教育专题：初中英语作文写作.ppt
先锋中学先锋中学沈艳苹沈艳苹初中英语作文要求要求学生在初中英语作文要求要求学生在20分钟分钟内写出内写出60-80词左右的词左右的短文，并且短文，并且质量高、内容全、质量高、内容全、形式正确形式正确。初中英语作文的两种形式初中英语作文的两种形式1 命题作文：根据所给题目，确定中心，选命题作文：根据所给题目，确定中心，选择材料，写出符合题意，内容表达具体、择材料，写出符合题意，内容表达具体、充分的文章。充分的文章。2 半命题作文：命题人限定了作文题目的一半命题作文：命题人限定了作文题目的一部分内容，然后留出一部分内容由作者根部分内容，然后留出一部分内容由作者根据提示，结合对题目的理解补全标题，再据提示，结合对题目的理解补全标题，再进行写作的作文命题形式。进行写作的作文命题形式。主要问题要点不全线索不清抄改连扩抓审书面表达书面表达六步书面表达六步法法一、审题确定基本要素:5W1H when where who why what how注意：观点正确，不偏激。二、抓要点确定主要行为What happened?三、扩展成句形成基本语义单位Who did what?四、连句成文时间 空间 细节连贯 呼应第五步 查错改错格式格式是否有错是否有错拼写拼写有无错误有无错误语言语言是否用错是否用错时态、语态时态、语态错误错误标点标点错误错误人称人称是否用错是否用错第六步 誊写卷面整洁不一定加分，卷面潦草一定要扣分！英语作文写作技巧：英语作文写作技巧：技巧一：中心明确，围绕主题发展技巧一：中心明确，围绕主题发展My Father误：误：My father has various hobbies.He likes doing sports,surfing,listening to music and so on.I like music,too.I think music is very important.It is文章中心文章中心：fathermusic技巧二：技巧二：巧用衔接词巧用衔接词选择选择 or,and,bothand 原因原因 so,because时间时间 at first,then,later,in the end,at last转折转折 on the other hand(另一方面另一方面),but,however总结总结 in a word（总之）（总之）,in all（总之）（总之）递进递进 not onlybut(also),举例举例 and so on，for example技巧三：句式多样化技巧三：句式多样化长短句连用长短句连用简单句简单句/复合句交叉复合句交叉倒装句倒装句感叹句感叹句原句：原句：It was a wonderful day.What a wonderful day it was!原句：原句：I have never seen such a lovely dog.Never have I seen such a lovely dog.强调句强调句原句原句:We heard beautiful songs everywhere.Beautiful songs were heard here and there.技巧四：优美句子和词语运用技巧四：优美句子和词语运用likegoodmanyandbutbe fond ofwonderful,excellent,amazing,a large number ofas well ashoweverIt is importantChanges have taken place sinceIt is good/helpful/harmful toIts said thatWhat a/How+形容词形容词！技巧五：适当运用名言或俗语技巧五：适当运用名言或俗语Time is money.一寸光阴一寸金一寸光阴一寸金Time waits for no man.岁月不待人岁月不待人Knowledge is power.知识就是力量知识就是力量Where there is a will,there is a way.有志者，事竟成有志者，事竟成Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧熟能生巧Its never too old to learn.活到老，学到老活到老，学到老英语作文写作要求：英语作文写作要求：要求二：语句通顺，语法正确要求二：语句通顺，语法正确要求一：主题明确要求一：主题明确 I have a lovely dog which is called Jeff.It has brown hair with long ears.It is so clever that he can even understand a few English words主谓一致主谓一致时态正确运用时态正确运用单词拼写正确单词拼写正确要求三：标点使用正确要求三：标点使用正确汉语汉语英语英语句号句号。.逗号逗号，,省略号省略号顿号顿号、无无感叹号感叹号！!注意：英语中无顿号注意：英语中无顿号 、1.My father has various hobbies.He likes doing sports,surfing,listening to music2.He was late for school,because he missed the bus.3.What a beautiful girl!4.Why was he late?要求四：避免句式单一结构要求四：避免句式单一结构He didnt say anything.He left.He left without a word.We think the story is true.The story is believed to be true.组合句子组合句子变换主语变换主语(主动变被动主动变被动)强调句强调句I lost my watch in that shop.It was in that shop that I lost my watch.英语思维表达法英语思维表达法大雨大雨大病大病大桥大桥 大楼大楼大错大错 大大big a heavy raina serious illnessa long bridgea high rise/large buildinga terrible/serious mistake课堂练习云南省云南省20142014年中考英语作文题目：年中考英语作文题目：A A：A happyA happytimetime B:Let me tell youB:Let me tell you*要求：1.1.请从所给的请从所给的A BA B两个题目中任选其一做大，两个题目中任选其一做大，分值相同。如选分值相同。如选B B题，请把题目补充完整再作答，题，请把题目补充完整再作答，例如：你可以写例如：你可以写“Let me tell you my Let me tell you my dreamdream”,“Let me tell you how to learn Let me tell you how to learn EnglishEnglish”,“Let me tell you I love Let me tell you I love you,momyou,mom”等等。2 注意紧扣主题，意思连贯，语言通顺，书写规范。3 不得使用真实姓名和校名。如需使用名字，请用Mike，Gina等英文名字，校名统一用Guang Ming Middle School。4 词数不少于60。
