九年级英语写作专题课.pptx
A Writing Class of Grade 9A Writing Class of Grade 9襄阳市第三十九中学 郭 玲How soon will we separate from each other?In about two monthsWhat and who will you miss?Whatarethetruefriends?Friendsarethosepeoplewhocanmakeusfeelathome.makeuslaugh.IthinkIbelieveInmyopinionAsfarasIknowIamsurethatAsforme,AForeverFriendAfriendwalksinwhentherestoftheworldwalksout.Sometimesinlife,youfindaspecialfriend,someonewhochangesyourlifejustbybeingpartofit;Someonewhomakesyoulaughuntilyoucantstop;Someonewhomakesyoubelievethattherereallyisgoodintheworld;Someonewhoconvincesyouthattherereallyisanunlockeddoorjustwaitingforyoutoopenit.Thisisforeverfriendship.Whenyouredown,andtheworldseemsdarkandempty,yourforeverfriendliftsyouupinspiritsandmakesthatdarkandemptyworldsuddenlyseembrightandfull;Yourforeverfriendgetsyouthroughthehardtimes,thesadtimes,andtheconfusedtimes.Ifyouturnandwalkaway,yourforeverfriendfollows;Ifyouloseyourway,yourforeverfriendguidesyouandcheersyouon;Yourforeverfriendholdsyourhandandtellsyouthateverythingisgoingtobeok.Andifyoufindsuchafriend,youwillfeelhappyandcomplete,becauseyouneednotworry,youhaveaforeverfriendforlife,andforeverhasnoend.1.Whatisaforeverfriend?2.Whatstheresultofhavingsuchafriend?change your life just by being part of it make you believe that there really isget through the hard/sad/confused(迷惑的迷惑的)times lift you up and make that dark and empty world A forever friend:convince(说服说服)you that there really is What can he do?follow you,guide you and cheer you on make you laugh until you cant stop hold your hand and tell you issomeonewhowalksinwhentherestoftheworldwalksoutAresultofhavingsuchafriend:feelhappyandcomplete,needntworryAForeverFriendAfriendwalksinwhentherestoftheworldwalksout.Sometimesinlife,youfindaspecialfriend,someonewhochangesyourlifejustbybeingpartofit;Someonewhomakesyoulaughuntilyoucantstop;Someonewhomakesyoubelievethattherereallyisgoodintheworld;Someonewhoconvincesyouthattherereallyisanunlockeddoorjustwaitingforyoutoopenit.Thisisforeverfriendship.Whenyouredown,andtheworldseemsdarkandempty,yourforeverfriendliftsyouupinspiritsandmakesthatdarkandemptyworldsuddenlyseembrightandfull;Yourforeverfriendgetsyouthroughthehardtimes,thesadtimes,andtheconfusedtimes.Ifyouturnandwalkaway,yourforeverfriendfollows;Ifyouloseyourway,yourforeverfriendguidesyouandcheersyouon;Yourforeverfriendholdsyourhandandtellsyouthateverythingisgoingtobeokay.Andifyoufindsuchafriend,youwillfeelhappyandcomplete,becauseyouneednotworry,youhaveaforeverfriendforlife,andforeverhasnoend.Whatdoyouknowaboutaforeverfriend?Whatcanyoulearnfromthisarticle?AForeverFriendAfriendwalksinwhentherestoftheworldwalksout.Sometimesinlife,youfindaspecialfriend,someonewhochangesyourlifejustbeingpartofit;Someonewhomakesyoulaughuntilyoucantstop;Someonewhomakesyoubelievethattherereallyisgoodintheworld;Someonewhoconvincesyouthattherereallyisanunlockeddoorjustwaitingforyoutoopenit.Thisisforeverfriendship.Whenyouredown,andtheworldseemsdarkandempty,yourforeverfriendliftsyouupinspiritsandmakesthatdarkandemptyworldsuddenlyseembrightandfull;Yourforeverfriendgetsyouthroughthehardtimes,thesadtimes,andtheconfusedtimes.Ifyouturnandwalkaway,yourforeverfriendfollows;Ifyouloseyourway,yourforeverfriendguidesyouandcheersyouon;Yourforeverfriendholdsyourhandandtellsyouthateverythingisgoingtobeok.Andifyoufindsuchafriend,youfeelhappyandcomplete,becauseyouneednotworry,youhaveaforeverfriendforlife,andforeverhasnoend.开开头主主干干结尾尾Topic paragraph（定义/观点等）SupportingParagraph1SupportingParagraph1（支撑论据（支撑论据（支撑论据（支撑论据1 1）SupportingParagraph2SupportingParagraph2（支撑论据（支撑论据（支撑论据（支撑论据2 2）SupportingParagraph3SupportingParagraph3（支撑论据（支撑论据（支撑论据（支撑论据3 3）Concluding paragraphConcluding paragraph（总结升华）（总结升华）Rewritethearticleorally.(口头改编文章口头改编文章60字左右字左右)AforeverfriendSometimesinlife,youfindaspecialfriend,someonewhochangesyourlifejustbybeingpartofit.A friend can change your life just by being part of it.Afriendcanmakeyoubelievethattherereallyisgoodintheworld.Rewritethisarticleusingyourownwords!(口头改写口头改写)Someonewhomakesyoubelievethattherereallyisgoodintheworld.Which article do you think is better?Why?As far as I know,aforeverfriendistheonewhowalksinwhentherestoftheworldwalksout.Firstofall,hecanchangeyourlifejustbybeingpartofit;secondly,hecanmakeyoulaughuntilyoucantstop;moreover,hecanmakeyoubelievethattherereallyisgoodintheworld;lastly,hecanconvinceyouthattherereallyisanunlockeddoorjustwaitingforyoutoopenit.All in all,this is forever friendship.Aforeverfriendwalksinwhentherestoftheworldwalksout.Hecanchangeyourlifejustbybeingpartofit;hecanmakeyoulaughuntilyoucantstop;hecanmakeyoubelievethattherereallyisgoodintheworld;hecanconvinceyouthattherereallyisanunlockeddoorjustwaitingforyoutoopenit.This is forever friendship.What makes a good argumentative writing?Topicbeginning(introduction)bodyendTopic(提出观点提出观点)Supporting4:finallySupporting2:secondlySupporting3:moreoverSupporting1:firstlyConclusion总结升华总结升华1-2句句6-7句句1-2句句Good framework(框架图框架图)and content(内容内容)方法 1:1.表示并列或递进表示并列或递进:and,as well as,bothand,whats more not onlybut also,neithernor2.表示选择表示选择:or,eitheror3.表示转折表示转折:but,however,althoughthough,after all,anyway4.表示因果表示因果:because,so,therefore,since,for,as a result5.表示条件表示条件:if,unless6.表示对比表示对比:instead,notbut,while,in the same way,on the one handon the other hand7.表示解释表示解释:for example,for instance,such as,that is to say,in other words,to tell the truth8.表示顺序表示顺序:to begin with,firstly,first(of all),second(ly),next,later,since then,from then on,finally,in the end9.表示强调表示强调:also,besides,especially,actually,in fact10.表示结论表示结论:all in all,altogether,in a word,generally speaking,in short关联词关联词(Linking words)方法 2:Aforeverfriendwalksinwhentherestoftheworldwalksout._,hecanchangeyourlifejustbybeing_,hecanchangeyourlifejustbybeingpartofit;_partofit;_,hecanmakeyoulaughuntilyoucanthecanmakeyoulaughuntilyoucantstop;_stop;_,hecanmakeyoubelievethattherereallyhecanmakeyoubelievethattherereallyisgoodintheworld;_isgoodintheworld;_,hecanconvinceyouthattherehecanconvinceyouthattherereallyisanunlockeddoorjustwaitingforyoutoopenit.reallyisanunlockeddoorjustwaitingforyoutoopenit._,this is forever friendship._,this is forever friendship.FirstofallsecondlymoreoverlastlyAll in allmoreover,lastly,first of all,secondly,all in allLets try!善用词汇、短语善用词汇、短语(good words and(good words and phrases)phrases)甚至善用甚至善用高级词汇高级词汇方法 3:你永远的朋友帮你克服困难。你永远的朋友帮你克服困难。A You forever friend helps you overcome difficulties.B You forever friend gets you through difficulties.C You forever friend helps you out with difficulties.妙用引文和例子妙用引文和例子（Good examples-Good examples-多用于多用于“the the bodybody”）方法 4:Aforeverfriendcanhelpyoualot,likeguidingyou,cheeringyouon活用多种句型活用多种句型(good sentences)(good sentences)方法 5:Eg.What a kind boy my friend is!How important a friend is!感叹句强调句Eg.It was the friendship that helped the hopeless boy.I do hope I can have many friends if possible.Eg.1.Only in this way can you make true friends.2.Not only do I learn how to get on wellwith others,but also I no longer feel lonely.倒装句1.用这种方式你才可以交到真正的朋友。用这种方式你才可以交到真正的朋友。2.我不仅学会了怎样和别人相处，而且还我不仅学会了怎样和别人相处，而且还不再感到孤独。不再感到孤独。各种从句1.你是否能交到好朋友取决于你的品质。你是否能交到好朋友取决于你的品质。2.据报道，拥有朋友的人活得更长。据报道，拥有朋友的人活得更长。1.Whetheryoucanmakegoodfriendsornotdependsonyourcharacter.2.Itisreportedthatpeoplewithfriendslivelonger.主主语语从从句句Hecanmakeyoubelievethattherereallyisgoodintheworld.宾语从句宾语从句Themostimportantruletomakefriendsisthatyoushouldbehonest.表语从句表语从句 In my opinion,friends are those who can make me laugh.定语从句定语从句各种状语从句各种状语从句 Someone who makes you laugh until you cant stop.If you turn and walk away,your forever follows.As long as we have such a friend,we will feel happy and complete.Content（内容）Framework（结构）language（语言）handwriting（书写）A good article要点全，思想正语法、拼写正确详略得当行文流畅 工整、整洁上一级词汇、短语，优美句式结构连接词的合理使用评价标准Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患难见真交。患难见真交。Alifewithoutafriendisalifewithoutasun.人生在世无朋友，犹如生活无太阳。人生在世无朋友，犹如生活无太阳。Atruefriendisknowninthedayofadversity（逆境）（逆境）.疾风知劲草，患难见真情。疾风知劲草，患难见真情。每个人都渴望友谊，但是交朋友也是一门每个人都渴望友谊，但是交朋友也是一门学问。请你根据自己的实际情况，以学问。请你根据自己的实际情况，以“Howtomakegoodfriends”为题，写出一篇为题，写出一篇90个个词左右的英语短文。词左右的英语短文。25Three-step Analyzing(Three-step Analyzing(三审三审)三审person（人称）（人称）key points（要点）（要点）tense（时态）（时态）第一人称第一人称一般现在时一般现在时topicSupportingconclusionHow to make good friendsContent（内容）Framework（结构）language（语言）handwriting（书写）A good article要点全，思想正语法、拼写正确详略得当行文流畅 工整、整洁上一级词汇、短语，优美句式结构连接词的合理使用How to write三审三审十十句句三段三段写作模式写作模式person（人称）（人称）tense（时态）（时态）key points（要点）（要点）1-2句句6-7句句1-2句句bodyendbeginning(introduction)Modify your writing and copy it out in your exercise books.
