高中英语写作书面表达公开课课件.ppt

Because I speak English well,and I like doing sports very much,I will be a good volunteer for the Games.I often do sports if I have time.I know the local conditions wellWith the great fluency in English and the burning passion for sports,I am qualified to be a volunteer for the Games.Besides,I am keen on sports and I exercise a lot in my spare timeBecauseIspeakEnglishwellandIlikedoingsportsverymuch,IwillbeagoodvolunteerfortheGames.IoftendosportsifIhavetime.Iknowthelocalconditionswell.IthinkIwillgivethebestservicetoeveryoneintheGames.WiththegreatfluencyinEnglishandtheburningpassionforsports,IamqualifiedtobeavolunteerfortheGames.Besides,IamkeenonsportsandIexercisealotinmysparetime.Whatsmore,Iamfamiliarwiththelocalconditions.SoIpromiseIwillofferthebestservicetowhoeverparticipatesintheGames.Because I speak English well,and I like doing sports very much,I will be a good volunteer for the Games.I often do sports if I have time.I know the local conditions wellWith the great fluency in English and the burning passion for sports,I am qualified to be a volunteer for the Games.Besides,I am keen on sports and I exercise a lot in my spare timeWhatmakesagoodparagraph?BecauseIspeakEnglishwell,andIlikedoingsportsverymuch,WiththegreatfluencyinEnglishandtheburningpassionforsports,IwillbeagoodvolunteerfortheGames.IoftendosportsifIhavetime.Iknowthelocalconditionswell.IthinkIwillgivethebestservicetoeveryoneintheGames.IamqualifiedtobeavolunteerfortheGames.Besides,IamkeenonsportsandIexercisealotinmysparetime.Whatsmore,Iamfamiliarwiththelocalconditions.SoIpromiseIwillofferthebestservicetowhoeverparticipatesintheGames.时间先后时间先后first,then,later,intheend,eventually,sincethen,afterawhile转折关系转折关系but,however,onthecontrary,nevertheless,因果关系因果关系because,since,as,thanksto,owingto,asaresultof,forthereasonthat让步关系让步关系though,although,evenif,eventhough,inspiteof,despite,as,whilecause-effect concession transitiontime递进关系递进关系whatsmore,inaddition,furthermoreontheonehandontheotherhand条件关系条件关系if,unless,aslongas,onconditionthat,provided,suppose,incase表表列列举举forexample/instance,takeforexample,thatstosay,inotherwords表表总总结结inshort,inbrief,inconclusion,inaword,onthewhole,ashasbeenstatedprogress conditionsparticularizeconclusionA good paragraph is one with varied sentence patterns.丰富的句式：丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构）常用到的句型结构）利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采。e.g.Whatakindboy he is!Howdisappointed he was!感叹句感叹句exclamatory sentence强调句强调句emphasise.g.It wasthisyoungboythathelpedtheoldgranny.Idohopeyoucancomeifpossible.e.g.Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem.There comesthepolicecar.Hardlyhadtheygottothestationwhen theymettheyoungman.e.g.Theyreadwhilewalkingorridingonabus.Cometomeifnecessary.倒装句倒装句 inversion省略句省略句 ellipticale.g.In my opinion,that room should be a place wherewecan findmuchusefulinformation.Lets come to the main teaching building,atthebackofwhichstandstheschoollibrary.定语定语 从句从句attributive clausee.g.I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.With复合复合结构结构e.g.Themomentwereachedthefarm,wegotdowntoharvesting.Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit.Solongasweworkharderatourlessons,wellcatchupsoonerorlater.状状语语从从句句名词性名词性从从 句句 noun clause e.g.ThatswhatIshoulddo.Weshoulddoafavourtowhoeverneedshelpatpresent.6.I passed the physics exam because of your help.5.If you study hard,you will make rapid progress.1.Though Im weak,Ill make the effort.2.We all think he is a great man.7.To his surprise,the little girl knows so many things.3.I wont believe what he says.4.I like English best at school.summaryA good paragraph is one that contains proper linking words.A good paragraph is one with advanced vocabulary and varied sentence patterns.A good paragraph is one that usually consists of a topic sentence and supporting sentences.DoIuseanylinkingwords?Arethereanymistakes?Isthereanyadvancedvocabulary?Arethereanygoodsentencepatterns?DoIavoidusingChinglish?最近，国家教育部要求中小学最近，国家教育部要求中小学生参加冬季长跑活动：建议小学生生参加冬季长跑活动：建议小学生每天跑每天跑10001000米，初中生米，初中生15001500米，高米，高中生中生20002000米。对此，有些人表示支米。对此，有些人表示支持，有些人表示反对。请你根据以持，有些人表示反对。请你根据以下材料，写一篇以下材料，写一篇以“Should we Should we give more attention to give more attention to studentsstudents health or grades?health or grades?”为题的短文，谈谈你的看法。为题的短文，谈谈你的看法。支持方支持方的理由的理由 反对方反对方的理由的理由 你的看法你的看法及理由及理由 1 1可以促进对可以促进对体育的重视；体育的重视；2 2可以增强学可以增强学生的体魄；生的体魄；3 3更有利于提更有利于提高学习效率。高学习效率。1 1学生以学习为学生以学习为主，考试成绩决主，考试成绩决定个人前途；定个人前途；2 2过高的要求学过高的要求学生难以达到；生难以达到；3 3长跑可能引起长跑可能引起感冒或伤害。感冒或伤害。(考生自行考生自行发挥发挥2323点点)注意：注意：1 1任选内容写成一个段落，或是写整篇文章。任选内容写成一个段落，或是写整篇文章。2 2对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥。对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥。