书面表达高分策略3.ppt

书面表达高分策略书面表达高分策略合理运用过渡词语，确保行文连贯流畅一一、表示转折和对比表示转折和对比but,however,yet,on the contrary,by contrast等。例如：However,if I had to give up one of them,I would turn off the TV rather than cut off the Internet.It wasnt a good thing;on the contrary it was a terrible mistake.firstly,secondly,finally,at first,later,at last,next,first of all,in the end等。例如：Now,Id like to make some suggestions about English teaching and learning in our school.Firstly,we should be given more opportunities to use what weve learned in order to have a better grasp of it.Secondly,I hope our teachers can recommend some more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them.Finally,I suggest we have more English activities,such as English contests and festivals.二二、表示顺序表示顺序besides,in addition,moreover,whats more,whats better,whats worse,more importantly,to make matters worse,worse still等。例如：After class,I often listen to English programs on the radio.Besides,Ive learned a lot on TV,from the Internet and other sources.So I think“Friday News Hour”can broaden our mind and enrich our school life.Whats more,it can help us improve our reading skills.三三、表示递进表示递进四、表示开头过渡四、表示开头过渡as you know,as you can imagine,to begin/start with,in general,above all等。例如:In general,the better use you make of time,the more progress you will make in your study.Above all,I can learn more about nature.So,I want to go to the countryside for a chance.五、表示解释说明五、表示解释说明such as,for example/instance,in other words,that is(to say),namely,for one thingfor another thing等。例如:Sichuan Province is rich in tourist attractions and enjoys many worldly-famous places of interest,such as Jiuzhaigou Valley and Dujingyan Irrigation Project.I think it is a kind of win-win activity.For one thing,I can help take care of the children.For another thing,I can improve my English,make more friends,and enrich my life during the summer vacation.六、表示观点六、表示观点personally,in ones opinion/view,as far as I am concerned等。例如：Personally，I prefer to work in a team,which offers me a chance to learn how to get along with others and to share my experience with them.In my opinion,it would be much better to stay at home,for I can do what I like,such as reading books,watching TV,and helping my parents with the housework.七、表示结果七、表示结果as a result/consequence,thus,therefore,consequently等。例如：He spent a lot of time lying on sofa,watching TV,and did little exercise.As a result,he put on so much weight that he found it difficult to climb the stairs She has set a good example for us.Therefore,she deserves the respect and we should learn from her.八、表示事实陈述八、表示事实陈述as a matter of fact,in fact,actually,to tell(you)the truth等。例如：Through my hobbies,Ive made many friends.In fact，I like meeting new people and talking with them.To tell the truth,I would rather that I had taken the pain instead of you.九、表示总结九、表示总结 all in all,in short,in a word,to sum up,in conclusion,in summary,on the whole,in brief等。例如：In a word,lets greet every day with a smile.Tomorrow is another day.You can do as you please,but on the whole,I think it would be wiser to postpone it.通过观察以上例句，体会连接词在句子中的运用，我们可以总结出，连接词的应用使得语意更连贯，行文更流畅，表达更有层次，大大增强了语言表达的效果。一下通过一篇书面表达的范例，看看如何合理运用过渡词语，以确保行文连贯流畅。【写作任务】假设你是高三学生李华，你校决定从下个月起对垃圾实行分类处理。请你根据一下内容用英语给全校同学写一封倡议书。1 某些垃圾如塑料、电池等对环境有害；2 纸张、矿泉水瓶等可回收利用，以节省资源和资金；3 号召同学参与到这一活动中来。注意：1词数120左右 2 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数Dear following students,Every day people throw away a lot of rubbish.Some of the rubbish rots away over a long period of time._ _ Li Hua【参考范文】Every day people throw away a lot of rubbish.Some of the rubbish rots away over a long period of time.However,rubbish like plastics and batteries dont break down easily,causing damage to the environment.Therefore,how to get rid of this kind of rubbish is becoming a big problem.A decision has been made that from next month on all rubbish in our school should be separated and sorted into plastics,glass and paper.As we know,some rubbish,such as paper and mineral water bottles,can be recycled,which is beneficial to environmental protection.Besides,money and materials will be saved.Dear fellow students,it is high time that we did something to make our earth a better place to live in.Lets start right now and begin with sorting the rubbish.【亮点展示】本篇书面表达从文章连贯性的角度看，恰当地运用了表示转折的连接词 however，表示结果的连接词therefore，表示解释说明的连接词such as，表示递进的连接词besides，使得结构十分紧凑，语篇进展得非常自然，文章条理清晰，逻辑性较强。此外，文章还使用了较多的语法结构和较高级的词汇，从而避免了的句子的单调呆板。值得注意的是，在一篇书面表达中过渡词语的使用应有限，不能因句子与段落之间的衔接和过度使用连接词，那样反而会弄巧成拙，降低文章的可读性。