高考英语写作技巧ppt课件.pptx

高考英语写作技巧高考英语写作技巧 Im sorry to tell you that I cant gotothecinema with you this Sunday.I feel terrible that I will breakmypromise and missthechancetohavefun.ThereasonforthisisthatI just heardof an amazing calligraphyexhibition which will be held in our city that day.Itssaidthatthis exhibition will gather alargenumberof well-known workscreatedbytopmasters.Its definitely a brilliant opportunity for us to experiencethecharmof Chinese calligraphy and enrichourknowledgeaboutChinese culture.SinceyouarefascinatedbyChineseculture,Isincerelyhopethat you can come with me together.Imsure you will benefitalotfrom the exhibition.Im looking forward to your reply!语言地道，语言地道，规范规范覆盖所有内容覆盖所有内容要点要点1、主要内容：、主要内容：内容要点；内容要点；词汇和语法的数量和准确性；词汇和语法的数量和准确性；上下文的连贯；上下文的连贯；语言的得体性语言的得体性应用了较多的应用了较多的语法结构和词语法结构和词汇汇有效地使有效地使用了语句用了语句间的连接间的连接成分成分2、拼写和标点拼写和标点是语言是语言准确性的一个方面，准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考际的影响程度予以考虑。虑。3、词数、词数少于少于80和和多于多于120的，从总分中减去的，从总分中减去2分。从分。从Dear开始往下开始往下数数13行，收手行，收手4、如、如书写较差书写较差，以至影，以至影响交际，将分数降低一响交际，将分数降低一个档次。个档次。给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象整整体体三三部部分分1.Beginning（2.5行）行）自我介绍？+写作目的2.Body 覆盖要点（语气，交际目的）3.Ending（2.5行）行）首尾呼应+感谢？+希望 1.More than delighted to learn from that you,Im writing with pleasure to/in the hope that书信体开头的四种精彩书信体开头的四种精彩开头开头自我介绍：自我介绍：I am Li Hua,a senior three student from China./I am Li Hua,a senior three student who comes from/would like to/feels it a great honor to 2.Deeply fascinated by,I am writing with pleasure to/in the hope that 3.Knowing fromthat,I am writing with pleasure to/in the hope that 4.Words fail to convey mywhen.(句号)I am writing to/in the hope that1.ask for sb.s help do sb.a favor2.ask for further/specific/detailed information3.recommend sth.recommendation4.make a brief introduction about5.offer some advice about6.apply for sth./apply to plain(to sb.)about8.apologize(to sb.)for(doing)sth.9.congratulate sb.on(doing)sth.书信体结尾句型书信体结尾句型1.It is my sincere hope that you will.2.Your prompt attention to my writing will be highly appreciated!不需要感谢不需要感谢 3.I would fully appreciate it if you could.4.Looking forward to your early reply!需要感谢需要感谢5.If you have any question,do feel free to ask me.不超字数，可以写不超字数，可以写 假设你是新华高级中学学生李华，在网上得知澳大利亚籍中学生David想来中国沿古代丝绸之路游览，他向网友征集驴友兼向导。你有兴趣做他的旅伴，请给David写一封自荐信，内容要点如下：1.自我介绍；2.你的优势；3.希望能想成为David的驴友。假设你是新华高级中学学生李华，在网上得知澳大利亚籍中学生David想来中国沿古代丝绸之路游览，他向网友征集驴友兼向导。你有兴趣做他的旅伴，请给David写一封自荐信，内容要点如下：1.自我介绍；2.你的优势；3.希望能想成为David的驴友。假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给）。给外教外教MrJenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（的文字和格式（format）注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右左右;2.可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。技技巧巧1.使用较使用较高级的词汇高级的词汇3.使用使用恰当的连接词恰当的连接词词汇反映你知识贮存量的词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。的一个重要标志。运用得当的句子结构可以运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉整篇文章因此而生辉 。使用恰当连接词，对写一使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有篇有“英语味英语味”的文章很的文章很重要，能重要，能使文章上下衔接使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑自然、紧凑。增强书面表达效果的技巧增强书面表达效果的技巧增强书面表达效果的技巧增强书面表达效果的技巧2.使用较使用较丰富的句式丰富的句式1.Below are my reasons for(doing)sth./why(从句）For one thing,For another.2.With reference to/when it comes to,I do believe that.Besides,3.As a newcomer,I do hope Besides,.三三.上下文怎么过渡？上下文怎么过渡？More than delighted to learn that you together with your family will pay a visit to China this summer vacation,I am writing to recommend the city of Xian as your tourist destination.It is my sincere hope that you will find my recommendation and suggestions helpful and useful.Looking forward to your early reply.Below are the reasons why I recommend it.For one thing,it is home to a variety of tasty snacks.For another,it used to the capital of ancient China and you are likely to increase your knowledge about the long history of China.With reference to what preparations you should make,I do hope you read some books about Chinese culture and adapt yourself to using chopsticks.Besides,a little bit Chinese will definitely help you a lot.(结结构构+过渡）过渡）Below are the reasons why I recommend it.For one thing,it ishometoavarietyoftastysnacks.For another,it usedto the capital of ancient China and you arelikelytoincreaseyourknowledgeaboutthe long history of China.Withreferencetowhat preparations you should make,I do hope you read some books about Chinese culture and adaptyourselfto using chopsticks.Besides,a little bit Chinese will definitely help you a lot.(高级词汇高级词汇+短语）短语）Below are the reasons why I recommend it.For one thing,it is home to a variety of tasty snacks.For another,it used to the capital of ancient China，where you are likely to increase your knowledge about the long history of China.With reference to what preparations you should make,I do hope you read some books about Chinese culture and adapt yourself to using chopsticks.Besides,a little bit Chinese will definitely help you a lot.练习一：准备好了申请信，请求修改！I have finished my application letter.However,I am not sure whether there are any mistakes in it.Would you please be so kind as to correct them for me?假如你是李华，准备邮寄一张书写布（handwriting cloth）给美国朋友David，供他练习中国书法（calligraphy），请发电子邮件告诉他相关情况，要点如下：1.介绍书写布特点：蘸（dip）水即可书写；能反复使用；2.请他告知详细收货地址。假如你是李华，你校正准备开一个书法展，请写一封电子邮件给外教James，请求他提供一副作品。1.作品字数限制；2.作品内容励志；3.截稿日期及作品提交地点。Belowarethedetailedrequirementsabout the work.Foronething,the number of words should be limited to eight.Foranother,what you write down are supposed to be inspiring.Mostimportantly,do remember to hand in your work before July 1 at the school office.More than delighted to learn that youhaveagoodcommandofChinesecalligraphy,I am writinginthehopethatyou can provide a work of yours for ourschoolcalligraphyshow.I would fully appreciate it if you could offeryourworkontime.If you have any question,do feel free to ask me.中间段的结构与过渡：中间段的结构与过渡：Below are the 总结词.For one thing,.For another,.Most importantly,I do hope that you.Besides,.练习二：不能一同去观看龙舟赛，说明原因。练习二：不能一同去观看龙舟赛，说明原因。The university I have a preference for is going to have an interview with me next Friday.Therefore,I have to apologize to you fornotbeingabletowatch the Dragon Boat match with you.练习三：练习三：你的英国笔友通过汉语水平三级考试（你的英国笔友通过汉语水平三级考试（HSK3），），请写信表示祝贺。请写信表示祝贺。More than delighted to learn that you have passed HSK 3,I am writing to convey my sincere congratulations.Words fail to convey my congratulations when news comes that you have passed HSK 3.练习四：练习四：你的英国笔友未能通过汉语水平三级考试（你的英国笔友未能通过汉语水平三级考试（HSK），），请写信表示安慰并提出建议。请写信表示安慰并提出建议。More than sad to learn that you failedHSK 3,I am writing to convey my comfort and offer some advice.Words fail to convey my sadness when news comes that you failed HSK 3.I am writing to offer my advice.练习五：练习五：你在英国做交换生期间，你的英国朋友你在英国做交换生期间，你的英国朋友Tom对你提供了很多帮助，现表示感谢。对你提供了很多帮助，现表示感谢。I amgrateful to you for the great help you provided when I was studying in Britain as an exchange student.show gratitude(to sb.)for sth./doing sth.练习六：练习六：外教即将回国，表示祝福。外教即将回国，表示祝福。It is my sincere hope that everything is going well with you and mayyouhavea bright future!1.告知详细地址。告知详细地址。2.可以了解其他国家。可以了解其他国家。3.绿水青山就是金山银山。绿水青山就是金山银山。4.我喜欢阅读我喜欢阅读.5.留下联系电话和电子邮箱地址。留下联系电话和电子邮箱地址。You can contact me at 12345678 or .I am wondering if you could tell me your detailed address.一、怎样使用较高级句式一、怎样使用较高级句式Weallthink it a terrific opportunity to learn about other countries.The importance of a good environment with clean water and green mountains cant be overemphasized.Nothing in the world can delight me so much as reading books.6.孝敬父母。孝敬父母。7.我尊重我的父母。我尊重我的父母。8.请帮助我。请帮助我。9.我喜欢旅游和阅读我喜欢旅游和阅读.10.说明见面时间和地点。说明见面时间和地点。Of all the people I know,perhaps none deserves my respect more than my parents.We should show respect and love for our parents,without whom we would not be living a happy life.I am wondering if you can lend me a hand.I have a preference for travelling as well as reading.I am wondering if we could meet at the school gate at 2 p.m.on July 1.假如你是李华，现受邀参加国际中学生环假如你是李华，现受邀参加国际中学生环保大会，请你写一篇关于保大会，请你写一篇关于“垃圾分类回收垃圾分类回收”的发言稿。的发言稿。1.垃圾分类回收垃圾分类回收的的原因原因；2.列举一个具体做法；列举一个具体做法；3.发发出出倡议倡议。垃圾分类：垃圾分类：garbageclassification Good morning,girls and boys!I feel it a great honor to stand here,talking about garbage classification.As you know,the importance of classifying rubbish can not be overemphasized.For one thing,recyclable rubbish can be made use of again to save natural resources.For another,non-recyclable rubbish will be collected to prevent environmental pollution.When it comes to what we can do,I do believe that two rubbish cans should be placed in each classroom so that it can be recycled respectively.It is my sincere hope that all of you can take action now and do your part.Thats all!Thanks for listening!1.感叹句感叹句我多么不愿意放弃这次宝贵的机会去我多么不愿意放弃这次宝贵的机会去。HowunwillingIamtogiveupsuchapreciouschanceto!多么宝贵的一次经历啊！多么宝贵的一次经历啊！Whatanvaluableexperienceit is!二、使用丰富的句式：二、使用丰富的句式：利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思,能增加文章的文采。2.强调句强调句无论何时深处麻烦中，我的同学小明都会帮助我。无论何时深处麻烦中，我的同学小明都会帮助我。Itwas my classmate Xiaoming that/whowouldcome to my assistance whenever I was in trouble.我真的认为我具有必要的资格。我真的认为我具有必要的资格。I do believe I have the qualifications needed.3、倒装句倒装句只有这样，我们才能创建一个更加和谐和繁荣的社会。只有这样，我们才能创建一个更加和谐和繁荣的社会。Onlyinthiswayareweabletobuildamoreharmoniousandprosperoussociety.4、notonlybutalso西安历史悠久，美食众多。西安历史悠久，美食众多。NotonlydoesthecityofXianhavealonghistory,butitisalsohometoavarietyoftastysnacks.5、with短语短语 随着高考临近，我很有信心，因为做好了充分准备。随着高考临近，我很有信心，因为做好了充分准备。With Gaokao drawing near,I find myself more and more confident in that I have made full preparations.随着经济发展，越来越多的家长开车接送小孩上学。随着经济发展，越来越多的家长开车接送小孩上学。Withthedevelopmentofeconomy,anincreasingnumberofparentschoosetodrivetheirkidstoandfromschool.6、定语从句定语从句 我认为，我们学校应该进行垃圾回收利用。我认为，我们学校应该进行垃圾回收利用。From my perspective,our school should be a place whererubbishcanbeclassifiedandrecycledafterwards.我英语很好，和外国人交谈容易。我英语很好，和外国人交谈容易。I have a good command of both spoken and written English,whichmakesitapieceofcakeforustocommunicatewithforeigners.7、各种名词性从句各种名词性从句我们要为周围的人树立榜样。我们要为周围的人树立榜样。Whatwecandois do our part and set a good example to others surrounding me.我们要竭尽全力，使得家乡更美更宜居。我们要竭尽全力，使得家乡更美更宜居。We should do whateverisworthdoingto make our hometowns beautiful and comfortable.8、各种状语从句各种状语从句 穿越马路时，我们应该选择斑马线。穿越马路时，我们应该选择斑马线。Whencrossingthestreet,we ought to choose the zebra crossing.只要遵守交通规则，更少的交通事故会发生。只要遵守交通规则，更少的交通事故会发生。Solongasweobeythetrafficrules,our city will be a place where there is fewer traffic accidents.Do call me before hand sothatIcanmeetyouattheairport.They had to wait inthattherainwasgettingmoreandmoreheavy.9.9.使用并列句使用并列句继续努力，你会取得进步的。继续努力，你会取得进步的。Carry on and you will make great efforts.Carry on and you will make great efforts.学习使用筷子，更好适应中国的生活。学习使用筷子，更好适应中国的生活。Learn Learn how to use chopsticks and youll how to use chopsticks and youll adapt yourself to the life here.adapt yourself to the life here.高考作文类型：高考作文类型：A.A.图表数据说明类文章图表数据说明类文章B.B.提示议论文类文章提示议论文类文章C.C.看图说话类文章看图说话类文章D.D.书信类书信类写作基本步骤：写作基本步骤：1.仔细审题，列举大纲。仔细审题，列举大纲。围绕要点，写出句子。围绕要点，写出句子。添加过度，确保连贯。添加过度，确保连贯。先求正确，再求灵活。先求正确，再求灵活。认真眷写，卷面整洁。认真眷写，卷面整洁。联合国教科文组织某考察团正联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员接待人员,请根据下列提示以发言请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况：稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况：1)大小：近大小：近100户人家，约户人家，约500口人。口人。2)变化：过去很穷，变化：过去很穷，78年后变年后变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。现已旧貌换新颜。3)教育：原来的学校很小，现教育：原来的学校很小，现已经过改建。新建的教学楼有已经过改建。新建的教学楼有4层，层，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。儿童在此免费就读。注意：注意：1）要点齐全，前后连贯。）要点齐全，前后连贯。2）词数：）词数：100-120之间。之间。Practice书面表达：书面表达：Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool.Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.Ithaschangedalotsince1978.Peopleherearericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Theschoolherewasverysmall.Nowithasbeenrebuilt.Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.Thankyou.Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school!Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school!This village is very small.It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.It used to be very poor.It has changed a lot since 1978.People here are richer than before.Now it is taking on a new look.This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.It used to be very poor.However,ithaschangedalotsince1978 and has been developing very fast.Peopleherelive a much better lifethanbefore.Nowitistaking onanewlook.Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall.Nowithasbeenrebuilt.Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.Thankyou.Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmalland most children couldnt afford to go to school.Butnowithasbeenrebuiltand which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful oneinthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Whats more,theyenjoyfreeeducation.May you enjoy your stay here.thenewlybuiltteachingbuilding/May you have a pleasant time here!Thankyou.Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school!This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.It used to be very poor.However,it has changed a lot since 1978 and has been developing very fast.People here live a much better life than before.Now it is taking on a new look.In the past,the school here was very small and most children couldnt afford to go to school.But now it has been rebuilt and the newly built teaching building which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful onein the village.All the school-age children can study here.Whats more,they enjoy free education.May you enjoy your stay here.Thank you.现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以“高三学生要不高三学生要不要参加春游活动要参加春游活动”展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，写一展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，写一篇短文。篇短文。的学生认为的学生认为的学生认为的学生认为应该春游应该春游不应该春游不应该春游接触大自然，呼接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健吸新鲜空气，有利健康康高考临近，没有心高考临近，没有心情玩情玩活动是精神放松，活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学大脑休息，有利于学习习春游耽误学习春游耽误学习The outline of the writing:Conclusion paragraph:Introduction paragraph:Point 2BodyPoint 1supporting idea 1supporting idea 2supporting idea 1supporting idea 2主题句的内容要明确具体，语言简洁，主题句的内容要明确具体，语言简洁，开门见山，句式力争多样性开门见山，句式力争多样性How will you start you passage?How will you start you passage?问句：问句：从句：从句：Introduction:（sample）WhetherornotshouldSenior3studentsgospringouting?Wehavehadaheateddiscussion.巧用过渡句，过渡词，理顺文章的逻辑巧用过渡句，过渡词，理顺文章的逻辑关系关系Pay special attention to the transition sentences:Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.The body partPoint1:65%的人认为应该春游（亮明观的人认为应该春游（亮明观点）点）Sentence pattern:Most of us(about 65%)hold the opinion that,since it tends to,which is unfavorable to Most students,about 65%,are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.Reason1Reason1：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康空气，有利健康Sentence pattern:They think it good to do sth/sth do good to sth In their opinion,it is of great benefit to do sth Eg:They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air Reason 2:活动是精神放松，大脑活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习休息，有利于学习（注意：两个观点之间的连接）递进递进whatsmore；besides;moreover;inaddition；furthermoreEg:theycanrelaxthemselvesforawhileandresttheirbrainssothattheywillbemoreenergetic.Conclusion:Conclusion:小段总结，进一步小段总结，进一步亮明观点，前后呼应亮明观点，前后呼应。Eg:Theythinkitwilldogoodtotheirstudents.Point 2:的学生认为不应该的学生认为不应该春游（亮明观点）春游（亮明观点）注意：使用过渡句，自然衔接句子和段落注意：使用过渡句，自然衔接句子和段落（承上启下）（承上启下）Sentencepattern:However,othersprefertoSomeothershavejusttheoppositeopinion.Ontheotherhand.Eg:Ontheotherhand,about35%studentsareagainsttheide