浙江省2022年中考英语真题分类汇编：书面表达(应用文写作)解析版5826.pdf

浙江省 2022 年中考英语真题分类汇编：书面表达（应用文写作）一、书面表达 1假定你是李平，请阅读以下邮件并回复。词数 80 左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。To:LiP Subject：Exchange Visit!Hi there,Li Ping!My names Jack and Im going to be at your school for the exchange visit next month.Im really excited about it!Well,why am I writing right now?For one thing,I really want to know something about the interesting activities at your school,so could you introduce one of them?Also,I am interested in Chinese culture.So what do you suggest I do after school?Take care and hope to hear from you soon.Jack Dear Jack,Li Ping【答案】One possible version:Dear Jack,Im pleased to know that youre coming for the exchange visit.We have many interesting school activities.Among them,the singing competition is the most popular.It offers a great chance to show our talents and helps us to learn something new.As for Chinese culture,I suggest you visit the Hangzhou National Tea Museum.You can learn about the history of Chinese tea there.Hope this helps.And tell me if there is anything else you need to know.【知识点】应用文写作【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。杰克信中提到：“我很想知道你们学校的一些有趣的活动，你能介绍一下吗？另外，我他对中国文化很感兴趣。那你建议我放学后做什么？”所以，文章要回答杰克的这两个问题，首先，告诉他你们学校的有那些有趣的活动，其次，他对中国文化很感兴趣，你给他一些建议。时态主要以一般现在时为主。写作时要求语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范，要点齐全，内容可适当发挥。范文翻译：至：*主题：交流访问！你好，李平！我叫杰克，下个月我要去你们学校进行交流访问。我真的很兴奋！好吧，我为什么要现在写？一方面，我很想知道你们学校的一些有趣的活动，你能介绍一下吗？另外，我对中国文化很感兴趣。那你建议我放学后做什么？保重，希望很快能收到您的来信。杰克【点评】考查应用文写作。文章紧扣题目提示要点展开叙述，语句通顺完整，表达清楚流畅，单词拼写正确，语法运用准确，上下文连接流畅，逻辑合理，符合英语的表达习惯。应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，例如：As for Chinese culture,I suggest you visit the Hangzhou National Tea Museum.至于中国文化，我建议你参观杭州国家茶叶博物馆。I suggest+宾语从句。又如：And tell me if there is anything else you need to know.告诉我你还有什么需要知道的。if 引导的条件状语从句。词汇、短语、句型及语法都运用的很恰当，具有较强的语言表达能力。达到了预期的写作目的。2假设你是刘军，在上周末的乡村旅游中，你发现了一些游客的不文明行为。请根据下表信息给某英文报VOICE 栏目的编辑写一封邮件，反映这些问题并提出建议。Uncivilized behaviors Suggestions threw rubbish everywhere picked flowers climbed trees put rubbish into bins 注意：1）邮件内容必须包括上表所有信息，可适当增加细节；2）你的建议至少两条；3）词数：80100；4）邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：不文明行为 uncivilized behavior；编辑 editor Dear editor,I was shocked to see some uncivilized behaviors when I took a trip to a village last weekend.Yours sincerely,Liu Jun【答案】One possible version Dear editor,I was shocked to see some uncivilized behaviors when I took a trip to a village last weekend.Some visitors threw rubbish everywhere and left plastic bags flying around.Some picked flowers without permission to take photos so that they could show off online.And some climbed trees for fun,which might result in serious accidents.I think it wrong to enjoy oneself at the cost of others.Visitors are supposed to protect the environment,like putting rubbish into proper bins.And they should be careful not to cause trouble to the locals and keep away from danger.In this way,a greener,cleaner and more civilized new village will be there for us all to enjoy.Yours sincerely Liu Jun【知识点】应用文写作；提纲作文【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲作文，请你给某英文报 VOICE 栏目的编辑写一封邮件，反映一些游客的不文明行为，并提出你的建议。不文明行为包括随地乱扔垃圾，摘花，爬树。建议将垃圾放入垃圾箱。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。要注意前后句的连接，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。【点评】考查提纲作文。文章主要写了一些游客的不文明行为并对此提出了自己的建议，要点全部都写出了，并且增加了一些内容使文章更通顺，更符合要求。文中使用很多短语，让文章更加出彩，例如：I think it wrong to enjoy oneself at the cost of others.我认为以牺牲他人为代价来享受自己是错误的。I think+宾语从句，表示我认为。又如：And they should be careful not to cause trouble to the locals and keep away from danger.他们应该小心，不要给当地人带来麻烦，远离危险。should+动词原形，表示应该。能够根据提示进行书面表达，清楚连贯地表达了自己的思想，完成写作了任务。3为弘扬中华民族“劳动最光荣”的传统美德，这学期你校组织了一系列劳动实践活动(a series of labour activities)，假如你是李华，请根据表格中的信息并结合自身经历，写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿。注意：1）短文必须包括表格中的所有要点，并适当发挥；2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;3）词数 80-100；标题已给出，不计入总词数。Time Things I learned My feelings March grow vegetables and plant trees April repair things like electric fans May Lets Enjoy Working【答案】Lets enjoy working!This term,I took part in a series of labor activities in our school.I was happy that I learned a lot.In March,I learned to grow vegetables and plant trees on our school farm.In April,I learned to repair things like electric fans and bicycles with the help of our teachers.In May,I learned to do much housework,such as making the bed,sweeping the floor and folding clothes.I think the labour activities are not only educational but also useful.Im sure the more life skills I have,the more independent I will be.【知识点】应用文写作【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用文写作，注意人称是第一人称，时态是一般过去时、一般将来时和一般现在时，首先介绍自己参加了各种各样的活动；然后介绍三月、四月和五月分别参加的活动；最后总结。注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。【点评】作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：take part in；learn to do；with the help of；make the bed；not only.but also 等。比较级和宾语从句的运用为文章增色不少，如 I think the labour activities are not only educational but also useful.Im sure the more life skills I have,the more independent I will be.等。连词 not only.but also.；and 的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。4假如你是李明，你的美国朋友 David 向你了解暑假社会实践活动的计划，请结合下表内容写一封邮件向他介绍你的计划。Social Practice Plan What to do Why to do so volunteer to do.make a survey about.have a graduation trip to.be helpful.learn more about.open ones eyes.注意:1）文中必须包含至少两项活动的内容要点，可适当发挥；2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；3）词数：80 100；邮件的开头与结尾已给出，不计人总词数。Dear David,Glad to share my social practice plan with you.Looking forward to your reply.1160601 Yours,Li Ming【答案】A possible version:Dear David，Glad to share my social practice plan with you.As it will be the last summer holiday in junior school,some classmates and I plan:to go on a graduation trip to Hangzhou,the capital city of Zhejiang.By enjoying the beautiful scenery and colorful cultures there,we can open our eyes and bring home unforgettable memories.After the trip,I will volunteer to help in our city library,sorting out books,guiding readers to the right bookshelves,and of course,communicating with different people.Im sure this experience can not only enrich my life but help me understand the true meaning of learning by doing.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Ming【知识点】应用文写作【解析】【分析】这篇作文要求以李明的身份，根据表格提示内容，给美国朋友大卫写信介绍你的暑期社会实践活动的计划。书信的开头和结尾已经给出，只需要补充中间部分。时态以一般将来时为主。人称以第一人称为主。写作时要注意根据表格的计划谈谈具体做什么和为什么做。文章的内容要充实，表达要符合英语的习惯。要注意上下文的连贯，条例清晰。注意单词拼写的正确性，语法运用的准确性。【点评】考查应用文写作。范文采用总分总三段式来写的。开头和结尾是已经给出的。第二段写出了具体的活动计划，并谈论了自己的看法。文章内容完整、充实，层次清晰，主次分明，文意连贯，表达流畅。高分亮点：短语：go on a trip，open ones eyes,volunteer to do sth，communicate with，not onlybut also 等；句型：Im sure this experience can not only enrich my life but help me understand the true meaning of learning by doing.（含有宾语从句的主从复合句）。