定语从句与写作公开课.ppt

关于定语从句与写作公开课现在学习的是第1页，共32页Lead-inEnjoy the song-the one you loveI know you need a friendSomeone you can talk toWho will understand what youre going throughWhen it comes to loveTheres no easy answerOnly you can say what youre gonna doI heard you on the phoneYou took his numberSaid you werent alone,but youd call him soonIsnt he the guyThe guy who left you cryingIsnt he the one who made you blueWhen you remember those nights in his armsYou know youve gotta make up your mindAre you gonna stay with the one who loves youOr are you going back to the one you loveI know you need a friendSomeone you can talk toWho will understand what youre going throughWhen it comes to loveTheres no easy answerOnly you can say what youre gonna doI heard you on the phoneYou took his numberSaid you werent alone,but youd call him soonIsnt he the guyThe guy who left you cryingIsnt he the one who made you blueWhen you remember those nights in his armsYou know youve gotta make up your mindAre you gonna stay with the one who loves youOr are you going back to the one you love现在学习的是第2页，共32页 Someones gonna cry when they learn theyve lost youSomeones gonna thank the stars above现在学习的是第3页，共32页Practice of the Attributive clause1.Aplaneisamachine_canfly.2.Thecar_myuncleboughtlastweekwasstolen.3.Theman_iswalkingontheplaygroundismyoldfriend.4.Thewoman_yousawintheparkisourEnglishteacher.which/that(which/that)who/that(who/that)现在学习的是第4页，共32页 5.Isawawoman_bagwasstolen.6.Thereason_hewaslatewasthathegotuplate.7.Istillremembertheday_IfirstcametoBeijing.8.Itisanimportantday_Iwillneverforget.9.Thepark_theypaidavisittoisbeautiful.whosewhywhenWhich/thatWhich/that现在学习的是第5页，共32页定语从句在写作中的应用定语从句在写作中的应用现在学习的是第6页，共32页Part1:高考满分作文中的定语从句欣赏：高考满分作文中的定语从句欣赏：1.2013年全国高考新课标年全国高考新课标2.你知道，我的叔叔李明要去你知道，我的叔叔李明要去你居住的你居住的城市参加一个会议。城市参加一个会议。3.You know,my uncle Li Ming is going to the city where you live to attend an international meeting.4.我让叔叔带去我让叔叔带去你想要的你想要的中国画。中国画。5.Ive asked my uncle to bring you the Chinese painting you have asked for before.现在学习的是第7页，共32页2.2013 年广东高考年广东高考那些那些做普通简单工作的做普通简单工作的人也在推动着社会的发展。人也在推动着社会的发展。Those who do simple and ordinary jobs are also promoting the development of the society.正如我们都知道的那样，正如我们都知道的那样，扫大街是最为困难的工作之一。扫大街是最为困难的工作之一。As we all know,cleaning streets is one of the hardest work.现在学习的是第8页，共32页Part 2:写作中定语从句的主要作用写作中定语从句的主要作用1.增加词数增加词数2.可以连接两个包含同一事物的句子，可以连接两个包含同一事物的句子，避免单词的避免单词的重复和句式单一。重复和句式单一。3.补充细节，以丰富文章内容。补充细节，以丰富文章内容。现在学习的是第9页，共32页Part 3:如何写出定语从句如何写出定语从句1.题干中出现两句涉及同一事物的简单句。题干中出现两句涉及同一事物的简单句。2.Solution:1找出这两个简单句中都出现了的同一个事物。找出这两个简单句中都出现了的同一个事物。3.2将其中一个简单句改成从句，去修饰另外将其中一个简单句改成从句，去修饰另外4.一个句子中那个相同的事物（注意关系词的选用）一个句子中那个相同的事物（注意关系词的选用）5.For example:6.我们班是一个我们班是一个大家庭。大家庭。7.这个大家庭这个大家庭包括包括17个男生和个男生和7个女生。个女生。8.现在学习的是第10页，共32页Our class is a big family.The family consists of 17 boys and 7 girls.Our class is a big family,which consists of 17 boys and 7 girls.现在学习的是第11页，共32页Practice:把下面各把下面各题题中的句子合并中的句子合并为为一个含有定一个含有定语语从句的主从复合句从句的主从复合句 1a.Seeing these changes,we cannot forget them.b.They gave us unselfish help when we were in trouble._答案：答案：Seeing these changes,we cannot forget those who gave us unselfish help when we were in trouble.现在学习的是第12页，共32页2a.I feel greatly honored to host the contest.b.The contest is sponsored by the Students Union._答案：答案：I feel greatly honored to host the contest,which is sponsored by the Students Union.现在学习的是第13页，共32页3a.They sent the elderly some fruits,cleaned the rooms and had a good chat with them.b.The elderly always feel lonely._答案：答案：They sent the elderly who always feel lonely some fruits,cleaned the rooms and had a good chat with them.现在学习的是第14页，共32页4a.The library is not far from here.b.The writer often does some reading there._答案：答案：The library where the writer often does some reading is not far from here.现在学习的是第15页，共32页5a.Ive always longed for the days.b.I will be able to be independent then._答案：答案：Ive always longed for the days when I will be able to be independent.现在学习的是第16页，共32页Practice:1.我最好的朋友是李明，他的外号叫河马。我最好的朋友是李明，他的外号叫河马。2.我不喜欢他的外号，原因是它深深地伤害了他。我不喜欢他的外号，原因是它深深地伤害了他。3.他居住在开封，在这里人们可以游览很多美丽的景点。他居住在开封，在这里人们可以游览很多美丽的景点。4.我们过去常常在一起上美术课，我不会忘记那段日子。我们过去常常在一起上美术课，我不会忘记那段日子。现在学习的是第17页，共32页我最好的朋友是李明，他的外号叫河马。我最好的朋友是李明，他的外号叫河马。My best friend is Li Ming.His nickname is hippo.My best friend is Li Ming,whose nickname is hippo.现在学习的是第18页，共32页I dont like his nickname.The reason is that it deeply hurts him.The reason why I dont like his nickname is that it deeply hurts him.我不喜欢他的外号，原因是它深深地伤害了他。我不喜欢他的外号，原因是它深深地伤害了他。现在学习的是第19页，共32页她居住在开封，在这里人们可以游览很多美丽的景点。她居住在开封，在这里人们可以游览很多美丽的景点。He lives in Kai Feng.People can visit lots of scenic spots here.He lives in Kai Feng,where people can visit lots of scenic spots.(注意此处不再有注意此处不再有here)现在学习的是第20页，共32页我们过去常常在一起上美术课，我不会忘记那段日子。我们过去常常在一起上美术课，我不会忘记那段日子。We used to attend painting class together.I will never forget the days.I will never forget the days when we used to attend painting class together.现在学习的是第21页，共32页2.题干中只有一个孤立的简单句题干中只有一个孤立的简单句Solution:找到这个简单句中的中心词，用定语从句将其丰富。找到这个简单句中的中心词，用定语从句将其丰富。For example:开封是一个历史名城。开封是一个历史名城。Kai Feng is a famous historic city.Kai Feng is a famous historic city,which has a long history of more than 2700 years and large numbers of historic spots,such as the Iron Pagoda,Longting Park and so on.有多久的历史？因何出名？有多久的历史？因何出名？现在学习的是第22页，共32页Practice:1.即将到来的端午节是中国的传统节日。即将到来的端午节是中国的传统节日。2.李明是一个热心肠的人。李明是一个热心肠的人。The upcoming Dragon Boat Festival is a Chinese traditional festival.The upcoming Dragon Boat Festival is a Chinese traditional festival,which is celebrated to honor our national hero,Qu Yuan.(节日的目的节日的目的)现在学习的是第23页，共32页李明是一个热心肠的人。李明是一个热心肠的人。Li Ming is a warm-hearted man.Li Ming is a warm-hearted man,who always lends a hand to others.(具体化具体化)现在学习的是第24页，共32页直击高考直击高考（2013年高考山东卷）年高考山东卷）描述你的假期打算描述你的假期打算（包括兼职，旅游，志愿者等）（包括兼职，旅游，志愿者等）（用定语从句增添做这些事情的原因）（用定语从句增添做这些事情的原因）I would like to do a part-time job,which will help me earn money and accumulate working experience.Traveling is one of my choices,which will enrich my life and broaden my horizen.I would like to do voluntary work,which will make a great contribution to the society.Traveling is one of my choices,I would like to do a part-time job,Traveling is one of my choices,I would like to do a part-time job,Traveling is one of my choices,现在学习的是第25页，共32页Translate the following English proverbs into Chinese and then pick out the attributive clauses.1.God help those who help themselves.2.2.He who laughs last laughs best.3.3.He who doesnt reach the Great Wall is not a true man.4.He who is content(满足满足)is always happy.现在学习的是第26页，共32页Challenge yourself!Challenge yourself!现在学习的是第27页，共32页根据下列句子，完成短文。根据下列句子，完成短文。众所周知，北京已经成功地举办了众所周知，北京已经成功地举办了2008年奥运会。通过本年奥运会。通过本届奥运会，中国完美地向世界展现了自己。英语作为一种国际语届奥运会，中国完美地向世界展现了自己。英语作为一种国际语言，在和外国人的交流中起着重要作用。本届奥运会上友好的志言，在和外国人的交流中起着重要作用。本届奥运会上友好的志愿者们很好地利用了这个语言工具为各国运动员及客人服务，给愿者们很好地利用了这个语言工具为各国运动员及客人服务，给他们留下了深刻印象。我渴望有一天能做一名传播中国灿烂文化他们留下了深刻印象。我渴望有一天能做一名传播中国灿烂文化的志愿者，所以我现在应该努力学好英语。只有这样，才能为国的志愿者，所以我现在应该努力学好英语。只有这样，才能为国家贡献自己的力量。家贡献自己的力量。注意：要使用定语从句注意：要使用定语从句.play apart/role in,seize the opportunity,make contributions to现在学习的是第28页，共32页 As is known to us all,Beijing has successfully hosted the 2008 Olympic Games.Through the Olympics,China perfectly showed itself to the whole world.English,which is an international language,plays an important part in communicating with foreigners.Friendly volunteers who made full use of the tool of English as serving guests and athletes from all over the world during the Olympics,left deep impression on them.I desire to be a volunteer who is a carrier for our splendid culture some day.So now I should try my best to learn English well,by which I can make my contributions to my country.现在学习的是第29页，共32页写作训练LIMING是我们班的同学。今年17岁。他个子不高留着短发。他父母都是老师，在油田二中工作。他家离学校不远。他学习很努力所以老师和学生们都很喜欢他。他经常帮助家里很穷的学生。大家都很尊敬他。上大学是他的理想之一。现在学习的是第30页，共32页Homework:1.Polish the article we have written in the class.2.Review the attributive clause.2.Recite the new words.现在学习的是第31页，共32页感感谢谢大大家家观观看看现在学习的是第32页，共32页