英语人教版八年级下册写作课.ppt

Using an outline to write a topic composition By Qiu MeixianFrom Lizhou Middle School,Yuyao人们是如何在假期放松自人们是如何在假期放松自己的呢？国际健康组织对己的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告调查报告,并提倡大家进并提倡大家进行假日休闲。行假日休闲。travelstay at homevisit friends or parentsworkHow do people relax themselves on their holidays?Background(背景)of writingThe survey result人们是如何在假期放松自人们是如何在假期放松自己的呢？国际健康组织对己的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，此作了一次调查，右图右图是他们此次的调查结果。是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告的调查报告,并提倡大家并提倡大家进行假日休闲。进行假日休闲。Step1 Find out（审）文体文体:_时态时态:_人称人称:_ 信息点：信息点：_A survey reportThe simple present tense(一般现在时一般现在时)The third person(第三人称第三人称)5倡议假日休闲倡议假日休闲 A lot of people travel.（s+v）Some people stay at home.(s+v)Some other people visit friends or parents.(s+v+o)A few people work.(s+v)Lets relax ourselves in the holidays.(s+v+o+oc)a lot of/most ofsomesome othera fewStep2.List out(列列)What do people do to relax themselves on their holidays?We did a survey and here is the result._ _ _ _ 27 words6-8 A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.Lets relax ourselves in the holidays.A lot of people travel.They usually go for a travel with their family.why？how？who？Step3 Add（加）（加）A few people work.They are crazy about work.They think work can give them a sense of achievement（成就感）（成就感）.Some people stay at home.They watch TV or surf the Internet.They can have a good rest.Some other people visit friends or parents.They have big meals together.Lets relax ourselves in the holidays.It will make us healthier!People who relax well work well!What do people do to relax themselves on theirholidays?We did a survey and here is the result.A lot of people travel,they usually go for a holidaywith their family.Some people stay at home,theywatch TV or surf the Internet.They can have a goodrest.Some other people visit friends or parents,theyhave a big dinner together happily.A few people work,they think work can give them a sense of achievement.Lets relax ourselves in the holidays.It will makeus healthier.People who relax well work well.73 words12-14方法一方法一:用不同方式表达句子相似的意思用不同方式表达句子相似的意思 A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.Reading is fun.Reading makes us happy.It is fun to do some reading.A lot of people like to travel.Some people would rather(宁愿宁愿)stay at home.Some other people choose to visit friends or parents.A few people enjoy working.Step4 Beautify（美）（美）方法二方法二:单句不如复句妙单句不如复句妙A few people would rather(宁愿宁愿)work during the holiday.They think work can give them a sense of achievement(成就感成就感).A few people would rather work during the holiday,because they think work can give them a sense of achievement.方法三方法三:多句不如合并好多句不如合并好多句不如合并好多句不如合并好Some people would rather stay at home.They watch TV or surf the Internet.They can have a good rest.Some people would rather stay at home to watch TV or surf the Internet so that they can have a good rest.What do people do to relax themselves on their holidays?We did a survey and here is the result.According to the survey,a lot of people like to travel,they usually go for a holiday with their family.But some people would rather stay at home to watch TV or surf the Internet so that they can have a good rest.Also,some other people choose to visit friends or parents,because they have a big dinner party together.However,a few people enjoy working because they think work can give them a sense of achievement.Lets relax ourselves in the holidays.It will make us healthier.People who relax well work well.15-17添加连接词添加连接词-linking words-linking wordsStep5 Connect（连）（连）What do people do to relax themselves on their holidays?We did a survey and here is the result.According to the survey,a lot of people like to travel so much that they usually go for a travel with their family onholidays.But some people would rather stay at home to watch TV or surf the Internet so that they can have a good rest.Also,some other people choose to visit friends or parents,because they have a big dinner party together.However,a few people enjoy working because they thinkworking can give them a sense of achievement.Its necessary for everyone to have a holiday.Lets relax ourselves in the holidays.It will make us healthier.As thesaying goes:People who relax well work well.18-19110 words固定句型来添彩Step6 Copy（抄）（抄）What do people do to relax themselves on their holidays?We did a survey and here is the result._ _ _ _ _ _ _ According to the survey,a lot of people liketo travel,they usually go for a holiday with theirfamily.But some people would rather stay athome to watch TV or surf the Internet so thatthey can have a good rest.Also,some otherpeople choose to visit friends or parents,because they have a big dinner party together._ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ However,a few people enjoy working because they think working can give them a sense of achievement.Its necessary for everyone to have a holiday.Lets relax ourselves in the holidays.It will make us healthier.As the saying goes:People who relax well work well.20Congratulations!What do people do to relax themselves on their holidays?We did a surveyand here is the result.According to the survey,a lot of people like to travel so much that theyusually go for a travel with their family on holidays.But some people wouldrather stay at home to watch TV or surf the Internet so that they can have agood rest.Also,some other people choose to visit friends or parents,becausethey have a big dinner party together.However,a few people enjoy working.They think working can give them a sense of achievement.Its necessary for everyone to have a holiday.Lets relax ourselves in theholidays.As the saying goes:People who relax well work well.BeginningMain partEndingAn outline Beginning(Background)Main partEndingA lot of peopleSome peopleA few peopleWriting material（写作材料）（写作材料）:学生需要做家务吗？针对此问题，某校对500名学生做了一项调查。请根据下面的调查结果写一篇报告。100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。提示词提示词：develop ones independence,understand the idea of fairness,know how hard their parents are,its ones duty/job to,enough stress,a waste of Is it necessary for students to do the housework at home?We did a survey about this and here is the result.审审文体文体:_时态时态:_人称人称:_信息点：信息点：_A survey reportThe simple present tense(一般现在时一般现在时)The third and first person(第一人称来第一人称来表达自己的观点表达自己的观点)7Should students do chores at homePros:help to develop their independencehelp to understand the idea of fairness;help to know how hard their parents areCons:their duty is to study hard,not to do chores;have enough stress from school;there is no time to waste for chores;it is the parents jobMy opinion:I think we students should spend some time on the housework,列列加加and learn how to look after themselves;to provide a clean and comfortable environment at home for their childrenno matter how busy we areAn outline【佳作欣赏】【佳作欣赏】Is it necessary for students to do the housework at home?We did a survey about this and here is the result.to develop their independence and learn how to look after themselves.to understand the idea of fairness.,it helps to know how hard their parents are.,think it is unnecessary for students to do the housework.They think it is the parents job to provide a clean and comfortable environment at home for their children.As students,their duty is to study hard,not to do chores.,they have enough stress from school,so there is no time to waste for chores.In my opinion,I think we students should spend some time on the housework,no matter how busy we are.美美 thirty percent of the studentsagree to do chores at home.They think it can help It helps themmost of the studentsAccording to the result,alsoWhats moreOn the other handBesides连连 Is it necessary for students to do the housework at home?We did a survey about this and here is the result._ _ _ 抄抄Your turn to go for it!五一节（五一节（May DayMay Day）就要到了，请按照下图的提示写就要到了，请按照下图的提示写出你的五一假期计划，并号召大家合理的安排自己的出你的五一假期计划，并号召大家合理的安排自己的假期。假期。文体文体:_时态时态:_人称人称:_信息点：信息点：Homework_ _ _Using an outline to help you to write a topic composition(on paper)Copy it carefully and beautifullyRome wasnt built in a day!（罗马不是一日建成）BestWritingBetterGoodLinking words 1.时间顺序:first,(first of all),second,third,next,after that,thenfinally,(last but not least)2.空间顺序：here,there,next to,in front of 3.转折顺序：but,however,though4.对称顺序：on the one hand,on the other hand5.因果顺序：because,as,thanks to,as a result6.递进顺序：whats more,besides,also7.条件：if，unless8.总结：in short,in a word,all in all,for these reasons9.插入语：According to,I think,Im afraid,you know,as we all know