高考总复习限时规范训练(人教新课标)第三部分写作技能步步高要诀41满分作文登场.pdf

第三部分要诀四(2015 课标 I)假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：1栏目介绍；2稿件内容；3稿件长度：约400 词；4交稿日期：6 月 28 日前。注意：1词数 100 左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头语已为你写好。Dear Peter，Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper._ _ _ _ _ _ Yours，Li Hua 考场作文Dear Peter，Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.There is a part calls the“Foreign Cultures”in the newspaper,which has broadened our horizons greatly.(1)It is so interesting that we all love it very much.I hope you can write something about American festivals and customs.Whats more,you can also tell us something about the life of American high school students.Most of us are much interested for it.(2)When you write,you had better limit your article within about 400 words.If possibly,could you send us your article before June 28?Looking forward to hearing from you.Yours，Li Hua 1错误聚焦：(1)call 和 part 构成被动关系，故将其改为_。(2)“对感兴趣”为固定搭配，应将for 改为 _。(3)句型“If it is possible”可将 it is 省略，故应将possibly 改为 _。【答案】(1)called(2)in(3)possible 2高分靓句：(1)将画线句子(1)改为“so that”的倒装句：_(2)将画线句子(2)改为非谓语动词的形式：_【答案】(1)So interesting is it that we all love it very much.(2)When writing 参考范文Dear Peter，Id_like_to_ask_you_to_write_an_article_for_our_schools_English_newspaper.The“Foreign Cultures”section in our newspaper is very popular among us students.It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States?And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals,and the life of American high school students.You can write anything relevant so long as its interesting and informative.400 words would be fine.Could we have your article before June 28?Im looking forward to hearing from you.Yours，Li Hua(2015 河北唐山一中高考仿真一)假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李华。你校将于6 月 26 日接待来自于美国某中学的学生访问团。你受学校委托，负责安排在唐山的一日活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给该团的领队Smith 先生写一封电子邮件，介绍活动计划并简要说明理由，最后征求对方意见。1上午与我校学生座谈(话题如校园生活、文化差异等)；2中午与我校学生共同进餐(午餐包括饺子、面条等)；3下午与我校学生游览南湖。注意：1词数 100 左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Mr.Smith，I am Li Hua,chairman of the Student Union,from Chenguang High School._ _ _ _ _ Yours sincerely，Li Hua【答案】One possible version:Dear Mr.Smith，I am Li Hua,chairman of the Student Union,from Chenguang High School.You will pay a visit to our school on June 26 and I was appointed to take charge of arranging all the activities on that day.My plan about these activities are as follows.On your arrival,we will show you around our school.Then a discussion will be held,which may cover such topics as school life,cultural differences and so on,aiming to improve mutual understanding.At noon,we will prepare dumplings and noodles as main food in our schools dining hall.In the afternoon,you together with some student representatives are going to visit the Nanhu Park and enjoy the beautiful scenery there.After that,you will end your visit to our school.What do you think of the plan?Im looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely，Li Hua