英语看图作文.ppt
Lead inHave you done some meaningful things recently?Write a diary according to the following pictures.(假设这假设这是你在是你在3 3月月9 9日（星期五）的一段亲身经历。日（星期五）的一段亲身经历。)1.去看电影去看电影2.发现有人掉了箱子发现有人掉了箱子3.高喊失主高喊失主4.乘车追赶乘车追赶5.以钱相谢：拒收以钱相谢：拒收Information got from the writing:1.The type of the passage(体裁体裁):Diary(日记日记)2.The person(人称人称)：The first person(第一人称第一人称)3.The tense(时态时态)：The simple past tense (一般过去式一般过去式)Pick up the key words or phrases in each picture.我去看电影我去看电影.go to a movie/go to the cinema/see a filmthis afternoon1.去看电影去看电影今天下午今天下午This afternoon I went to a movie.我看我看到一个箱子从一辆自行到一个箱子从一辆自行车上掉了下来车上掉了下来.see/find+宾语宾语+宾补宾补fall down from on the way to2.发现有人掉了箱子发现有人掉了箱子在去电影院的路上在去电影院的路上,On the way to the cinema,I found a case fall down from a mans bike.向那人向那人大声喊叫大声喊叫,shout to/at sb.pick up ride fast;hear3.高喊失主高喊失主我捡起箱子我捡起箱子,但他骑得但他骑得很快，没有听到。很快，没有听到。我捡起箱子我捡起箱子,并并向那人大声喊叫向那人大声喊叫,但但他骑得很快，没有听到他骑得很快，没有听到。I picked up the case and shouted to the man,but he rode fast and didnt hear me.我拦了一辆我拦了一辆出租车去追赶失主出租车去追赶失主.stop/take a taxirun after4.乘车追赶乘车追赶于是，于是，Then I stopped a taxi to run after the man.最终，我追上了失主最终，我追上了失主,并把箱子还给他并把箱子还给他.失主拿钱来感谢我失主拿钱来感谢我,但我但我拒绝了拒绝了.catch up withreturntake out sth.to do sthrefuse 5.以钱相谢：拒收以钱相谢：拒收最终最终,我追上了失主我追上了失主,并把箱子还给他并把箱子还给他.At last,I caught up with him and gave the case back to him.失主拿钱来感谢我失主拿钱来感谢我,但我拒绝但我拒绝了了.The man took out some money to thank me,but I refused.Make the sentences into a passage.Mar.9th,Friday Fine Its a fine day today.This afternoon I went to a movie.On the way,I found a case fall down from a mans bike.I picked up the case and shouted to the man,but he rode fast and didnt hear me.Then I stopped a taxi to run after the man.At last,I caught up with him and return the case to him.The man took out some money to thank me,but I refused.写看图作文的步骤：写看图作文的步骤：1.1.审题确定体裁审题确定体裁,人称人称,时态等。时态等。2.2.找出关键词，连词成句。找出关键词，连词成句。3.3.连句成文，注意连接词。连句成文，注意连接词。4.4.反复审核，修改错误。反复审核，修改错误。Conclusion作文评分标准：作文评分标准：1.1.内容完整，语句流畅，句式优美，内容完整，语句流畅，句式优美，无语法错误，书写规范，给无语法错误，书写规范，给14-1514-15分；分；2.2.内容较完整，语句较流畅，基本无内容较完整，语句较流畅，基本无 语法错误语法错误,书写较规范，给书写较规范，给10-1310-13分；分；3.3.内容不完整，语句欠流畅，语法错内容不完整，语句欠流畅，语法错 误较多误较多,书写较规范，给书写较规范，给5-95-9分；分；4.4.只写出个别要点，语法错误较多，只写出个别要点，语法错误较多，书写欠规范，只有个别句子可读或书写欠规范，只有个别句子可读或 不知所云，给不知所云，给0-40-4分。分。In what ways can we makethe passage perfect?I went to see a film this afternoon.One the way to the cinema,I saw a case fall off a mans bike.I was on my way to the cinema this afternoon when I happened to see a case fall off a mans bike.1.把多个句子合并成复合句把多个句子合并成复合句But he rode fast and didnt hear me.But he rode too fast to hear me.I stopped a taxi as quickly as I could in order to run after the man.2.适当选择固定句型和短语适当选择固定句型和短语I stopped a taxi quickly to run after the man.Mar 9th,Friday Fine This afternoon,I went to see a film.On the way,I saw The man thanked me very much and wanted to give me some money.But I refused.It was such an interesting movie that I couldnt wait to enjoy it.Although I missed the movie,I was very happy to help others.文章描叙完整，表达充分文章描叙完整，表达充分句子灵活多样，避免单一句子灵活多样，避免单一文章首尾照应，构思精巧文章首尾照应，构思精巧高分作文三要点：高分作文三要点：
