定语从句在写作的简单应用—公开课课件.pptx

Enjoy the nice sayings&translateHeaven rewards those who work hard,and flowers in spring come to fruition in autumn.天道酬勤，春华秋实。（出处书大诰）（摘自中国国家主席习近平应邀出席博鳌亚洲论坛2018年年会开幕式的重要主旨演讲：“天道酬勤，春华秋实”。中国人民坚持聚精会神搞建设、坚持改革开放不动摇，持之以恒，锲而不舍，推动中国发生了翻天覆地的变化）学学“习习”语，知典故语，知典故 第1页/共41页Enjoy the nice sayingsSuccess comes to those who share in one purpose.上下同欲者胜 （出处孙子.谋攻）（摘自2017年习近平新年贺词：“上下同欲者胜”。只要我们13亿多人们和衷共济，只要我们党永远同人民站在一起，大家撸起袖子加油干，我们就一定能走好我们这一代人的长征路）学学“习习”语，知典故语，知典故第2页/共41页Enjoy the nice sayingsHeroes are those who know themselves and can overcome their own difficulties.自知者英，自胜者雄。（出处中说.周公）（摘自2016.10.21习近平在纪念红军长征胜利80周年大会上的讲话：“自知者英，自胜者雄”，民族复兴梦想越接近，改革开放任务越繁重，越要加强党的建设）学学“习习”语，知典故语，知典故第3页/共41页What have you learned last week?WHAT？第4页/共41页Revision 1.构成要素构成要素先行词先行词：被定语从句修饰的：被定语从句修饰的 _ 或或 _关系词关系词：分为：分为_ 和和_定语从句定语从句：修饰：修饰 _ 或或 _的从句，一般的从句，一般 紧跟在紧跟在_的后面。的后面。2.结构：结构：_词词+_词词+从句从句 3.分类：分类：_ 和和 非限制性定语从句非限制性定语从句 4.应用：可以用来描述应用：可以用来描述_ 和和_ 5.翻译：翻译：“的的”名词名词代词代词名词名词代词代词关系副词关系副词关系代词关系代词先行词先行词关系关系先行先行事物事物人物人物限制性限制性第5页/共41页引导非限制定从，指代整个主句的内容主语或宾语宾语定语，表所属关系状语第6页/共41页I am a student from Xiaosheng Middle School,_ is surrounded by many green trees.whichPractice 1:在空格中填入合适的关系词第7页/共41页The reason _I want to introduce my school is that it is one of the most beautiful schools in Shantou.whywhy 第8页/共41页There are modern basketball courts and playground _are available（可利用的）for us to take exercise.that/which第9页/共41页 I can well remember there was a time _ a blue sky and the green trees have kept me spellbound.when 第10页/共41页Whats more,there are many friendly classmates _ I could get along well.with whom第11页/共41页More importantly,I have met a great number of excellent teachers _ have rich teaching experience.that/who第12页/共41页 I will never forget the classroom _ we study together.where第13页/共41页This is the beautiful school _ I will spend three happy years.where第14页/共41页Practice 2把下列每组题中的简单句合并为一个含有定从的复合句第15页/共41页 I like the Mid-autumn Festival.The Mid-autumn Festival is as important as the Spring Festival.People will try to go home for the family reunion.People work far from their homes.There is a kind of special food for this festival.The name of the food is mooncake.1)I like the Mid-autumn Festival which is as important as the Spring Festival.3)There is a kind of special food,the name of which is mooncake.3)There is a kind of special food,whose name is mooncake.2)People who work far from their homes will try to go home for the family reunion.Tip1:写出两个简单句写出两个简单句主句主句从句从句主句主句主句主句从句从句从句从句 Tip2:在一个简单句中找出一个要修饰的在一个简单句中找出一个要修饰的词汇（这个词在两个简单句中都有）词汇（这个词在两个简单句中都有）Tip3:把另一个简单句改成定从，从句要紧跟把另一个简单句改成定从，从句要紧跟先行词先行词(特别注意引导词的选择）特别注意引导词的选择）whowhichwhich第16页/共41页定语从句运用于写作Why do we learn the Attributive Clauses?WHY？第17页/共41页写作中定语从句的主要作用：写作中定语从句的主要作用：1.增加词数增加词数Today some teachers are visiting our class.The teachers are from Xiaosheng Middle School.Today some teachers who are from Xiaosheng Middle School are visiting our class.I want to play basketball in the NBA.2.可连接两个包含同一事物的句子，避免单词重复可连接两个包含同一事物的句子，避免单词重复和句式单一和句式单一3.补充细节，以丰富文章内容补充细节，以丰富文章内容This is my uncle,a doctor.This is my uncle,who is a doctor.I want to play basketball in the NBA,which is always my dream.第18页/共41页How do we use the Attributive Clauses in writing?HOW？定从的使用情况第19页/共41页一：两个（以上）简单句的合并 John is my best friend.John gave me a gift.He bought this gift from USA,gave me a gift,John,which he bought from USA.my best friend,（题干中出现两句（以上）涉及同一事物的简单句）定从的使用 第20页/共41页我们班是一个大家庭。我们班是一个大家庭。这个大家庭包括这个大家庭包括3535个女孩和个女孩和4040个男孩。个男孩。Our class is a big family.The family consists of 35 girls and 40 boys.Our class is a big family,which consists of 35 girls and 40 boys.consist ofPractice:第21页/共41页二：插入语的使用众所周知：如上所述：As we all know：As is mentioned above：定从的使用 第22页/共41页众所周知，中国有世界上最多的人口As we all know,China has the largestpopulation all over the world.China has the largest population all overr the world,as we all know.China,as we all know,has the largest population all overr the world.第23页/共41页正如上面所提到的，定语从句用处很大。_,the Attributive Clause is of great use.As is mentioned above第24页/共41页如上所述，我支持后者的观点。in favor of I,as is mentioned above,am in favor of the latter view.正如我们所期待的，她取得了第一名。She,as we all expect,got the first prize.第25页/共41页三：非限指代整句的使用我们不应玩手机，这会影响学习。我们应该每天锻炼，这对身体好。We should not play the mobilephone,which has a bad effect on our study.We should take exercise every day,which is good for our health.定从的使用 第26页/共41页For example:My school is a beautiful place.My school is a beautiful place，where there are green trees,beautiful flowers,singing birds and fresh air.Solution:找到这个简单句中的中心词，用定语从句将其丰富我的学校是个美丽的地方。有多美丽？有多美丽？因何美丽？因何美丽？题干中只有一个孤立的简单句。题干中只有一个孤立的简单句。四：定从在要点增加上的使用定从的使用 第27页/共41页(2013年高考山东卷)描述你的假期打算（包括兼职、旅游、志愿者等）I would like to do a part-time job,which will help me earn money and accumulate working experience.Practice:用定语从句增添做这些事情的原因Traveling is one of my choices,which will enrich my life and broaden my horizon.I would like to do voluntary work,which will make a great contribution to society.第28页/共41页Translate the following sentences.1.我总是会参观一些博物馆，这些博物馆于拓宽视野、丰富知识来说是不应错过的。2.你知道，中国结非常受中国人的喜欢。(Chinese knot）3.当今，父母为他们的独生子女做所有的事情，这使得这些独生子女非常依赖于父母。4.人们可以一边吃月饼一边赏月，月饼是这个节日的特殊食品。第29页/共41页1.I would visit some museums which should not be missed to widen my horizons as well as enrich my knowledge.(2013山东高考满分作文)我总是会参观一些博物馆，这些博物馆对于拓宽视野、丰富知识来说是不应错过的。2.As you know,Chinese knots are very popular with Chinese people.(2013新课标全国卷满分作文)你知道，中国结非常受中国人的喜欢。第30页/共41页4.People can enjoy the moon while eating mooncakes,which are the special food for this festival.(2013辽宁高考满分作文)人们可以一边吃月饼一边赏月，月饼是这个节日的特殊食品。3.Nowadays parents have done everything for their single children,which makes the children rely on their parents badly.(2013福建高考满分作文)当今，父母为他们的独生子女做所有的事情，这使得这些独生子女非常依赖于父母。第31页/共41页作文中是不是越多定语从句就越好？第32页/共41页2017年全国卷假定你是李华，想邀请邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.展览时间、地点；2.展览内容。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。第33页/共41页 Dear Henry Im Li Hua,who is the leader of the paper-cutting club in our school.Last time you told me you looked forward to learning more about traditional Chinese culture.Now Im glad to tell you there will be a Chinese paper-cutting exhibition which is held by our school.I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for the art feast.The exhibition,the theme of which is beauty of China,will take place in the school hall from 2 to 5 on the afternoon of June 21.Our clubs works will be displayed,and we have a valuable set of paper-cutting which is created by a famous artist of this field.Besides,there will be a lot of useful and interesting activities,from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture.I would appreciate it if you accept my invitation.Im sure it can leave a wonderful impression on you!Im looking forward to your reply.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua第34页/共41页Dear Henry,Im Li Hua,the leader of the paper-cutting club in our school.Last time you told me you looked forward to learning more about traditional Chinese culture.Now Im glad to tell you there will be a Chinese paper-cutting exhibition held by our school.I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for the art feast.The exhibition,the theme of which is beauty of China,will take place in the school hall from 2 to 5 on the afternoon of June 21.Not only will our clubs works be displayed,but we also have a valuable set of paper-cutting created by a famous artist of this field.Besides,there will be a lot of useful and interesting activities,from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture.I would appreciate it if you accept my invitation.Im sure it can leave a wonderful impression on you!Im looking forward to your reply.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua第35页/共41页123Please add anything you like and anything you wantPlease add anything you like and anything you wantPlease add anything you like and anything you wantcontents Dear Henry Im Li Hua,who is the leader of the paper-cutting club in our school.Last time you told me you looked forward to learning more about traditional Chinese culture.Now Im glad to tell you there will be a Chinese paper-cutting exhibition which is held by our school.I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for the art feast.The exhibition,the theme of which is beauty of China,will take place in the school hall from 2 to 5 on the afternoon of June 21.Our clubs works will be displayed,and we have a valuable set of paper-cutting which is created by a famous artist of this field.Besides,there will be a lot of useful and interesting activities,from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture.I would appreciate it if you accept my invitation.Im sure it can leave a wonderful impression on you!Im looking forward to your reply.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua范文一13245第36页/共41页123Please add anything you like and anything you wantPlease add anything you like and anything you wantPlease add anything you like and anything you wantcontentsDear Henry,Im Li Hua,the leader of the paper-cutting club in our school.Last time you told me you looked forward to learning more about traditional Chinese culture.Now Im glad to tell you there will be a Chinese paper-cutting exhibition held by our school.I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for the art feast.The exhibition,the theme of which is beauty of China,will take place in the school hall from 2 to 5 on the afternoon of June 21.Not only will our clubs works be displayed,but also we have a valuable set of paper-cutting created by a famous artist of this field.Besides,there will be a lot of useful and interesting activities,from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture.I would appreciate it if you accept my invitation.Im sure it can leave a wonderful impression on you!Im looking forward to your reply.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua范文二高考英语满分作文高考英语满分作文“黄金三定律黄金三定律”:行文清晰、准行文清晰、准确、简洁三点确、简洁三点12held by our school.名词短语作同位语 created by a famous artist of this field.过去分词做后置定语not only but also 倒装句第37页/共41页作文中是不是越多定语从句就越好？Two or three Attibutive Clauses are enough in one composition!除定语从句外，我们可以用并列句，非谓语做后置定语或状语，用介词短语（with+宾语+宾补），名词性从句等复合句，强调句，倒装句第38页/共41页重写这次月考作文:1、12分以下，先用简单句，再用 1-2句定语从句整合句子；2、12-16分至少使用2句以上 的定语从句；3、16分以上，尽量句式多样化。Homework第39页/共41页THANK YOU第40页/共41页感谢您的观看！第41页/共41页