways.3.differ in their attitudes towards sth.conclusion my opinion(待在家中待在家中)(外出旅游外出旅游)The summer holiday is coming.Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday.someothers The summer holiday is coming.Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday.Different people,however,have different opinions on this matter.Some think that they prefer to stay at home.In their views there are 2 reasons as follows:in the first place,they say its both convenient and comfortable.Whats more,they can set aside money for other purposes.Furthermore,in the second place,they will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world.While others prefer to go out traveling.In their point of view,for one thing,it can enrich their knowledge and broaden their views.For another thing,they will spend more money and go through some trouble while traveling.In a word,both ideas have their advantages and disadvantages.If it is necessary,we can decide whether to go out depending on our preference.the structure of the article topic sentence for the opinion against the opinionending sentence diamond 对比类写作对比类写作 实战模版实战模版 n模板模板n There is discussion about the issue that（作文题目）（作文题目）Different people,however,have different opinions on this matter.nA majority of people think that _ 观观点一点一_.In their views there are 2 reasons contributing to this matter as follows:in the first place,原因一原因一.Furthermore,in the second place,原因原因二二.People,however,differintheiropinionsonthismatter.Somepeoplehold the idea that观点二观点二.In their point of view,for one thing，原因一，原因一.For another thing,原因二原因二.As far as I am concerned,Ifirmlysupporttheviewthat观点一或二观点一或二.Itis not only because _,but also because _.介绍讨论的主题介绍讨论的主题(开头句开头句)：n我们举行了一场讨论，讨论内容是我们举行了一场讨论，讨论内容是 We had a discussion about whether it is necessary to start learning English from childhood过渡句过渡句 nOpinions are mainly divided into two groups.nDifferent people,however,have different opinions on this matter.主要有两种不同意见。主要有两种不同意见。然而，在这件事上不同的人有不同的看法。然而，在这件事上不同的人有不同的看法。介绍正方观点：介绍正方观点：nSixty percent of the students are for the idea.nSome believe that进一步介绍正方观点进一步介绍正方观点nWhats more,we can as well as nBesides,its,which 介绍反方观点介绍反方观点nOn the other hand,of the students thinknHowever,others have different opinions.进一步介绍反方观点进一步介绍反方观点nWhats worsenWhats morenIn addition,nBesides,n First,Second,Third,总结句总结句(未达成一致未达成一致)nIn short,no agreement has been reached yet.本人观点：本人观点：As far as I am concerned,.(In my opinion,.;Its my opinion that)For one reason,.For another reason In a word,.词汇词汇,句型句型,语法多样化语法多样化 1.覆盖了所有的覆盖了所有的要点要点 2.应用了较多的语法结构应用了较多的语法结构和词汇和词汇 3.有效地使用了语句间的有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑连接成分，使全文结构紧凑要要点点全全连连接接词词如何算是一篇好文章？如何算是一篇好文章？假定你是李华。下面是你班班会上以假定你是李华。下面是你班班会上以“中学生是中学生是否能佩带手机否能佩带手机”为题进行讨论的情况。请你写一为题进行讨论的情况。请你写一封信给封信给21st Century21st Century报的编辑说明该情况，并表报的编辑说明该情况，并表明你自己的观点。明你自己的观点。比例比例 40%40%学生赞同学生赞同 60%60%学生不赞同学生不赞同赞同的理由：赞同的理由：1.1.便于同亲友联系；便于同亲友联系；2.2.可以上网可以上网查资料；查资料；3.3.储存有用信息。储存有用信息。不赞同的理由：不赞同的理由：1.1.手机辐射对人健康有害；手机辐射对人健康有害；2.2.响响铃影响自己和他人学习；铃影响自己和他人学习；3.3.容易引起相互攀比。容易引起相互攀比。注意：注意：1.1.要包含所有的要点，但不要逐条翻译；要包含所有的要点，但不要逐条翻译；2.2.字数约字数约100100字。参考词汇：辐射字。参考词汇：辐射radiationradiationDear Editor,There is a heated discussion weve had on whether mobile phones should be brought to school.We have two different opinions on the question.Sixty percent of the students think students can bring a mobile phone to school.In their views there are three reasons contributing to this matter as follows:in the first place,it is convenient for a student who carries a mobile phone to get in touch with his/her parents and friends.Furthermore,in the second place,he can also search for some important information on the Internet by the phone.Besides,its fashionable to have a mobile phone.However,40 percent of the students are against the view.In their point of view,for one thing,with mobile phones,some students may have a chat on the Internet and spend much time playing games,which has a bad effect on their study and health.Whats more,one mobile phone may cost much money and its likely to be lost in the school.As far as Im concerned,students should place their study before other things and there is no need for us to use mobile phones.In a word,I dont think its a good idea to bring mobile phones to school,
