公共英语三级PETS3级-写作精讲(应用文写作、综合写作、复习指导)课件.pptx

全国英全国英语语等等级级考考试试（三（三级级）PETS-3写作精讲 写作精讲一、写作文写作二、综合写作三、复习指导一、应用文写作常考的常考的3种种应应用文写作用文写作书书信信书信分为私人信函 和公务信函两大类。便条便条便条是书信的一种，是简短的信函。通知通知用于说明或传达某 项事情或活动信息No.66,Changjiang West Road Your sincerely,Steven Huangdao District,QindaoP.R.C.May 10,2016 Prof.Water White1216 Central Ave SW Albuquerque,New Mexico U.S.A.xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Looking forward to your reply.Dear Mr.White，齐头齐头式写作模板式写作模板信信头头：写信人的地址和日期：写信人的地址和日期信内地址：收信人姓名和地址信内地址：收信人姓名和地址称呼：称呼：Dear后加姓名后加姓名正文：全部正文：全部顶顶格写格写结结束束语语签签名名 Your sincerely,StevenNo.66,Changjiang West Road Huangdao District,QindaoP.R.C.May 10,2016 Prof.Water White 1216 Central Ave SW Albuquerque,New Mexico U.S.A.xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Looking forward to your reply.Dear Mr.White，缩进缩进式写作模板式写作模板缩进缩进靠右靠右仔仔细细分分析析题题干干给给出出的的信信 息息和和任任务务要要求求，准准确确把把 握握命命题题者者的的出出题题意意图图。切忌切忌“提笔就写提笔就写”！1审题审题列出文章基本框架：列出文章基本框架：分几段？每段写什么？分几段？每段写什么？总总共写几句共写几句话话？2列提列提纲纲根根据据列列好好的的提提纲纲，套套用用 经经典典句句型型，句句子子之之间间用用 连连接接词词衔衔接接，同同义义词词之之 间间注意注意变变化。化。写作写作3检查检查句子的句子的时态时态、语态语态、主主谓谓一致、一致、单词单词拼写和拼写和 标标点符号等。点符号等。4检查检查书书信信类类写作写作答答题题流程流程便条写作便条写作便条是便条是书书信的一种形式信的一种形式，是是为为实实现约现约会会、邀、邀请请、请请求求、致、致谢谢、祝、祝贺贺、慰、慰问问以及以及 留言等目的而写的留言等目的而写的简简短短信信函。函。日期日期日期写在便条的右上角日期写在便条的右上角便条便条称呼称呼称呼比称呼比书书信的称呼要随意一些。一信的称呼要随意一些。一般般在人在人名名前加前加上上dear并并冠以冠以尊尊称。称。Mr.（Mister），用），用于于无无职职衔衔的男的男子子。Mrs.（Mistress），用于已），用于已婚婚女子。女子。Miss 用于未婚女子。用于未婚女子。Ms.用于女士通称。用于女士通称。Dr.（Doctor），用于博士。），用于博士。Prof.（Professor），用于），用于大大学教学教授授。正文正文另起一行，可以另起一行，可以缩进缩进，也可以，也可以对齐对齐。注意使用口注意使用口语语化的表达方式化的表达方式签签名名在在结结束束语语正下方另起一行，留下姓正下方另起一行，留下姓名名。也可以加上也可以加上Yours，Sincerely等等词词。便条写作便条写作Your sincerely,StevenMay 10thDear Mr.White，xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx时间时间日期日期称称谓谓结结束束语语 签签名名正文正文Your sincerely,Steven时间时间日期日期称称谓谓结结束束语语 签签名名May 10thDear Mr.White，xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx正文正文齐头齐头式式缩进缩进式式便条写作便条写作56.You have a ticket to the Russian National Ballet Troupe,which is visiting and you want to give it to your friend Alice.Write a note to her and say:1)the time of the show,2)the place where you will wait for herYou should write about 100 words.Do not sign your own name at the end of your email.假假设设你有一你有一张张俄俄罗罗斯国家芭蕾舞斯国家芭蕾舞团团演演出的出的门门票票，你你想送想送给给朋友朋友爱丽丝爱丽丝。让让你你给给她写一她写一张张便条便条。Step1审题审题给给定的情景：定的情景：便条写作便条写作告告诉诉她：她：1)演出演出时间时间2)集合地点集合地点Step1审题审题任任务务要求：要求：便条写作便条写作列提列提纲纲Step2便条写作便条写作便条内容便条内容简简短，一般不需要分段，一段即可。短，一般不需要分段，一段即可。邀邀请类请类便条写作思路一般是：便条写作思路一般是：诚挚邀请对方参加某活动介绍活动的内容、时间、地点，相关内容再次发出邀请或者期待对方回复经经典例典例句：句：May I take this opportunity to invite you to.?Im writing to invite you to I am extending to you our formal invitation to.It gives me the greatest pleasure to invite you to.We would be very pleased if you could honor us with your company.Anticipating your reply.We hope you can come and look forward to seeing you later.Step 3写作写作便条写作便条写作May 10thDear Alice,Im writing to invite you to watch the performance given by the Russian National Ballet Troupe.It will be performed in the National Grand Theater tomorrow evening.I am sure that you will be happy to watch it and I leave you a ticket.The performance will begin at 7 P.M.I will wait for you at the theater entrance.I hope you can come and look forward to seeing you later.Yours sincerely,TomStep4 检检 查查从以下方面从以下方面进进行修改：行修改：语语法：法：时态时态是是否否一致一致，主主谓语谓语是是否一否一致致，名，名词词的的单单复复数数形式，形式，被被动语态动语态等。等。词汇词汇：连连接上下文的接上下文的连连接接词词使用是否正确使用是否正确，单词单词拼拼写是写是否否出出 现现低低级错误级错误等。等。格式：格式：格式是否出格式是否出现错误现错误，标标点符号是否点符号是否使使用用错错误误等。等。注意：注意：不要不要进进行大篇幅的修改，更不要因行大篇幅的修改，更不要因为为修改修改 破坏卷面的整破坏卷面的整洁洁。便条写作便条写作便条写作便条写作道歉道歉类类写作思路：写作思路：1)错误的行为，2)具体原因，3)弥补方法，4)再次致歉。经经典例句：典例句：错误的行为 Im writing to express my apologies for Excuse me for my.弥补方法 I am sure I can make up the loss by I promise it will never happen again.I promise to make up my mistakes.再次致歉 Please forgive me.It would be very kind of you to give me another chance to Im thankful to you for overlooking my fault便条写作便条写作You didnt hand in your homework on time.Now you have to write a note to your teacher for apology in about 100 words.Do not sign your own name at the end of your email.范文：Dear Mr.Wang,Im writing to express my apologies for not being able to hand in my homework before thedeadline.I know that you must have been disappointed.I also feel worried and anxious about this.The fact is that my computer broke down when Im finishing my homework.If my computer worked well last night,I would have handed in on schedule.I promise it will never happen again.It would be very kind of you to give me another chance to hand in another homework.Please forgive me and I am waiting for your reply.Yours sincerely,Tom便条写作便条写作祝祝贺类贺类写作思路：写作思路：1)祝贺之事2)表示祝贺3)赞美之词4)忠心祝福（再次祝贺祝福未来）经经典例句：典例句：祝贺之事 Im so happy to learn that.表示祝贺 Please accept my warmest congratulations.Warm congratulations on赞美之词 You really deserve it because.I have been appreciating your excellent performance in study and ability in your work.衷心祝福 You will have a brilliant future.Youll make greater progress Congratulations again and all good wishes for you.便条写作便条写作Please write a note of congratulations to your friend Wang Fang,who have done very well in the college entrance exam and has been enrolled in China University of Petroleum.You should write approximately 100 words.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use“Wang Lin”instead.范文：May 10thIm so happy to learn that you have done very well in the college entrance exam this year and has been admitted into China University of Petroleum.Warm congratulations on your achievements.You really deserve it because you have paid hard work and sweat.I have been appreciating your excellent performance in study.You will have a brilliant future.Congratulations again and wish you make greater progress.Yours,Wang LinDear Wang Fang,便条写作便条写作致谢写作思路：写作思路：1)致谢之事2)自己受到的益处3)再次致谢，表示回报 经经典例句：典例句：致谢之事 I am writing to express my gratitude to you for.I am writing to tell you how much I appreciate your hospitality.Thank you so much for your assistance you gave to me.再次致谢,表示回报Please accept my warmest thanks.I hope I have the chance to reciprocate rsprket your kindness.便条写作便条写作Suppose your tutor Professor Wu gave you advices on the writing of the paper.Write him a note to show your gratitude.You should write approximately 100 words.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use“Wang Lin”instead.范文：May 10thDear Professor Wu,I am writing to express my gratitude to you for your advices on the writing of my paper.Your guidance inspired me a lot and helped me complete the research paper.I couldnt have done it without your suggestions and encouragements.I have finished my research paper,and I owe it to your help.Please accept my warmest thanks.I hope I have the chance to reciprocate your help.Respectful yours,Wang Lin便条写作便条写作申申请请写作思路：写作思路：1)申请的内容2)符合的条件3)期待给予机会 经经典例句：典例句：Ive read your advertisement and Im very interested in.I am writing to apply for the vacant post of.advertised in.In reply to your advertisement in.,I beg to apply for the post of.in your company.I have learned from the newspaper that there is a vacancy for.I wish to become a graduate student in the Department of Economics at your university.I believe my education and experience qualify me for this position.I believe I have the necessary qualifications and experience needed for the position of.advertised in the paper.Ill greatly appreciate it if you can give me the chance.Enclosed is a copy of my resume,which should give you a broader picture of my experience.I hope I may be granted an interview when I can explain my qualification more fully.便条写作便条写作范文：May 10thDear Sirs,I am writing to apply for the vacant post of English teacher advertised in newspaper.I believe I have the necessary qualifications and experience needed for the position.Enclosed is a copy of my resume,which should give you a broader picture of my experience.I would be greatly grateful if you would grant me a chance for an interview.Respectfully yours,Wang Lin通知写作通知写作通知是上通知是上级对级对下下级级、组组织对织对成成员员或平或平行行单单位位之之间间部署工部署工作作、传传达达事情事情或召开会或召开会议议等所使等所使用的用的应应用用文文。通知要。通知要 求言求言简简意意赅赅、措辞得当、措辞得当、时间时间及及时时。通知主要分。通知主要分为为书书面通知面通知和和口口头头通知通知。标题标题正上方的正中位置正上方的正中位置应应写写标题标题，多，多用用Notice（或或NOTICE）作作为标为标记记。书书面面通知通知正文正文“四多一少四多一少”原原则则四多：被四多：被动语态动语态多，多，将将来来时时态态多，多，简简单单句句多多，祈，祈使使句多。句多。一少：修一少：修饰饰性性词语词语少。少。四四“W”通知的开通知的开头头要交代清楚活要交代清楚活动动的的内内容、容、对对象、象、时时间间和和地地点。点。我我们们称之称之为为四四“W”，即：即：what，who，when，where层层次清晰。一个次清晰。一个层层次表达一件事，次表达一件事，切切忌在忌在一一个句个句子子中表中表达达多件多件事事情。情。称呼称呼语语被通知的被通知的单单位或人用第三人称。位或人用第三人称。单单位及日期位及日期发发出通知的人或出通知的人或单单位的名称，一般位的名称，一般写写在在标标志志的上的上方方或在或在正正文后文后面面的右的右下下角。角。日期日期应应写在最后一行的左下角，低写在最后一行的左下角，低于于落款。落款。通知写作通知写作NOTICEThe sports meeting which was to take place this Saturday has to be put off because of the heavy rain these days.All students are required to come to school on Saturday morning as usual,but there will be no class that afternoon.Weather permitting,the sports meeting will be held next Saturday morning.Members of the school basketball team must come to the stadium at 4:30 this Saturday afternoon.Basketball stars from America will come and givespecial training and coaching then.Office of Physical Education10th September,2009范文范文标题大写，居中正文上方多简单句 多被动句 多将来时态日期写在左下角，低于落款落款写下通知人或单位，位于右下角通知写作通知写作例例题题1：Your university is celebrating its 60th anniversary,and the Preparation Committee is planning to hold art exhibitions.As an organizer of the activity,you are making a call for works from all the teachers and students.Your notice should state:1)Who you represent and why you are looking for works2)What kind of works you are looking for,and3)When the deadline is and where the teachers and students should sendYou should write about 100 words.Do not sign your name at the end of the notice.Use“The 60th Anniversary Preparation Committee”instead.通知写作通知写作NOTICEIn celebration of the 60th anniversary of our university,the Preparation Committee has decided to hold art exhibitions with the theme of“Cohesion and Development”.All the teachers and students from different departments are greatly encouraged to send your works.The works are expected to be a good display of achievements in the past sixty years and to show vigor of development in the future.The deadline for submission is September 10th,2016.Works should be sent directly to the Preparation Committees office on the 10th floor of the Administration Building.The 60th Anniversary Preparation CommitteeMay 10th,2016二、综合写作二、综合写作PETS-3 级级B节节写作主要考写作主要考查查的是的是“看文看文写写作作”。给给出一出一篇篇200250字的文章字的文章，先先阅阅读读文文章，章，总总结结中中心心思思想想，然然后后根根据据文文章章中中心心思思想想发发表表 自自己己的的看看法法，写写一一篇篇120词词左左右右的的 作文，作文，类类似于似于“读读后感后感”。话话题题一一般般涉涉及及到到与与我我们们生生活活息息息息 相相关关的的社社会会现现象象和和问问题题，比比如如教教 育育、职职业业道道德德、身身体体健健康康、家家庭庭 关关系系、环环境境保保护护、人人口口增增长长、文文 化交流等。化交流等。写作写作评评分分标标准准（1720分）分）完整性完整性包含所有要点，包含所有要点，评论评论合理；合理；准确性准确性原文理解完全准确；原文理解完全准确；语语法法结结构和构和词汇词汇准确，准确，错误错误极少；极少；连贯连贯性性有效使有效使用用多种多种衔衔接手法，接手法，内内容容连连贯贯流流畅畅，层层次次清清晰；晰；多多样样性性使用了丰富的使用了丰富的语语法法结结构和构和词汇词汇，没，没有有完全完全抄抄写。写。第四档第四档第三档第三档第二档第二档 第一档第一档第五档第五档2015年年9月真月真题题：Read the text below.Write an essay in about 120 words,in which you should summarized key points of thetext and make comments on them.Try to use your own words.Lori Schneider knows a few things about fear.“We were crossing a ridge that dropped off 8,000 feet on both sides,”says the 53-year-old climber of ascending Mount Everest last spring.“The wind was blowing at 60 miles an hour.If there was ever a moment to panic,this was it.”But she didnt.An hour later,she reached the peakthe last step in her personal challenge to scale the highest mountains on all seven continents.Ten years earlier,shed come face-to-face with a different type of fear,when she was unable to feel anything in the right side of her body.After learning she had multiple sclerosis(MS)a serious illness that gradually makes a person weak and unable to move or see,she left her marriage,job,and home:“I ran from my whole life.”It was just before climbing South Americas Mount Aconcagua in 2000 that she set her sights on the Seven Summits.After training by pulling 50-pound bags of dog food up the ski slopes near her home,she topped Europes Mount Elbrus in 2002,North Americas McKinley in 2006,and Australias Kosciuszko and Antarcticas Vinson Massif in 2008.Shed scaled Africas Kilimanjaro in 1993.That left Asias Everest,the highest of all.And there she stood,on a ridge at 28,000 feet.“When I trained,I told myself to take one step at a time by spelling out word”she says.“So I spelled out Dont let fear in.”It got her to the top.Shes the first person with MS to conquer the Seven Summits.With her condition stable,she plans a return toKilimanjarothis time with 15 others with MS by her side.仔仔细细分分析析题题干干给给出出的的信信 息息和和任任务务要要求求，重重点点阅阅 读读文文章章的的首首末末段段或或段段落落 的首末句。的首末句。切忌切忌“提笔就写提笔就写”！1审题审题列出文章基本框架：列出文章基本框架：分几段？每段写什么？分几段？每段写什么？总总共写几句共写几句话话？2列提列提纲纲根根据据列列好好的的提提纲纲，套套用用 经经典典句句型型，句句子子之之间间用用 连连接接词词衔衔接接，同同义义词词之之 间间注意注意变变化。化。写作写作3检查检查句子的句子的时态时态、语态语态、主主谓谓一致、一致、单词单词拼写和拼写和 标标点符号等。点符号等。4检查检查答答题题流程流程Step1审题审题审题审题干要求：干要求：先先总结总结文章主要文章主要观观点，再点，再发发表自己表自己的的观观点。点。审审文章内容：文章内容：启启发发性故事、性故事、社会社会热热点点现现象等；象等；文章的中心思想是什么？（首末段文章的中心思想是什么？（首末段、段落段落首首末句）末句）什么人干了什么事，什么人干了什么事，带带来什么启来什么启发发？Step2列提列提纲纲120词词控制在控制在1214句句话话之之间间。总结总结文章文章观观点点简简明扼要明扼要总结总结文章的主要文章的主要观观点点总结总结模板：什么人做了什么事模板：什么人做了什么事带带来来了了什么什么启启发发。（34句句话话，40个个词词）表达自己表达自己观观点点层层次清晰，分点次清晰，分点论论述，述，连贯连贯流流畅畅，富富于于变变化化。（使用（使用连连接接词词、固定句式、同、固定句式、同义义替替换换）列提列提纲纲Step2第一段第一段 首先，勇气。首先，勇气。有勇气会有勇气会.没有勇气会没有勇气会.其次，精神力量。其次，精神力量。相信自己，就会相信自己，就会.举举例例说说明。明。总总而言之，勇气、精神而言之，勇气、精神力力量、量、乐乐观观。只有只有这样这样才才.Lori Schneider虽虽身患身患MS疾病疾病，但是征但是征服服了了7座高座高峰峰。最令我印象深刻的是她最令我印象深刻的是她面面对对困困难难的方的方式式。你会你会问问怎么才能怎么才能战胜战胜恐恐惧惧呢？呢？第第 句句总结总结文章，点明文章，点明文章的中心；文章的中心；第第句提出自己的句提出自己的观观点或点或 话题话题。第二段第二段第第句写句写论论点点1；第第句，分句，分别别从正反两从正反两 方面方面阐阐述分述分论论点点1。第三段第三段第第句写分句写分论论点点2；第第句，改写第句，改写第句；句；第第句，例句，例证证最后，最后，乐观乐观。乐观乐观有力量。有力量。乐观乐观有益有益处处。第四段第四段第第句写分句写分论论点点3；第第句句重重复改复改写写第第句。句。第五段第五段第第句句总结总结自自己己的的观观点点；第第句呼句呼应应自自己己的的观观点点。The story that Lori Schneider,a 53-year-old woman who had multiple sclerosis,conquered the Seven Summits inspires me a lot.What impresses me most is the way she overcomes the fear when she is confronted with difficulties.You may wonder how to overcome the fear?We should face to the troubles with courage.If we have courage,we can realize all our dreams.If we are in panic,the chance of success will slip away.Do not ever underestimate spiritual strength.If you believe in yourself strongly enough,you really can make miracles.Just like Lori Schneider did,tell“Dont let fear in”to yourself repeatedly,and you will not afraid of anything.Keep optimistic regardless of adversities.The power of maintaining optimistic is undeniable.It is beneficial for us to think in a positive way.In a word,we should be a man of courage,belief and optimism.Only then can we overcomeany fear in any given situation.这这篇作文写得如何？怎么改？篇作文写得如何？怎么改？The story that Lori Schneider,a 53-year-old woman who had multiple sclerosis