(精品)高考写作1.ppt

Welcome to Writing worldByTinaSelf-introductionMyname中文名：陈哲Englishname:TinaMymajortranslationMyhobbiesReadingbooksEnglishpoem泰戈尔：爱情诗Stray Birds 飞鸟集飞鸟集Ifyoushedtearswhenyoumissthesun,youllalsomissthestars.如果你因失去了太阳而流泪，那么你也将失去群星了。Letlifebebeautifullikesummerflowersanddeathlikeautumnleaves.使生如夏花之绚烂，死如秋叶之静美。MyhobbiesMusic:YannieSecretgardenWestlifeSeasonsinthesun再见了,我忠实的朋友.我们从孩提时就已相识,相知.我们一起爬山,爬树.Goodbyetoyoumytrustedfriends.WeveknowneachothersincewewerenineortenTogetherweveclimbedhillsandtreesthelyrics写作学习方法1.永远不要忽略背诵的作用。西班牙语2.与母语语法进行对比3.与日常英语相结合，灵活变通Makeittwo.Part 1 高考写作简介高考写作简介最新英语教学大纲对写作的要求最新英语教学大纲对写作的要求2010年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试大纲(英语)要求考生根据题示进行书面表达。考生应能：（1）准确使用语法和词汇；（2）使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思。（3）能用书写体清楚地书写，格式、拼写、标点等正确；（4）能写简单的书信、便条和通知，填写简单的个人履历表，会写记叙文、说明、议论文等。要求在书写格式、行文及礼貌用语等方面明显无错误；（5）能用书面形式造句，在有提示词语的条件下，能写80-120个单词的短文。在基本语法和常用句型等方面无明显错误，意思表达清楚。2007年高考全国卷年高考全国卷书面表达书面表达(满分满分25分分)真题再现（应用文）假定你是李华，希望通过外籍教师Peter找一个英语笔友。请写一封短信，描述一下你理想中笔友的条件，并说明为什么选这样的笔友。具体条件包括：1.年龄；2.性别；3.爱好（旅游、运动、宠物等）。注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当（必须）增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头语已为你写好（不计入总字数）。DearPeter,Iamwritingtoaskwhetheryouareabletodomeafavor._Bestregards,LiHua1、审题1.时态一般现在时和一般将来时2.人称第一人称3.分段意识要点包括开头语写信目的及描述理想笔友的条件、选择这种朋友的理由结尾用语4.补充细节思考理想中的笔友什么样？年龄，性别，爱好年龄与我相仿，同性，爱好旅游、运动、养宠物等；为什么选择这样的笔友？1、有共同语言，可以沟通交流相互的旅游经历等；2、期望可以通过写信提高英语；补充什么样的细节？最好是与众不同的、用词在能力范围之内的、合乎逻辑的2、词汇思考外籍教师foreignteacher,ateacherfromaforeigncountry笔友penfriend,penpal,理想中的ideal不要犯错误!技巧一：转义合适的proper,suitable,appropriate,perfect条件requirements,factor技巧二:从词到句型IwishtofindasuitablefriendlikethisThisiswhatIthinkmypenfriendislike爱好宠物hobby,pet,keeping/raisingpets3、连词成句Imwritingtoaskwhetheryouareabletodomeafavor.1.我想找一位跟我年龄相仿的笔友，你能帮忙找一个吗？Idliketohaveapenfriendofmyage,andcanyoukindlyfindoneforme,please?Idlikeyoutofindapenfriendofmyageforme,please.2.我希望她是一个女孩并且跟我有相似的兴趣爱好，例如喜欢旅行和做运动等。Hopefully,shellbeagirlhavingsimilarinterestswithme,suchastraveling,doingsportsetc.Inmymind,sheissomeonewhoisinterestedintravelinganddoingsports.3.另外，我还希望她也喜欢养宠物，因为这也是我的爱好之一。Whatsmore,itllbebetterifsheiskeenonkeepingpets,forIlovecuteanimalsverymuch.4.同时，我认为，我们也可以一起分享旅游的经历或是任何我们共同感兴趣的东西。AndIbelieve,wecansharewitheachotherourtravelingexperiencesorwhateverwehaveincommon.这样，我可以改进我的英语水平，同时可以了解更多关于他们国家的情况。Ofcourse,IllimprovemyEnglishbydoingsoandlearnmoreabouthercountry.期盼你的来信并祝你一切如意。Ilookforwardtohearingfromyouandallthebest!满分作文DearPeter,Imwritingtoaskwhetheryouareabletodomeafavor.Idliketohaveapenfriendofmyage,andcanyoukindlyfindoneforme,please?Hopefully,shellbeagirlhavingsimilarinterestswithme,suchastraveling,doingsports.Whatsmore,itllbebetterifsheiskeenonkeepingpets,forIlovecuteanimalsverymuch.（条件）Thus,wellhavealotincommon.（过渡句）AndIbelieve,wecansharewitheachotherourtravelingexperiences.Thiswillbegreatfun.Ofcourse,IllimprovemyEnglishbydoingsoandlearnmoreabouthercountry.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyou.BestRegards,LiHua2006年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试卷书面表达假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信。内容应包括：1.个人情况：年龄，性别，学历2.个人条件：英语好，爱好体育，善于交际，乐于助人，熟悉本地情况3.承诺：提供最佳服务注意：词数100左右，开头语已为你写好可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯生词：申请apply(v.),application(n.)志愿者volunteerDearSir/Madam:MynameisLihua.IwouldliketoworkasavolunteerfortheWinterAsianGames._内容要点内容要点1.年龄、性别2.学历及英语水平3.爱好体育、熟悉本地4.善于交往、乐于助人5.承诺6.合适的结尾【同学范文1】DearSirorMadam,MynameisLihua.IwouldliketoworkasavolunteerfortheWinterAsianGames.Iaman18girl.Asalocalpeople,IknowtheroadsandBuildingsveryclear.Ilikesportsverymuch.Byseveralyearstraining,Iamalmostgoodateverysports.NowIamastudent.Inschool,myEnglishisgood,IamalsoaKindgirl.WhenIknowsomeoneisindifficulty,Iwillgivehimorhertodefeatit.TheGameswillbeheldinthecitywhereIamlive.Iwouldliketoavolunteer,ifthedreamcomestrue,Iwilltrymybesttoimprovethelevelofmyservice.Asavolunteerismygloary.IwishIcanbecomeone.Bestwishesforyou.第一档（很差）1-6分1.基本语法错误太多2.结构混乱3.要点介绍不全4.句子之间缺乏连接【同学范文2】DearSirorMadam,MynameisLihua.IwouldliketoworkasavolunteerfortheWinterAsianGames.Iama17yearsoldgirl.AndIamasenior2studentsinNO.1SeniorSchoolof.MyEnglishisgoodandIamgoodatPE.Iliketodothingsforothers.BecauseIthinkhelpingothersishelpingmyself.Whensomeonehasdifficultindoingthings,Iamalwaysreadytohelphim.AndIliketocommunicationisthebridgeoftheworld.Becausetheworldisabigfamily.IhearthattheGameswillbeheldinthisplacewhereIlives.Ihopetobeavolunteer.Becausebythis,Icanleanabouttheworldandtakeexercise.IcanprovidethebestservicefortheGames.Iknowthesituationhere.IbelieveIcandowell.第二档（较差）7-12分点评：要点安排混乱，部分要点理解错误；拼写、语法错误较多，部分句型结构有问题【同学范文3】DearSirorMadam,MynameisLihua.IwouldliketoworkasavolunteerfortheWinterAsianGames.Iamabraveboyof16yearsold.IcanspeakEnglishfluently.Besides,Idowellingettingonwell(用词重复)withotherstudents.Iamgladtohelpothers.Iknowallinterestingplaceshere.IfIbecomeamemberofvolunteers,Iwilltrymybesttointroducemyhometowntovisitors.IwilltakethemtotasteallkindsoffoodandletthemknowourChineseculture.Iamsurethatnoneofthemwouldleavefeelingdisappointed.（这部分不错）Ontheotherhand,IwishtheGameshadahappyend.Iapplyforbeingavolunteer,Ihopeyoucanallowmetobeavolunteer.Iwilldowellinitanditandtrymybesttowork.Thankyou.第三档（适当）13-18分点评：缺少部分要点，如爱好体育、熟悉本地、善于交往、乐于助人等；承诺部分比较精彩【同学范文4】DearSirorMadam,MynameisLihua,IwouldliketoworkasavolunteerfortheWinterAcianGames.Iamawarm-heartedboyof17,whoisstillstudyinginMiddleSchool.Iwanttobeamemberofthem.EnglishiswhatIamgoodat,aswellassports.Ihavenodifficultyincommunicatingwithforeigner,becauseIcanspeakEnglishfluentlyanddowellincommunication.Itismydutytohelpothersandasalocalone,Iknowquitewellaboutourdistrict.IfIamavolunteer,Iwilltrymybesttoserveothers.Forme,avolunteerisnotonlyagloriousjob,butagoodwaytogetclosetosports.IfIcanbeoneofthemembers,Iwillbeveryhappyandhonorable.Pleaseacceptmyapplicationforbeingavolunteer,andIhavebeenreadytomakecontributiontotheGames.第四档（好）19-24分点评：能通过使用多变的句式和高级的词组增强文章表现力，英语功底比较扎实。【同学范文5】MynameisLiHua.IwouldliketoworkasavolunteerfortheWinterAsianGames.Imaboyof17yearsoldandrightnowImstudyingintheNo.2SeniorHighSchool.ThereareseveralreasonswhyIwanttoapply.Firstofall,ItakegreatinterestinsportsanddowellinEnglish,especiallyspokenEnglish.Thiscanhelpmecommunicatewithforeignerssmoothly.Secondly,Imveryfamiliarwithourcity.Anditsquiteeasyformetoshowthewaytostrangers.Mostimportantofall,Iliketomakefriendswithpeopleandtrymybesttohelpthem.IfIcanbecomeavolunteer,IpromisethatIllprovidethebestservicewithforeignguests.AndIwilldoagoodjob.第五档（很好）25-30分结构安排合理；内容非常连贯；用词准确，能用到一定复杂语法结构。