书面表达系列讲练.ppt
书面表达系列讲练书面表达系列讲练 之之 怎样使用较高级的词汇怎样使用较高级的词汇 赢取高分策略赢取高分策略安乡五中安乡五中彭华彭华fivebasicstepsonwriting1.findoutthemainidea.2.graspthekeywords.3.Extendthewords/phrasestosentences.4.Rearrangethesesentencesinorder.5.Readthroughthewholepassagetomakesurethatnomistakesaremade.Warming-up 1.writedownalltheinformation2.useadvancedwordsandvarioussentences3.usesomeconjunctionsWhatisagoodpassage?advancedwordsproperconjunctions陈述事实等陈述事实等增强书面表达效果之三大技巧的使用增强书面表达效果之三大技巧的使用varioussentencesLead-in强调句、强调句、感叹句、感叹句、倒装句、倒装句、祈使句祈使句、名词性从句、名词性从句、定语从句、定语从句、状语从句等状语从句等表转折、表转折、因果、因果、条件、条件、时间时间、举例说明、举例说明、转折转折but;however;yet;instead;ontheotherhand;onthecontrary.条件类型条件类型if;aslongasoncondition(that);unlessorelse因果关系因果关系since;as;because(of);so;thus;therefore;asaresult;表时间表时间when;whileafter;beforeuntil;assoonaslater;afterwards进行举例说明进行举例说明forinstance;forexample;like;suchas用于陈述事实用于陈述事实infact;actually;asamatteroffacttotellyouthetruth返回菜单怎样使用怎样使用“较高级的词汇较高级的词汇”?(1)(1)注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。以增加文采。a.Anewrailwayisbeingbuiltinmyb.hometown.b.Anewrailwayisunderconstructioninmyhometown.Phrases:aroundthecornercometotermswithonthegomakesenseofthrowlightuponturnablindeyeIdioms没有付出就没有回报没有付出就没有回报.nopains;nogains.有志者事竟成有志者事竟成.Wheretheresawilltheresaway.(2)使用一些地道的英语单词。使用一些地道的英语单词。a.Victoryisinsight.b.胜利在望胜利在望b.Thewayheviewstheworldisverypractical.他看世界的方法很务实他看世界的方法很务实(3)(3)避免重复使用某一单词或短语。避免重复使用某一单词或短语。a.Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherprefersto/enjoys/isfondof/loves/isinterestedinwatchingtelevision.b.Hewasdeterminedto/madeuphismindtostudyhardinordertocatchupwiththeothers.Ex1:Matchthesimplevocabularywiththeadvancedvocabulary因为因为because聪明的聪明的clever为了为了inorderto结果结果asaresult重要的重要的important共同度过共同度过spendwiththanksto/owingtoIntelligent/cuteforthepurposeofturnout(tobe)vital/significantsharewithPracticeunderconstructionEx2:Rewritethesesentencesusingsomecomplicatedwords.1.Hehashadacancer.2.IadmireEdisonalotbecausehedidmuchtotheworld.3.Heishealthy.He has suffered from/been diagnosed a cancer.I admire Edison a lot because of his contribution to the world.He is in good health/condition.Ex3:Translatethesesentencesusingadvancedwords1.他对我说的话充耳不闻他对我说的话充耳不闻.He turned a deaf ear to what I said.2.外面下着倾盆大雨外面下着倾盆大雨.It is raining cats and dogs.3.1949年中华人民中和国成立了年中华人民中和国成立了.The year 1949 saw the foundation of the PRC.A good idea occurred to me.4.我突然想到了一个好主意我突然想到了一个好主意.假如你是李华，你澳大利亚的朋友假如你是李华，你澳大利亚的朋友JohnsonJohnson来信告来信告知他今年暑假将来中国学习中文，碰巧你所在的大学知他今年暑假将来中国学习中文，碰巧你所在的大学开设了这样的课程。该课程将于今年月初开始上课，开设了这样的课程。该课程将于今年月初开始上课，有初级，中级，高级三个不同层次的班级。每个班都有初级，中级，高级三个不同层次的班级。每个班都采取小班教学的模式采取小班教学的模式(每班不超过每班不超过1010人人)，由经验丰富，由经验丰富的老师任教。就以上内容请你用英语给的老师任教。就以上内容请你用英语给JohnsonJohnson写一封写一封短信短信.字数字数:50-60:50-60个个 Writingmainidea:takingacourserunningthecoursekeywords:threeleversnotmorethantenstudentsfrombeginningtoadvanced开设课程开设课程月初上课月初上课 三个不同层次的班级三个不同层次的班级每班不超过每班不超过10人人startinginearlyJunec.OuruniversityrunssummerChineselanguagecourseatthreelevelsfrombeginningtoadvanced.b.AllthecoursesstartinearlyJune.e.Lessonswillbegiveninsmallclassesofnotmorethantenstudentsbyteacherswhohaverichexperience inteachingforeignstudents.d.Ifyoudecidetocomeorneedanymoreinformation,doletmeknow.a.ImsogladthatyoureplanningtotakeasummercourseinChina.DearJohnson:ImsogladthatyoureplanningtotakeasummercourseinChina._ ouruniversityrunsummerChineselanguagecourseatthreelevelsfrombeginningtoadvanced._ AllthecoursesstartinearlyJune._ lessonswillgiveinsmallclassesofnotmorethantenstudentsbyteacherswhohaverichexperienceinteachingforeignstudents.Ifyoudecidetocomeorneedanymoreinformation,doletmeknow.Asithappens,Besides,Whatsmore,asithappens;besideswhatsmore;runsbegivenSummary dictionspecialpatternsofsentencesconjunctionsotherwritingskillsteachingimportantpointIV.Assignment假定你是李华假定你是李华,你的英国朋友你的英国朋友PeterPeter来信向你来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文咨询如何才能学好中文.请你根据下列要点写请你根据下列要点写封回信封回信.要点要点:1:1、参加中文学习班。、参加中文学习班。2 2、看中文书刊、电视。看中文书刊、电视。3 3、学唱中文歌。学唱中文歌。4 4、交中国朋友。交中国朋友。注意注意:1:1、词数、词数100100左右；左右；2 2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3 3、开头语已为你写好。、开头语已为你写好。*DearPeter,ImgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.Bestwishes!LiHua
