中考作文讲座2.ppt
作文 是会呼吸的痛 Kelly 何隽博何隽博 新新东东方方优优能中学班教老能中学班教老师师2作文是会呼吸的痛它活在试卷最后的角落看别人写会痛看自己写会痛反正都会痛.312-14年中考作文平均分题题型型书书面表达平均分面表达平均分12年年8.513年年6.9314年年8.3742014年“阅读”建议类2013年“丁xx”看法议论类2012年“公园”介绍描述类2011年“修办国际学校”建议类2010年“助人为乐”演讲稿类2009年“高中生活”寻找帮助类2008年“特长”建议类重庆中考作文类型5为了更好地开展2014年全民阅读活动，有关部门就如何为市民创造良好的阅读环境广泛征求意见，你班将举行一次英语主题班会来讨论这个话题。请你写一篇发言稿，提出自己的想法和建议。要点提示：要点提示：1.阅读的好处：2.你的建议（如：建更多小型图书馆，经常性地介绍好书等）3.要求：要求：1.词数：80词左右开头，开头已给出，不计入总词数 2.文中不能出现自己的名字和所在学校的名称。Hello,my dear friends.As we all know,reading is very important to us.2014重庆中考作文真题6Read is good.Read make me happy.We should to build more small library.I like read very much.Bad789101.要点全BadGood2.简单句111.列全要点12三个要点阅读让我们开心。阅读让我们知道更多。为了让人们喜欢读书，我有一些好的建议。我们应该建立更多小型图书馆。我们应该经常介绍好书。图书馆的座位应该更舒服。人们将会喜欢读书。人们才会经常去图书馆看书。希望我的建议有用。让我们一起读书吧！132.简单句翻译：阅读让我开心。Read make me happy.Reading makes me happy.找动词V(2)保留一个谓语动词14翻译：阅读让我知道更多。Read make me know more.happy.Reading makes me know more.找动词V(3)保留一个谓语动词15简单句翻译原则（1个V）Ving Ving+V谓语+to do V原16 Reading makes us happy.Reading makes us know more.To make people love reading,I have some good advice.We should build more small libraries.We should often introduce some good books to others.Seats in the libraries should be more comfortable.People will love reading books.They will often go to libraries.I hope my advice is useful.Lets read now!(65个字)Good17181.并列句GoodBetter2.连接词19Reading makes us happy.Reading makes us know more.1.并列句（句与句）Reading not only makes us happy but also makes us know more.简单句+连词+简单句20并列句连词1.并列关系 and,bothand,not onlybut also,neithernor2.选择关系 or,eitheror3.转折关系but,while4.因果关系 for,so,1.开头句 引入 2.主体 观点 Firstly,要点1 Secondly,要点2 Thirdly,要点3.结尾句 总结 In a word,点睛句 2.连接词模板三点型：首先：to begin with，to start with其次：besides,whats more,and then最后：finally,last but not least,两点型：一方面：on the one hand,另一方面：on the other hand总结：Generally speaking,In general,逻辑结构连词大全23 Reading not only makes us happy but also makes us know more.To make people love reading,I have some good advice.To begin with,We should build more small libraries.Whats more,We should often introduce some good books to others.Finally,seats in the libraries should be more comfortable.People will love reading books.They will often go to libraries.I hope my advice is useful.Lets read now!(76词)Better24251.各种从句BetterBest2.高级词汇26 形式：主句+连接词+从句 连接词+从句，主句1.各种从句27宾语从句 We should build more small libraries.I think we should build more small libraries.使用提示：表达想法建议28条件状语从句Seats in the libraries should be more comfortable.If the seats in the libraries are more comfortable,people will enjoy reading.使用提示：表达想法建议29定语从句We should often introduce some good books.We should often introduce some books which are useful.使用提示：修饰名词30表语从句Seats in the libraries should be more comfortable.My advice is that seats in the libraries should be more comfortable.使用提示：我的.是.311.I think/hope+句子.2.If+从句，主句.3.主+谓+N+定从4.My+N is that 句子.常用从句模板322.高级词汇We should build more small libraries.We should often introduce good books.Seats in the libraries should be more comfortable.换are supposed to 换be expected to 33goodwonderfullikeenjoybe fond ofhappyjoyfulverysoextremelymanyplenty of want feel like importantplay an important role in shouldbe supposed to/be expected toto(为了）in order to 高级词汇34万能句型1.It is+adj.for sb.to do sth.2.sothat/tooto/not enough3.It is well-known that+句子“众所周知”4.It is said/reported/believed that 据说5.Thats the reason why+句子 2.那就是为什么.(替换so）6.We should do what we can to+V原 尽最大努力做7.Only in this way,can we.(倒装）只有用这样的方法，我们才能.35 Reading not only makes us happy but also makes us know more.In oder to make people love reading,I have some good advice.To begin with,I think we are supposed to build more small libraries.Whats more,We are expected to introduce some books which are useful to others.Finally,seats in the libraries should be more comfortable.If the seats are more comfortable,people will enjoy reading.I hope my advice is useful.Lets read now!(80词)Best字如其人41总结1.badgood 要点全，简单句2.goodbetter 并列句，连接词3.betterbest 从句，高级词汇4.书写漂亮 何隽博TEL：15823979754QQ：1181801132
