【课件】河南省郑州市2022-2023学年高二下期期中十校联考英语试卷分析课件.pptx

01阅读理解分析A篇篇-应用文【德国的用文【德国的Almased有机代餐粉有机代餐粉/蛋白粉】蛋白粉】Structure of the passage TitlePartI:Characteristics of AlmasedPartII:Ingredients/materials of AlmasedPartIII:Many different ways of preparing/serving Almased212223做做题技巧：技巧：同同义词(性性/义)转换重点重点词汇：exceptional:杰出的；极好的杰出的；极好的罕罕见的；例外的的；例外的nutrition 营养养nutritious 营养的养的nutrient n.营养物养物质artificial flavourings,fillers or sweeteners人工人工调味味剂，添加，添加剂和甜料和甜料resistance to.抵抗常抵抗常见疾病疾病1.做做题技巧：技巧：同同义词(性性/义)转换2.标题也暗示答案也暗示答案重点重点词汇：flavour:n.味道味道 v.给.调味味suit your personal taste满足你的个人品味足你的个人品味be fitted into 使适合；使使适合；使适适应；使符合；使符合B篇篇-说明文【明文【Volunteer travel 志愿旅行】志愿旅行】Structure of the passagePara1:Introduction to the topicPara2-4:The definition/forms/origin of volunteer travelPara5:A new trend of volunteer tripsPara6:The reasons for trying volunteer trips 24262527=introduce the topic lead up toIf someone leads up to a particular subject,they gradually guide a conversation to a point where they can introduce it.(把把谈话)引向（某个引向（某个话题）也可以从也可以从Para5 Line5找到答案找到答案C篇篇-说明文【北大西洋露脊明文【北大西洋露脊鲸重回重回濒危物种名危物种名单】Structure of the passagePara1:The northern right whale was removed from the Top 10 Endangered Species List.Para2:The tide of good news seems to have been opposite due to global climate change.Para3:The reasons for the extinction of the whale.3129/3028做做题技巧：技巧：同同义词(性性/义)转换on the rise 在在增加，在上增加，在上涨重点重点词汇：reverse:change to opposite彻底底转变；颠倒倒kill n.猎物物reproduction n.繁殖；复制繁殖；复制take.seriously 认真真对待；待；重重视D篇篇-【Leap days and leap years】Structure of the passagePara1:The leap dayFebuary 29 and the leap year.Para2-5:The influences of leap day in our daily life,such as December 31/two American expressions/marrigae.Para6:Conclusion32/33/343532333435总结全文全文七七选五五【How to replace unclean habits and form a clean diet】Structure of the passagePara1:the benefits of eating healthilyPara2-5:The ways to replace unclean habits in order to form a clean dietFEADC1.根据提示根据提示词(信息信息)2.解解释概念概念3.同同义词转换4.代代词指代指代02完形填空分析完形填空：完形填空：夹叙叙夹议 作者通作者通过创办牙科牙科诊所的事情告所的事情告诉我我们：生活没有捷径生活没有捷径。Structure of the passagePara1-2:创办牙科牙科诊所花了很多所花了很多时间和金和金钱。Para3-5:窘境窘境时的柳暗花明。【的柳暗花明。【There are no shortcuts.】Para6:个人的自我反思和个人的自我反思和总结。BACBAturn turn.around(事情事情)好好转A商商业机构，企机构，企业，公司，公司D最初地最初地C重点重点词汇：bank account银行行账户a money pit钱坑；无底洞坑；无底洞hit me over the head猛然警猛然警觉；醍；醍醐灌醐灌顶a wake-up call警警钟B靠靠边停停车瞥瞥见CADBBB项是概括表达，包括是概括表达，包括A/C/DDDCADgain respect for.因因.获得尊重得尊重需要；需要；要求要求Summary of the close:1.夹叙叙夹议-难在在议 文章文章鸡汤和灵魂和灵魂/主主题句句2.题目目归类分析分析(1)上下文推断上下文推断 41，42，44，53，58(2)直接直接阅读选择 43，45，50，57(3)固定搭配固定搭配 46，48，52，60(4)词义辨析辨析 47，49，51，54，55，56，5903语法填空分析语法填空分析 When she was a child,Yue-Sai Kan was told by her father that she should always aim to be the first to walk on the moon 61_ no one remembers the second.What her father said has been a driving 62 _ (inspire)over the years,inspiring her to become an Emmy-winning television producer,bestselling author and successful entrepreneur(创 业者).because/since/as inspiration61.61.没能把握上下句没能把握上下句间的逻辑关系，误填间的逻辑关系，误填了了b but,and,on,that;还有个别学生填了Because;62.单词记忆不准确，单词记忆不准确，想当然写成想当然写成inspirement,inspirition;句子成分糊句子成分糊里糊涂，误填成分词：里糊涂，误填成分词：inspired,inspiring语法填空分析 Her new book Be a Pioneer,which is the tenth she has penned and her first Chinese-language autobiography,63_ (release)after three years in the making.It was also inspired in part by her fathers words.“64 _ (actual),I have been asked many times to write an autobiography,but I always felt that it was not the right time for me to sit down and give thanks for my life,and also I did not think my life was so exciting anyway,says Kan.63.误填了时态：误填了时态：would be released,will be released/had released;句子结构分句子结构分析错误，误填了分词析错误，误填了分词released,releasing，个别个别 学生填了学生填了to release.64.没有大写首字母，没有大写首字母，误写成：误写成：actually；个个别学生漏字母：别学生漏字母：actullywas releasedActually语法填空分析However,her publisher thought otherwise,65_ (tell)her that,since she lived through interesting times in China as both a witness and a participant,she should write the book as a historical record,“All the things I have done-my successes and my failures-can be a good example for young people 66_ particular.I think thats the main reason why I wrote the book,”says Kan.65.没能分析句子成分，没能分析句子成分，误填了时态：误填了时态：has told;不会区别非谓语不会区别非谓语动词，误填了动词，误填了told 或或者者to telltelling66.基本词组掌握不牢，基本词组掌握不牢，误填了其它介词，如误填了其它介词，如to.in语法填空分析67_ (help)with reconstructing her story,Kan asked friends and colleagues to write down their memories of her from 68_ (early)times.So besides featuring Kans own words,the new book is also filled with 69_ of her friends,which gave Kan new insight into herself.In the book,Kan included a lot of pictures 70 _ (take)from her early life.By scanning a QR code,readers are also able to see video clips from the period.67.动词不定式掌握不动词不定式掌握不牢，误填了牢，误填了helping 或或者者helpful。68.单词拼写错误：单词拼写错误：ealier,eariler;个别学个别学生填了最高级生填了最高级earliest69.不知道该填啥，错不知道该填啥，错误百出：误百出：what,that,one,ones,some,allTo helpearlier70.被动语态和过去分词被动语态和过去分词分不清，误填时态分不清，误填时态：were taken,are taken;基本功不扎实：基本功不扎实：taked,took,部分学生填部分学生填taking.thosetaken04短文改错分析短文改错考察内容考察内容命题重点命题重点词词法法名词名词单数与复数单数与复数,可数与不可数，所有格可数与不可数，所有格冠词冠词不定冠词，定冠词与零冠词不定冠词，定冠词与零冠词代词代词主格与宾格，人称与物主，人称与反身，不定代词，关系代词主格与宾格，人称与物主，人称与反身，不定代词，关系代词介词介词介词用法，介词与其他词性的搭配介词用法，介词与其他词性的搭配形容词和副词形容词和副词原级，比较级，最高级原级，比较级，最高级动词动词时态，语态，非谓语动词，情态动词，虚拟语气时态，语态，非谓语动词，情态动词，虚拟语气词性误词性误 用用形容词与副词，形容词与名词，名词与动词形容词与副词，形容词与名词，名词与动词 句法句法连词（并列连词，从属连词），主谓一致，连词（并列连词，从属连词），主谓一致，there be句型，特句型，特殊句式殊句式 行文逻辑行文逻辑时态一致，指代一致，逻辑一致时态一致，指代一致，逻辑一致高考短文改高考短文改错命命题特征及命特征及命题趋势（考察角度）（考察角度）短文改错United Nations countries have agreed to create an agreement that deals with plastic pollution in the worlds oceans,rivers and land.The UN Environment Assembly voted at its meeting in Kenyas capital Nairobi for a resolution“to end plastic pollution.”Plans were presented by Peru,Rwanda,India and Japan were used as the basis for a global plan to prevent and reduce plastic pollution.The agreement would cover the production,design and removal of plastics.“It is not easy to get such a major environment deal,”said Inger Andersen,who is an executive director of the UN Environment Program.A recent study reports that 11 million metric tons of plastic end up in the oceans every year.导语导语新新闻的主的主要内要内容容评论及及新新闻背背景景链接接短文改错分析 理科平均分理科平均分1.741.74，文，文科科1.231.23。图中圈出的各图中圈出的各题得分率较低，尤其题得分率较低，尤其是是7272，7373，7676，8080。71.71.主谓一致主谓一致72.72.名词所有格名词所有格73.73.名词单复数名词单复数74.74.非谓语非谓语/定语从句定语从句76.76.词性转换：动词变词性转换：动词变名词名词80.80.主谓一致主谓一致短文改错分析常见错误：常见错误：主谓一致：主谓一致：have have 改为改为has/hadhas/had不可数名词：不可数名词：landland改为改为landslandsandand前后的并列词：前后的并列词：reducereduce改为改为reducedreduced短文改错分析常见错误：常见错误：toto的用法，动词不定式的用法，动词不定式oror介词：介词：create create 改为改为creatingcreating定语从句的关系词：定语从句的关系词：thatthat改为改为whatwhat介词：介词：添加添加aboutabout词性转换，动词变名词：词性转换，动词变名词：removeremove改为改为removementremovement名词修饰名词：名词修饰名词：environmentenvironment改为改为environmentalenvironmental05书面表达分析书面表达分析 你校将主办主题为celebratingtraditionalChinesefestivals的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括：1.热衷洋节的现象：2.中国传统节日的意义3.呼吁共庆中国传统节日。注意：1.词数100左右：2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。书面表达分析一、文体：演讲稿一、文体：演讲稿首段一定要突出文体首段一定要突出文体是演讲稿。是演讲稿。e.g.e.g.1.It is a great honor to have this opportunity to stand here today to share my speech.2.Hello,everyone.Its a great honor to meet you here today.Im glad to deliver a speech with a title of.书面表达分析这些都是错这些都是错误的打开方误的打开方式呀。式呀。审题还是要审题还是要仔细呀：人仔细呀：人称、时态、称、时态、文体都要先文体都要先审准确审准确书面表达分析二、结构安排要合二、结构安排要合理：一般三段，最理：一般三段，最多四段。多四段。（不能一段论）（不能一段论）首段首段引出演讲话题引出演讲话题中心段中心段写过洋节现写过洋节现象和象和中国传统节日中国传统节日的的意义意义尾段尾段呼吁呼吁共庆中国共庆中国传统节日传统节日。少要点，过洋节现少要点，过洋节现象描述过少象描述过少前后书写不一致前后书写不一致（时间紧张，仓促（时间紧张，仓促写完，注意分配时写完，注意分配时间）间）书面表达分析书面表达分析除了演除了演讲讲稿开稿开头头没写好，本文没毛病，没写好，本文没毛病，表达很流表达很流畅畅。主要主要问题问题：中心段：中心段节节日意日意义义要表达更充分要表达更充分一些。一些。三、中心内容要表达三、中心内容要表达充分，至少写两层意充分，至少写两层意思并写具体，不要泛思并写具体，不要泛泛而谈。泛而谈。书面表达分析本文首段本文首段现象描述现象描述太多了太多了，没有抓住，没有抓住中心内容中心内容主要写意主要写意义。义。书面表达分析写中国传统节日意写中国传统节日意义时，不要列举大义时，不要列举大量的节日例子，写量的节日例子，写节日的庆祝活动，节日的庆祝活动，重点应重点应从整体上说从整体上说明传统节日能给我明传统节日能给我们带来什么，能让们带来什么，能让我们学到什么，能我们学到什么，能让我们做什么让我们做什么书面表达分析四、语言表达：准四、语言表达：准确、地道、流畅、确、地道、流畅、高级，避免小错误。高级，避免小错误。书面表达分析五、书写、卷面五、书写、卷面1.1.大小适中并一致大小适中并一致2.2.段首空一个单词段首空一个单词的距离的距离3.3.左右对齐左右对齐4.4.不要涂抹，可以不要涂抹，可以轻画斜线。轻画斜线。空太多了吧空太多了吧空太多了吧空太多了吧书面表达分析为什么不齐着最左边开始写呢？左右一定要对齐。书面表达分析小到不能再小了，小到不能再小了，你能看清吗？你能看清吗？优秀作文书面表达分析优秀作文书面表达分析优秀作文书面表达分析优秀作文书面表达分析优秀作文书面表达分析审题1.体裁：演讲稿；2.人称：第一人称和第三人称3.时态：一般现在时4.要点：1.2.3.5.结构：三段书面表达分析演讲稿的结构演讲稿的开头I am-,a student from-.Its my great honor to be here and talk about-Its a great honor for me tos have this opportunity to deliver a speech with the title of-演讲稿的结尾From what has been discussed above,we can safely draw a conclusion that-Thats all.Thanks for your attention/listening.书面表达分析演讲稿的结构1.Para1：自我介绍，说明演讲目的2.Para2：介绍热衷洋节的现象；分析中国传统节日的意义3.Para3：呼吁共庆中国传统节日及得体的结尾。书面表达分析范文：范文：Good morning,everyone,Its a great honor for me to have this opportunity to deliver a speech with a title of“celebrating traditional Chinese festivals.In recent years,more and more young people have been crazy about foreign festivals,such as Christmas Day,Thanksgiving Day,April Fools Day,etc.But for Chinese people,traditional Chinese festivals are much more meaningful and educational.Celebrating them can help us learn about Chinese culture behind these festivals.In addition,its our responsibility to pass on the brilliant traditions and rich cultures from one generation to another,among which festivals are more than typical and valuable.To sum up,we can come to the conclusion that we are supposed to take some measures to protect our traditional culture and observe the customs of the major Chinese festivals.Thanks for listening!observe the customs 遵守遵守习俗俗Thanks！