我理想的高三---英语写作.ppt

Highlights of My Senior YearWriting I.Learning aims:（学习目标）（学习目标）1)To know how to form a good passage.2)To use proper sentence structures and advanced words when writing a composition.假设你是新华中学高二假设你是新华中学高二3 3班学生李华。班学生李华。请你以请你以“My Dreaming Senior Year(My Dreaming Senior Year(理想理想高三高三)”为题写一篇为题写一篇120120150150词的英语短文词的英语短文参加比赛。内容要点如下：参加比赛。内容要点如下：1.1.简单做自简单做自我介绍。我介绍。2.2.高三学习时间设计。高三学习时间设计。3.3.业余业余活动的设想等。活动的设想等。一、审题一、审题 开放式作文主要是给出某一种情况开放式作文主要是给出某一种情况,然后要求学生根据这种情况进行思维和联然后要求学生根据这种情况进行思维和联想想,写出合理的下文写出合理的下文.一定要弄清情况和要一定要弄清情况和要求求,然后抓住关键词句然后抓住关键词句,进行记叙进行记叙,解释解释,说说明明,议论等议论等.与一般与一般“书面表达书面表达”题型相比题型相比,难度更大难度更大,要求也更高要求也更高.这种作文将是高考这种作文将是高考作文测试的主要方向作文测试的主要方向.二、谋篇布局二、谋篇布局What should we write about?uself-Introductionugeneral introduction about the senior year uabout study uafter class activitiesuconclusion 三、遣词构句三、遣词构句1.Who are you?2.Which class and school do you come from?3.Will you be busier or more relaxed?Why?4.Will your study be different from now?How?5.Do you want to be kept too busy all day long,even at the weekends and on holidays?6.Which activities will you take part in and whats the benefit of these activities?7.What kind of senior life will you live?Can you get along well with your study and life?4.Time is limited so Ill study harder and more effectively.Ill make a most scientific and proper schedules for my study.1.Im Li Hua.2.I am a student from Class 3 Grade 2,Xinhua Senior High School.3.Ill be busier next term.Because I will be preparing for the coming entrance examinations.(同位语结构同位语结构)(现在分词作伴随状语现在分词作伴随状语)(不定式作目的状语不定式作目的状语)1.2.I am Li Hua,a student from Xinhua Senior High School.3.Ill be busier next term,preparing for the coming college entrance examinations.4.Time is limited and Ill make a most scientific and proper schedules to study harder and more effectively.7.I want to live a busy but interesting life.I can get along well with my study and my life in the coming year.5.I dont want to be kept too busy with my study all day long.We need some free time to relax our mind.We can relax at the weekends and on holidays.6.I want to take part in some sports and amusing clubs held by our class or school.They can help us to keep healthy and active.（用强调部分信息的副词）（用强调部分信息的副词）（用定语从句使语句更紧凑）（用定语从句使语句更紧凑）(用现在分词作伴随状语）用现在分词作伴随状语）5.I dont want to be kept too busy with my study all day long.We need some free time to relax our mind,especially at the weekends and on holidays.6.I want to take part in some sports and amusing clubs held by our class or school,which can help us to keep healthy and active.7.I want to live a busy but interesting life getting along well with study and life in the coming year.Ill be busier next term,preparing for the coming college entrance examinations._,time is limited and Ill make a most scientific and proper schedules to study more hard and more effectively.Additionally,In addition,Besides,And moreover,Furthermore,Whats more(表递进关系）表递进关系）_,I dont want to be kept too busy with my study all day long.Just as the proverb says:“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”We need some free time to relax our mind,especially at the weekends and on holidays.At the same time,Even though,However,Nevertheless,To be honest,Otherwise,（表转折关系）（表转折关系）只工作不玩耍聪只工作不玩耍聪明的孩子也变傻明的孩子也变傻._,I want to live a busy but interesting life,getting along well with my study and my life in the coming year.All in all,Briefly,In conclusion,In summary,To sum up,On the whole,In a word,In sum,To summarize,To conclude（表总结）（表总结）四四.有效使用连接词，过渡自然，连贯通顺，使有效使用连接词，过渡自然，连贯通顺，使文章结构文章结构紧凑。紧凑。二二.避免避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句句、强调、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等句、主从复合句、分词状语等.一一.改变改变句子的开头方式句子的开头方式三三.注意注意使用高级词汇代替一些单词，以增加文采。使用高级词汇代替一些单词，以增加文采。I am Li Hua,a student from Xinhua Senior High School.Next term,Ill be busier with my study,preparing for the coming college entrance examinations.Besides,time is limited and Ill make a most scientific and proper schedules to study harder and more effectively.To be honest,I dont want to be kept too busy with my study all day long.Just as the proverb says,“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”So we need some free time to relax our mind,especially at the weekends and on holidays.Also,I want to take part in some sports and amusing clubs held by our class or school,which can help us to keep healthy and active.All in all,I want to live a busy but interesting life,getting along well with study and life in the coming year.你校正在举办一次英语征文活动，请你以你校正在举办一次英语征文活动，请你以“My Ideal School Life(我理想的高中生活我理想的高中生活)”为题写为题写一篇短文，短文内容包括：一篇短文，短文内容包括：1.你的个人信息：姓名（李华）年龄、所在班级、你的个人信息：姓名（李华）年龄、所在班级、你最喜欢的科目你最喜欢的科目.2.学校规模大还是小学校规模大还是小/课程安排课程安排/假期长短假期长短/课外活动及其原因。课外活动及其原因。3.学校应既重视智能的发展又重视社会技能的发展学校应既重视智能的发展又重视社会技能的发展.注意：注意：1.可适当增加细节，用恰当的联系词使行文连贯；可适当增加细节，用恰当的联系词使行文连贯；2.词数：词数：120左右。左右。preferto/scientific and proper schedule/after-school clubs/put importance on/intellectual skills/social skillsMy ideal senior high school life My name is Li Hua,a 17-year-old student from Class7,Grade 2 of No.8 senior high school.I like maths,physics,chemistry and English best.I prefer a big school to a small one with a beautiful garden full of flowers and trees.In addition,we have the most scientific and proper schedules for our study,which can help us to study more effectively.As far as Im concerned,the vacation should be about a month.Whats more,I like competitive sports,so I think my ideal school should have after-school clubs such as Basketball Club,Debating Club,Running Club and so on.In this way I can not only build my bodies but also make friends.In my view,a school should put importance on both the development of intellectual skills and the development of social skills as every student will make a living by themselves in the future.1.我叫王丹，一个在乡村中学读书的我叫王丹，一个在乡村中学读书的18岁的学岁的学生。生。（同位语）（同位语）2.2.我昨晚一直熬夜到我昨晚一直熬夜到12点，准备学校组织的点，准备学校组织的关于环境保护的演讲比赛。关于环境保护的演讲比赛。3.（分词做伴随状语）（分词做伴随状语）4.3.我们应和同学们处好关系，特别是那些从我们应和同学们处好关系，特别是那些从地震灾区地震灾区(earthquake-hit areas)来我们班的来我们班的同学。同学。（especially)5.4.完成作业后，你可以到户外做些运动，这完成作业后，你可以到户外做些运动，这样有利于保持健康。样有利于保持健康。（定语从句）（定语从句）1.I am Wang Dan,an 18-year-old student who is studying at a middle school in the countryside.2.I stayed up till 12 oclock last night,preparing for the speech contest about environmental protection.3.We should get along well with our classmates,especially those who are from the earthquake-hit areas.4.After finishing your homework,you can do some exercises outdoors,which is of great help for you to keep healthy.