Book3 Module6 Writing.ppt
Reading&WritingReading&Writing By Wang Juemin from NO.28 Senior HighGuess the meaningGuess the meaning A friend in need is a friend indeed.A friend in need is a friend indeed.Treat others the way you want to be treated.Treat others the way you want to be treated.Para 1Para 2Para 3Para 4Para 5Para 6Para 7Para 8Para 9A brief introductionMemories with his friendThe endingDivide and MatchDannyIn a tiny villageIn the childhooddigged upand collectedWould chaseWould slide downMadeout ofbuiltwheresmokeconsiderateThen,moved toNow,theyre in touch.Summary I was 1 (bless)with a happy family,one 2 most people would want to have.We lived in a tiny village in Scotland.I had a close friend 3 (name)Danny.4 (第第一次一次)we met,I felt we were 5 (like).We spent long summer evenings 6 (play)in the forest,where we 7 (chase)squirrels.8 windy days,wed went to the loch.When I was hurt,he was 9 (consider)enough to help me out.He was on good 10 with everyone in the village.It was the finest friendship everyone could have.I was blessed (bless)with a happy family,one that most people would want to have.We lived in a tiny village in Scotland.I had a close friend named(name)Danny.The first time(第第一一次次)we met,I felt we were alike(like).We spent long summer evenings playing(play)in the forest,where we would chase (chase)squirrels.On windy days,wed went to the loch.When I was hurt,he was considerate(consider)enough to help me out.He was on good terms with everyone in the village.It was the finest friendship everyone could have.shy(adj.)funny(adj.)helpful(adj.)out-going(adj.)close(adj.)apart(adj.)Suggested expressionsgo fishing/hikingclimb mountainshavein commonget on well withkeep in touch withlose touch withIts 时段时段 sinceIt isthat/whoWPS1.I was very sad when my best friend left.2.I had a happy childhood.3.We played together in the summer.4.Everyone in the village liked us.5.I miss the old times.Find out the original sentences!2.I had a happy childhood.I I was was blessed blessed withwith a a happy happy childhood,childhood,oneone that most people would want to have.that most people would want to have.1.I was very sad when my best friend left.The first time I lost my best friend,I thought it was the end of the world.very sad whenhadPolish(润色润色)the sentences!3.We played together in the summer.We We spentspent long long summer summer evenings evenings in in the the pine pine forest,forest,digging updigging up worms for fishing,worms for fishing,and collectingand collecting feathers.feathers.4.Everyone in the village liked us.We We were on good terms withwere on good terms with everyone in the village.everyone in the village.5.II I m m nostalgic nostalgic forfor the the happy happy times times we we spent spent together many years agotogether many years ago.playedlikedPolish(润色润色)the sentences!miss the old times.Tips on how to polish!1.Try to use more phrases!2.Dont forget some sentence patterns!3.Choose words from Senior High!4.Be neat in your handwriting!Make Sentences1.1.我和李华是同桌，他是个幽默的人。我和李华是同桌，他是个幽默的人。2.2.周末，我们会去钓鱼或者爬山。周末，我们会去钓鱼或者爬山。3.3.我们去了不同的中学，不再像以前那样要好。我们去了不同的中学，不再像以前那样要好。Second thought1.I had a desk-mate named Li Hua,who was funny enough to make everyone laugh.2.We would spend sunny weekends fishing and hiking.3.We got apart in different middle schools and were not as close as we had been.after schoolafter schoolin the parkin the parkprimary schooldesk-mate Show time!weekendclimb mountainsgo fishingyour own lifesometimesmeetget apartget apartmiddle schoolmiddle schoolStory time!primary schooldesk-mateafter schoolin the parkweekendclimb mountainsgo fishingget apartmiddle schoolyour own lifesometimesmeet The Evaluation standards 4.Neat and beautiful handwriting2.Correct spelling grammar3.Proper transitional words1.Descriptive words and phrases.What is friendship?When youre sad,it will comfort you！When youre happy,it will accompany you!No matter how much confusion you have,it will help you open your heart!AssignmentAssignment1.Think carefully:how to keep your friendship.2.polish(润色润色)your story according to what weve learnt today.FIGHTINGMy story Shes my college roommate named Salina.The first Shes my college roommate named Salina.The first time we met,I was attracted by her shinning smile.time we met,I was attracted by her shinning smile.Soon we became very close friends.Soon we became very close friends.Everyday after class,we would be together doing Everyday after class,we would be together doing homework,watching films or just wandering around the homework,watching films or just wandering around the campus.I was poor at my spoken English.It was she campus.I was poor at my spoken English.It was she who was always encouraging me to practice it and at who was always encouraging me to practice it and at the same time considerate enough not to hurt my the same time considerate enough not to hurt my feelings.feelings.We were apart after graduation.And now we still We were apart after graduation.And now we still keep in touch with each other.keep in touch with each other.Shes my college roommate named Salina.The first Shes my college roommate named Salina.The first time we met,I was attracted by her shinning smile.time we met,I was attracted by her shinning smile.Soon we became very close friends.Soon we became very close friends.Everyday after class,we would be together doing Everyday after class,we would be together doing homework,watching films or just wandering around the homework,watching films or just wandering around the campus.I was poor at my spoken English.It was she campus.I was poor at my spoken English.It was she who was always encouraging me to practice it and at who was always encouraging me to practice it and at the same time considerate enough not to hurt my the same time considerate enough not to hurt my feelings.feelings.We were apart after graduation.And now we still We were apart after graduation.And now we still keep in touch with each other.keep in touch with each other.My story Shes my college roommate named Salina.The first Shes my college roommate named Salina.The first time we met,I was attracted by her shinning smile.time we met,I was attracted by her shinning smile.Soon we became very close friends.Soon we became very close friends.Everyday after class,we would be together doing Everyday after class,we would be together doing homework,watching films or just wandering around the homework,watching films or just wandering around the campus.I was poor at my spoken English.It was she campus.I was poor at my spoken English.It was she who was always encouraging me to practice it and at who was always encouraging me to practice it and at the same time considerate enough not to hurt my the same time considerate enough not to hurt my feelings.feelings.We were apart after graduation.And now we still We were apart after graduation.And now we still keep in touch with each other.keep in touch with each other.Shes my college roommate named Salina.The first Shes my college roommate named Salina.The first time we met,I was attracted by her shinning smile.time we met,I was attracted by her shinning smile.Soon we became very close friends.Soon we became very close friends.Everyday after class,we would be together doing Everyday after class,we would be together doing homework,watching films or just wandering around the homework,watching films or just wandering around the campus.I was poor at my spoken English.It was she campus.I was poor at my spoken English.It was she who was always encouraging me to practice it and at who was always encouraging me to practice it and at the same time considerate enough not to hurt my the same time considerate enough not to hurt my feelings.feelings.We were apart after graduation.And now we still We were apart after graduation.And now we still keep in touch with each other.keep in touch with each other.Shes my college roommate named Salina.The first Shes my college roommate named Salina.The first time we met,I was attracted by her shinning smile.time we met,I was attracted by her shinning smile.Soon we became very close friends.Soon we became very close friends.Everyday after class,we would be together doing Everyday after class,we would be together doing homework,watching films or just wandering around the homework,watching films or just wandering around the campus.I was poor at my spoken English.It was she campus.I was poor at my spoken English.It was she who was always encouraging me to practice it and at who was always encouraging me to practice it and at the same time considerate enough not to hurt my the same time considerate enough not to hurt my feelings.feelings.We were apart after graduation.And now we still We were apart after graduation.And now we still keep in touch with each other.keep in touch with each other.Shes my college roommate named Salina.The first Shes my college roommate named Salina.The first time we met,I was attracted by her shinning smile.time we met,I was attracted by her shinning smile.Soon we became very close friends.Soon we became very close friends.Everyday after class,we would be together doing Everyday after class,we would be together doing homework,watching films or just wandering around the homework,watching films or just wandering around the campus.I was poor at my spoken English.It was she campus.I was poor at my spoken English.It was she who was always encouraging me to practice it and at who was always encouraging me to practice it and at the same time considerate enough not to hurt my the same time considerate enough not to hurt my feelings.feelings.We were apart after graduation.And now we still We were apart after graduation.And now we still keep in touch with each other.keep in touch with each other.
