考研英语作文：疯狂背诵30篇（06）.docx
考研英语作文：疯狂背诵30篇（06）Directions 6Study the following pictures carefully and write an essay in which you should:1. describe the two pictures,2. interpret their meaning, and3. point out the consequences for this phenomenon.You should write 160200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.审题：在写作中，审题这个环节是特别重要的。在图画作文中，我们不仅要细致谛视图画，而且还应将英文的提纲看清晰。这篇文章配了双图，双图多是表示对比关系，这里是凸显时间的先后。提纲包括三个部分：描写图画、阐释含义和指出后果，这就确定了我们文章的结构走向。Sample:Two pictures above describe a story which we would never wish to encounter. In the first one, a large crowd gathered around a man lying on the ground. One person said, “He seems to be drunk.” Another whispered, “His head and hands seem to be bleeding.” In the second picture, a policeman is asking those who were present, “Why didn’t send him to hospital?” The first one said, “I was hurrying to work.” The second one said, “I was hurrying to school.”It is quite obvious that the drawer wishes to draw our attention to this most unfavorable social phenomenon. Many people are used to finding all kinds of excuses to shirk their responsibilities of helping those who are in need of help. In their eyes, their own daily businesses are always more important than those of the strangers, even their lives.This phenomenon will bring a series of harmful consequences. First, when people refuse to take care of the strangers, the danger of accidents will be much higher, because you have only a small group of people to rely on whenever emergency arises. Everyone may come across accidents from time to time, and mutual help will prevent most of them from being destructive. Second, the possibility of attaining a happy life will be much smaller. If everyone only takes his own interests into consideration in face of big events, the society will be full of selfish people. The social cost of achieving success will remain high before cooperation becomes a habit.If any one of us wants to enjoy a happy and secure life, we have to be prepared to extend our helping hands to others including strangers, for helping others is equal to helping ourselves.点评：这篇文章最终写成了四段，结构特别清楚。第一段分别描写了两副图画，语言简洁流畅。留意这一段不宜过长。其次段是测度作者的意图，共三句话，第一句是一个经典句型：It is quite obvious that the drawer wishes to draw our attention to. 这句话直指图画所揭示的社会现象，后面两句来详细说明：先说很多人想方设法找理由以躲避帮助他人；然后说明缘由，他们认为……留意段中句子之间的逻辑关系，这是特别重要的。第三段写了该现象引起的有害的后果，该段的首句是个经典的模板句，后分两点来说明。第一点说明当人们不情愿帮助他人时，事故所造成的危急就会大得多，因为那样的话每个人能依靠的人（即亲人和挚友）是特别有限的。这一点的其次句话是个难句，呈现了很强的句子内部的逻辑，希望大家专心学习。这句话的意思是：每个人都会遇到事故，而相互帮助可以避开大部分的事故造成毁灭性的后果。到这里，我们可以看出，思想是由语言表达的，要想深刻地表达思想，肯定要多仿照、多操练。其次点是从更广袤的角度去考虑问题，说明获得华蜜生活的可能性减小了。社会充溢了自私的人们，获得胜利的社会成本陡增。末段是结语——假如我们想要享受华蜜的生活，我们应向他人（包括生疏人）伸出援手。其次段的其次句中的shirk ones responsibility表示“躲避责任”。第三段其次句的emergency表示“紧急状况”。第三句的destructive表示“造成重大损害的”。第五句的in face of表示“面临”。最终一句的cooperation becomes a habit表示“合作成为一种习惯”。心得：1文章的结构层次肯定要清晰，这是充分理解提纲与图画构成语境的结果。2学习写作主从复合句，充分理解句子内部的逻辑关系。通过本文，重点学习条件状语从句。典型的条件状语从句：If everyone only takes his own interests into consideration in face of big events, the society will be full of selfish people.嵌套缘由状语从句的条件状语从句：If any one of us wants to enjoy a happy and secure life, we have to be prepared to extend our helping hands to others including strangers, for helping others is equal to helping ourselves.本文来源：网络收集与整理，如有侵权，请联系作者删除，谢谢！第5页 共5页第 5 页 共 5 页第 5 页 共 5 页第 5 页 共 5 页第 5 页 共 5 页第 5 页 共 5 页第 5 页 共 5 页第 5 页 共 5 页第 5 页 共 5 页第 5 页 共 5 页第 5 页 共 5 页
