【课件】道歉信 公开课课件 2023届高三英语一轮复习写作课.pptx

HappyHappythe language used the key points of its contentthe different-level requirementsscoring principles 评分原则评分原则 先根据先根据和和定档次，再以定档次，再以该该来衡量打分来衡量打分Q Qthe criteria for the top level 评分标准评分标准 第五档(很好);(21-25(21-25分分)：完完全完成全完成了试题规定的任务覆盖所有内容要点 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑完全达到了预期的写作目的第四档(好)：(16-20(16-20分分)完成完成了试题规定的任务虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑达到了预期的写作目的Q QQ QWhats the core in the writing?the writing style:the main tense:the mian person:the structure:Q Q0 0how to examine the topic the practical writingthe simple present tensethe 1st personthe 3-para structurePara1Para1Para2Para2Para3Para33-para structureexpress the intention of the writingexplain the reasons and the ways to solve the problemapologize once again and beg for forgiveness假定你是新华中学的学生李华，你和在上海上学的英假定你是新华中学的学生李华，你和在上海上学的英国朋友国朋友Tom约好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约。约。1.表示歉意；表示歉意；2.解释原因；解释原因；3.另约时间。另约时间。假定你是李华，你的英国笔友假定你是李华，你的英国笔友David下周三将来你所下周三将来你所在的城市旅游，但你有事无法去机场接他。在的城市旅游，但你有事无法去机场接他。1.表示歉意表示歉意；2.说明理由；说明理由；3.安排他人接机。安排他人接机。练练(2016(2016新课标新课标IIIIII卷卷)假定你是李华，与留学生朋友假定你是李华，与留学生朋友BobBob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：封邮件，内容包括：1.1.表示歉意；表示歉意；2.2.说明原因；说明原因；3.3.另约时间。另约时间。注意：注意：1.1.词数词数100100左右；左右；2.2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3 strategiesS1S1basic formatS1S1too many paragraphsS1S1too large word-spacing S1S1013 paragraphs in general 02proper word-spacing 基本格式要牢记基本格式要牢记S2S2precise expressionsS2S2S2S2很抱歉很抱歉如约如约do sth as planned/scheduledas we came to an agreement before keep our promisefulfill our commitmentIm so/indeed very/terribly/awfully/excessively sorry that.S2S201accuracy is the foundation 03phrases first精准选词是助力精准选词是助力02better word,higher scoreS3S3distinctive sentencesS2S2S2S2It so happens that the day when we planned to go to the bookstore is my moms birthday.And I want to make her a surprise,showing my gratitude for.S2S2My sister,an abroad student studying in England,is coming back.Its at the appointed time that I have to pick her up at the airport.Furthermore,its probable that I will spend the whold day helping her do the cleaning.Therefore,Im afraid that I cannot keep our promise and I do hope we can fix another time to go to the bookstore.S S3 3various sentence structures:clauses,it structure,with structure,appositive,emphatic sentence.多变句型增亮点多变句型增亮点samplesDear Bob，Im sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon.I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.Shall we go on Saturday morning?We can set out early so that well have more time to read and select books.If its convenient for you,lets meet at 8:30 outside the school gate.If not,let me know what time suits you best.I should be available any time after school next week.Wish you have a good time this weekend!Yours sincerely,Li HuapolishotherspolishotherswritingandwritingandrewriteyoursrewriteyourstasktaskThanks for Thanks for your listeningyour listeningBye Bye