高二英语作文写作指导.ppt
Unit 22Communication WorkshopWriting Period 2Period 2 Objectives At the end of this lesson,you will be able to write a report.Step 1:Pre-writing Task 1:BrainstormingSubject:Noise pollution and noise control measures in ChinaStep 1:Pre-writing Task 2:ReadingRead the text quickly and do Ex 1 on P12.Positive Positive CommentsCommentsNegative Negative FactsFactsB BC CConclusionConclusionStep 1:Pre-writing Task 3.Pay attention to the language!Answer the following questions.Aims of the Aims of the ReportReportA AD DHow did the writer express his aim?This report aims to.How did the writer describe the noise problem facing China?With her large population,this is a serious problem facing China.We can be optimistic about Chinas future.The Chinese g-has adopted several noise control plans and How did the writer express positive comments?How did the writer conclude the essay?with new regulations and urban planning,noise pollution levels should drop even further.P12-21.2.3.4.5.6.7.8.9.1.According to2.For example3.although4.However,5.as a result 6.such as 7.In addition 8.To sum up 9.In this wayStep 1:Pre-writing Task 4:linking words To give an example:For example such as A,B,C and so on Take as an example especially/particularly To list major point:whats more,in addition,besides,furthermore To contrast a point:on the other hand,on the contrary,however To conclude a pointTo sum up,as a result,in a word,in short,To show effects:without doubt,chiefly,as a matter of fact,in factPara 1.Para 4.Para 2.Para 3.Introduce aim or background information List all the negative findings.Write a simple conclusion or List any positive findings.How to write a report 1.Layout(格式格式)(P97)2.Tense?3.In what style?Aims of the reportNegative CommentsPositive CommentsConclusion&Recommendationspresent simpleIn a formal style avoid giving personal opinions;use formal linking words.Write a report on waste pollution.Step 2:While-writing Water pollution Air pollution Waste pollutionGlobal warming Environmental DisastersEndangered animalsAlternative 1Alternative 1Writing 随着社会的快速发展及人们生活水平的提高，大量的固体垃圾产生，垃圾污染越来越严重。请你根据下面表格中的内容，写一篇报告(report)，谈一谈中国垃圾污染的现状及采取的措施。现 状措 施1.工厂产生大量的固体废工厂产生大量的固体废物物,很多无法分解很多无法分解break up through natural processes。2.人口快速增长，产生大人口快速增长，产生大量的生活垃圾量的生活垃圾3.白色垃圾，污染严重白色垃圾，污染严重1.制定法律禁止企业乱排放制定法律禁止企业乱排放废物。废物。2.垃圾分类垃圾分类sort，再生利用，再生利用 recycle3.市民不使用塑料袋，使用市民不使用塑料袋，使用纸袋，纸袋，购物袋或布袋。购物袋或布袋。Para 1.Introduce aim or background information Aims of the reportSubject:waste pollution and waste pollution measures in China.Date:Nowadays waste pollution has become more and more serious.This report aims to assess the current levels of waste pollution in China and to consider appropriate control measures.Para 2.List all the negative findings.Negative CommentsThere are several disappointing facts.With the fast development of industry,a large amount of solid waste is produced by factories,some of which is difficult to be broken up through natural processes.Due to the rising population,more products are being used and as a result,quite a few daily waste comes out.What worse,white pollution,which is mainly caused by throwing plastic bags into the nature,has become a far bigger threat to the environment.1.工厂产生大量的固体废物工厂产生大量的固体废物,很多无法分解很多无法分解 break up through natural processes。2.人口快速增长，产生大量的生活垃圾人口快速增长，产生大量的生活垃圾 rubbish,trash,daily waste 3.白色垃圾，污染严重白色垃圾，污染严重Para 3.List any positive findings.Positive CommentsHowever,there are some encouraging things.Both the government and the citizens have realized how serious the problem is.They have taken action to fight against waste pollution.For example,governments make laws and regulations to prohibit factories from dumping industrial waste into the nature.In addition,daily trash is sorted and some of the waste materials,such as old newspapers and glass are recycled.Instead of using plastic bags,citizens are also advocated using paper bags shopping baskets or bags made of cloth when shopping.1.法律惩罚乱排放的企业。法律惩罚乱排放的企业。2.垃圾分类垃圾分类sort，再生利用，再生利用recycle 3.市民不使用塑料袋，使用纸袋购物袋或布袋。市民不使用塑料袋，使用纸袋购物袋或布袋。pump/pipe into rivers,dump Para 4.Write a simple conclusion or Conclusion&RecommendationsIn a word,with the efforts of governments and all citizens,waste pollution levels will surely drop and our earth will become cleaner and cleaner.While-writing:Write a report on various topics.Make sure you；1.Have clear layout 2.State the facts in objective ways 3.Use necessary linking words4.Choose correct tense Read your own passage and check the following things:1.tense 2.spelling 3.punctuation(标点符号）Step 3:Post-writing:1.Self-editingEvaluation(评价)questions your evaluation 评价人评价人 Does it have clear layout and linking words?yes noIs it written in a formal style?Yes no Does it have correct tense?yes so-so noHow is the handwriting?excellent,good;acceptableUnderline any words or phrases you like.Step 3:Post-writing:2.Peer-editingPair-work:Read your partners passage and make your evaluations.Lets share our reports on different issues!Step 3:Post-writing:3.PresentationThank you for your attention!我们周围有很多噪音污染我们周围有很多噪音污染,如图如图所示所示,请谈谈从自己做起如何改善噪音请谈谈从自己做起如何改善噪音污染污染.常识：噪声级为3040分贝是比较安静的正常环境；超过50分贝就会影响睡眠和休息。由于休息不足，疲劳不能消除，正常生理功能会受到一定的影响；70分贝以上干扰谈话，造成心烦意乱，精神不集中，影响工作效率，甚至发生事故；长期工作或生活在90分贝以上的噪声环境，会严重影响听力和导致其他疾病的发生。Alternative 2Alternative 2
