人教版九年级英语unit4-写作课件.ppt

Writing About Changes How have Bobs friends changed in the last 4 years?Mario Amy Tina short/weartallshort hair curly,red hair straight,blonde hair long hairHow has Billy changed since his primary school classmates last saw him?shy,quiet,(face)turn red.thin,wear glasses,popularbig,strong a good student，readHow has Candy changed since she became a pop star?shy,not popular,get tons of attention not have private time be careful about.hang out with friends How has Li Wen changed since he talked with his parents?lonely,unhappy happier shy,make some friends become less interested in study harder A Persons ChangesAppearance Personality Hobbieslife/study Others Jung Da-Yeon （郑多燕）（郑多燕）Nov.27,1966after giving birth to 2 children She has changed a lot!Jung Da-Yeons ChangesAppearance Personality Hobbieslife Others Jung Da-Yeons ChangesAppearance fatthin&beautiful Jung Da-Yeons ChangesPersonality fatself-abased(自卑自卑)thin&beautiful confident Jung Da-Yeons ChangesHobbiesfatself-abased(自卑自卑)diet(饮食）饮食）exercisethin&beautiful confident Jung Da-Yeons Changeslife fatself-abased(自卑自卑)diet(饮食）饮食）exerciselaugh at thin&beautiful confident Jung Da-Yeons ChangesOthers fatself-abased(自卑自卑)diet(饮食）饮食）exerciselaugh at famous thin&beautiful confident How She has Changed!Appearance If you are a fan of sports,you must know Jung Do-Yean.Appearance She used to be very fat afterPersonalityHobby LifePersonality giving birth to two children.She was very self-abased about herself.HobbyShe didnt use to be very careful about her diet and she didnt like exercise.LifeHer husband often laughed at her pastHer changes A.Then one day,she decided to deal with her terrible body.B.At last,she has changed a lot.C.At first,she began to change.How She has Changed!Appearance If you are a fan of sports,you must know Jung Do-Yean.She used to be very fat afterPersonalityHobby Life giving birth to two children.She was very self-abased about herself.She didnt use to be very careful about her diet and she didnt like exercise.Her husband often laughed at her Then one day,she decided to deal with herher terrible body.Now,she keeps a healthy diet and takes exercise every day.She becomesthin and looks beautiful.She is very confident.Her husband never laughs at her anymore.A.She wrote a book about her story.B.Shes very glad that she s changed a lot and shes become very famous.C.People sure change.How She has Changed!Appearance If you are a fan of sports,you must know Jung Do-Yean.She used to be very fat afterPersonalityHobby Life giving birth to two children.She was very self-abased about herself.She didnt use to be very careful about her diet and she didnt like exercise.Her husband often laughed at her Then one day,she decided to deal with herher terrible body.Now,she keeps a healthy diet and takes exercise every day.She becomesthin and looks beautiful.She is very confident.Her husband never laughs at her anymore.Shes very glad that she s changed a lot and shes become very famous.pastpresent _The way to write about comparison(比较）比较）_Writing Task Mind mapMy ChangesAppearance_ Personality_ Hobbies_life/study_ Others Writingused toComparison(比较）How Ive changed How time flies!Now I am a student in Grade Nine.Everything has changed.So have I._ Peer Checklist 同伴评价表同伴评价表After reading my partners article,I know 1.whats changed in his/her appearance YES/NO2.whats changed in his/her personality YES/NO3.whats changed in his/her hobby YES/NO4.whats changed in his/her life/study YES/NOIn my partners article,I can find the following features:5.Comparison YES/NO6.“used to”YES/NOTotal:_（满分20 分）2222228 7.spelling,sentences,conjunctions (连接词）连接词）Homework1.Revise the writing:A persons changes2.Think about how to write about:A places changes.Thank you!